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30 More Pirates
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2015-04-26 09:03 PM
What Cheka said!

A pirate for every class is a fun twist. I'll try to add a few. Go to Comment
30 Barbarians
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2015-04-26 08:52 PM

This grew on me the more I read. Lovable bunch! Love the this one likes that one and that one fears this one stuff. Makes them come alive and feel real. The names based on traits/personalities is a nice touch as well.

I get a bit of a Black Company vibe too.

Zerk is Hulk! Bones is Rattleshirt (GoT)! And you have to love gramps!

I have to ask though, why is Rock the secret laughing stock of the group? We're not offered a clue as to why.

Great job!

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Circlet of Cerberus
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2015-03-10 12:55 AM
I really like how you weaved (wove? woven?) greek myth and mermen. Seamless. Good read, and nicely balanced item. Go to Comment
Ballad of the Malconvoker
Locations  (Area)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-25 07:52 PM

Nice twist, nice poem, and nice add-on explaining the options!

Have random questions on the fascinating wording...

1. "The clergy unable reconcile" there's no "to" between unable and reconcile on purpose right? 2. "Her infernal servant fond" what is meant by fond here?

I don't care about grammar, vocabulary and spelling, I'm just asking because I like the style.

Anyway, good job!

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Downington Sphere
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-22 07:19 PM
This was a fun read!! Not sure how to explain why, I guess it's all the somehow fitting names for things, the lingo and nuance. Oh yeah, and the bizarre space lifeforms! Go to Comment
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2012-02-15 12:30 PM



Once you're done with the foundation, brainstorming, format and logistics, I'd like to PLAY this game! :)


And once youre done with this, please consider...Thundercats, He-Man, Space Ghost, etc

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Queen Llaewyn Reborn
Plots  (Event)   (Multi-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-11 10:55 AM

I was just going to add, some nice use of prose in this piece! I like the campaign thoughts as well. And welcome Isharii!!

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Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-07 10:06 AM

Wow, fancy writing!! The opening grabbed hold of me and wouldn't let go. Going to read this again with floyd's waiting for the worms softly playing in the background

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Slang and Jargon Beneath the Waves: The Big Under
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-26 02:27 PM
This is pretty darn impressive axle!! Love the slang etymology explainers! Strong shades of Burgess' Nadsat. Go to Comment
Xue Ren (Snow/Blood Blade Edge)
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-05 01:08 PM

Reads like a nice Wuxia plot, and a likable assassin :)

The deviant art link no worky.

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The First of Cities
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-05 01:39 PM
Good world tale, nice amount of detail. I enjoyed it. And what LW said, too! Go to Comment
The Tale of Solomon Soulhammer Pt. I
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-02 10:45 PM

Well this is nice. Well-written, concise, and consistent greco-roman "Namery" (new word, means same-sounding naming). Looking forward to part II, in which I'm guessing, Solomon goes on to do something epic.

And bless you for splitting this into parts. Wise.

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Apocalyptic Vampires
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-18 11:07 PM
What madness this? :P Go to Comment
Castle Kaukenn
Dungeons  (Other)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Murometz's comment on 2012-03-10 07:20 PM

In the old forest that Kaukenn was originally built under, such a pattern acted as simple camouflage among the sun-dappled shadows thrown by towering trees. Each marble block holds an enchantment subtly enhancing that effect, causing the veins to undulate slowly in a breeze or the colors to darken or lighten to match the ambient light.

A deceptively simple yet evocative detail!

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The Elder Crow of the Tarlathii
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-05 01:15 PM
Yay an AG return!

Moody and atmospheric. The "where" part was my favorite. Elder shadows biding their time beneath the rust-colored leaves of certain trees. Conjures nice visuals!

I also think the merchant is the most interesting of the three.

Great addition to the Coldforged mythos. Go to Comment
Mark Greaves, Assassin Hobo
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-03 05:02 PM
Creepy good!! It reeks of the "real" because this guy is scarier than ten fancy, flowery assassins put together.

I picture his mind ravaged over time. Maybe he slowly turns from assassin to wanton murderer. He shares a train with some other destitute hobo, and just kills him, because he can. And enjoys himself. Dumps the body from the train. Never makes the police reports. No one cares about a dead hobo on the side of the tracks. Mark moves on to the next town.

Well done, Myst! Go to Comment
Mark Greaves, Assassin Hobo
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-03 05:06 PM

Hmm one more thought. This guy is scarier without the "fey" angle to me. Why can't he just be a true human monster, like hh holmes or gacy or someone like that. Maybe he was just a curse-less hobo.

Great character.

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Freya, Assassin
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-02 12:19 PM
Can't think of what to add. Nice characterization here. Well done! Go to Comment
Artan Keybreaker
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-04 04:42 PM
I second that Viednavak is a fun concept here!! Interesting dwarven "thing". Go to Comment
Buluc, death priest of Rope Woman
NPCs  (Minor)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-09 11:21 AM

The title alone is already evocative! And wow, what a great 500 word condensation of rich material! Love this cult. Like a twisted version of Thuggees with shades of Kevorkian.

Rope Woman!!!

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Costume of the Southern Folk

       By: Wulfhere

According to the Journals of Lord Goidol, the people of the Southern Cities wear heavy coats all the year round, despite the stifling tropical heat. They claim that to do otherwise angers the gods, and it is true that visitors who refuse to don the local garb are often struck down with a paralytic fever.

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