A very well written and "powerful" character!! If you were going for "disturbing", you have succeeded! True madness revealed.
In a movie, she would be played by Sheri Moon Zombie!!!!
ok, i'll ask. What in the world is that rectangle in the middle of the sub?
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another Plothook: Against all the odds, Mad Alice is somehow capture by authorities. The clowns go ballistic, and plan on springing her via an all-out assault on the precinct (she has not been incarcerated quite yet). The PCs are guarding the precinct. One of the other officers on duty is really one of the clowns, or on their payroll. Goal: Survive the night, do NOT let Mad Alice escape.
The Hanseatic League on steroids :)
Some really interesting and original names for the guilds too, which is cool. I like this, there is some originality here, despite the familiar refrains. Could use another edit, as it is slightly rough around the edges as Gossamer mentions.
The first plothook of course is quite fitting. The PCs become in essence campaign managers, bodyguards, civic-planners, etc...and have to deal with the countless machinations of the guilds. Nice city-campaign scenario! And who knows, if the PCs manage the impossible, it would be an interesting follow-up campaign with one of the PCs becoming the True Saviour King...now what? :-)
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"Here, no one yells; “Thief!” with any expectation of action." That line made me pause to chuckle.