I love the idea that is shining through here, but I do find myself asking similar questions to the ones Dossta and axle are asking. +1 for the dwarvy "feel"of the item. I can see these beds as part of an overall dwarven "canon". Go to Comment
"(stream videos of prior rioter's fates, in full HD!)"
"Instead of a cop with a bullhorn, each shield flickers between warning imagery, stay back, desist and disperse and talking heads extolling the virtue of going away peacefully followed by a litany of offenses that will be incurred if protestors or rioters persist. All I can see is the thin face of Grand Moff Tarken on a cycle: go home, your govt cares about you, resistors will be shot"
Join the Dwarven Guild in the forums, and I will begin to share their secrets with you! But only if you join the Guild :-)
Hmm, I dunno, no matter how many times, i say aloud, "Dwarves breed cats as well, though only this one breed did i come across in my stay with the bearded-brothers", it still sounds good to me in that fantasy/medieval-ish way. Then again, i twist language to suit me, so you're probably right. Go to Comment
Interesting. So you're poking fun at those Nigerian Bank emails we all get? I'll have you know, that no less than a "prince" from Lagos, has offered me $16,000,000 euros if I simply first "lend him" $500 for bank transfer fees. You see, he is a political prisoner, and.... Go to Comment
His key-beard of unlocking is pure gold!! Can picture him walking up to an intricate triple-locked door. His hanging whiskers animate and dive into two key-holes like moray eels, squirming around. His beard meanwhile, (i picture it golden-blonde for some reason), contorts itself into a bizarre key-like form and enters the third key-hole. His eyes roll back into his head....clack, clack, click.
Simply the concept of twisting the phoenix/bennu bird into its dark-winged opposite is a magnificent one! A true cosmic horror!
I'm slightly less crazy about its name. It seems modern-ish, for such a legendary being..."murder"? For my tastes, even "Deathblaze" for example, seems more epic, dunno. I feel this avian darkness deserves a more epic name.
Would love to see a bit more on the creature too. What else does it do? Where does it go, why does it go there, some character interaction of some sort. Some further legends or anecdotal horror.