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The Saulberry
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2013-01-12 12:44 PM
This is well imagined and written. Go to Comment
AgroGnomes of Beta Arconis
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-01-12 12:51 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
AgroGnomes of Beta Arconis
Locations  (World)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-03-13 04:53 PM
space gnomes...and...elephants Go to Comment
Candenheim
Locations  (City)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Murometz's comment on 2013-01-12 12:50 PM
This was a joy to read! Plus what they all said. Go to Comment
The Maritime Bank of Martinesse
Systems  (Mercantile)   (Historical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-20 12:42 PM
A wonderfully clever and simple idea with instant usability. Well done! Go to Comment
The Djavarga
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 08:46 AM
Nice. You should make a whole codex of these! Crawling Mountains?! Must know more! Makes me wonder if they actually have crawling mountains, or if this is an embellished, re-interpretation written by someone who has never seen or met one of these desert dwarves. So again, i get that medieval (clueless but evocative) guide to the world's hidden corners vibe. Go to Comment
The Djavarga
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 01:30 PM
I'm picturing huge, gray-brown, nomadic tents that look "rocky", embellished a thousand-fold by some Marco Polo type, who never quite made it to this part of the Burning Lands, but was close, and wrote down legends he heard, from those that have seen the "crawling mountains". :) Go to Comment
The Strange People of Khor Kal'ah
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 08:43 AM
This is a bit different. I like it because it reminds me of those bizarre, medieval guides on the exotic creatures and inhabitants of the world's unknown corners. Like the dog-headed people, or the folk with heads in their torsos, bees being born in ox carcasses, antelopes identified as unicorns, and all that. The drinking their own urine part did it. Go to Comment
The Strange People of Khor Kal'ah
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 09:46 AM
Yeah, but already mentioned them in a text last night :) The lady-bits are exotic and out there! And of course cry-out for further explanation.
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The Strange People of Khor Kal'ah
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Desert)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 02:37 PM
Interesting. Are they in essence the same? A stub and a 100-word sub? Go to Comment
The Way of Divine Wealth
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-12 08:56 AM
This is probably the best described and presented wealth-religion idea I've ever seen. From the Divine Broker to the Ordinance to the High Exchange in Qurai to the Bursar's Houses, and everything in between. Splendid, rich, evocative! Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-12 03:28 PM
I would use this in a heartbeat too! And inject it with more daoisms.
Its got everything I love in an adventure...monasteries, under-water treasure, monks, chains, bloated corpses :D

But seriously, a nice tight little plot!
Great work, Myst! Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 02:40 PM
yeah, would have been more difficult if i went with: chair, battery, elephant, osmosis, gnome, and laser. :P Go to Comment
The Redheaded Corpse
Plots  (Event)   (Single-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-13 03:23 PM
Wow. Love it. Go to Comment
Art of the weilder
Systems  (Combat/ Warfare)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2012-12-04 12:21 PM
Reminds me of Jedi. I can see axle's point in replacing age ranges with something more character-oriented, but I kind of like that approach...

Besides, if GoT has taught us anything its that kids are dangerous :) So much so in fact that I wouldn't mind playing a puberty-experiencing, angst-ridden, wide-eyed, adventure-hungry 13-14 year old Weilder prodigy, or use one as an NPC, who the PCs will most likely underestimate.

I'm curious as to the spellings. Weilder and Waren are spelled this way purposely, yes?

And since I think this is your first sub, let me give you my patented, "Welcome, Chaoticwaffle!". Good first sub! Go to Comment
Non-Euclidean Architecture: Part 2
Systems  (Architectural)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-29 11:01 PM
*brain oozes out of ear*

But Mmm-mm good!! I mean i need these 2 primers with me at all times.

I'm not smart enough to come up with points of contention. Groovy!! Go to Comment
Hagula
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 02:18 PM
iBasically a humanoid hagfish vampire. I don't think anyone's made quite that combination before, so kudos to you./i


I beg to differ.The eel-man, hagfish-man, remorah-man has been done ad nauseaum.

However, the details in this one are really good! (churlfish, honorable egg, manatee farms, flesh is putty in their hands, etc)

I second val's comment too. Once I saw "America" i immediately thought, "Wait, what? Wow, cool!"
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Corpsemaker
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 02:04 PM
The Corpsemaker's "cry" adds a nice shiver and the worm is suitably gruesome for my tastes. I couldn't help but to also think of the vile and disturbing movie, "Centipede" as I read the creature's description.

Great add to the Gallery of Undeath! Go to Comment
Duty Shrines
Items  (Tools)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 01:52 PM
Wow. Novel! For some reason my first thought upon reading this was, Doomsday Seed Vault meets Mr. Miyagi meets ancient telepathic relic meets, well meets one other thing or other :)

So many ways to go with these! The plot-hooks multiply in my brain. Go to Comment
The Glenbeard Tunnels
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Underground)
Murometz's comment on 2012-11-28 01:46 PM
I agree with Shadoweagle and Strolen, the tale is interesting and full of dwarven psychology and a "can-do" bearded spirit and is the meat of the sub. However, I do find the idea of a dwarven subway and magnetism, stimulating to ponder as well!


The fact that this is not "slanted" toward an automatic steampunk-ish vibe, instead sticking to "fantasy", is also quite interesting!

There was an ooold Dungeon Magazine(tm) adventure involving something similar (dwarven train system) with a load of dwarven politics thrown in. This reminds me of that in a good way!! Go to Comment
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