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Adam Smith
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-21 05:46 PM
Wow, so he's not the Father of Modern Economics I was expecting :-)

Do expand the tale at some point. Somewhat reminiscent of that Kevin Spacey character in "Se7en" Go to Comment
Adam Smith
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-22 01:54 AM
Its axle. He doesn't just comment, he comments with commitment :) Go to Comment
Avian Crossbow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-15 11:49 AM
What Forganthus said. The arrows are a lot of fun. Go to Comment
30 Things to Run or Hide From
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Murometz's comment on 2012-06-26 09:10 PM

19. Bad GMs 20. Bad Players 21. 1st & 2nd e Tarrasques 22. Nuclear reactors during earthquakes

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30 Things to Run or Hide From
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-14 12:06 PM

Love the scroll, many of the entries, and the fact that it is a strolenati collab, but one nagging thought on the linked subs... draconian parasites (love that sub btw!), hellgate prison, the black spear, Ma-O?? These seem just like random adds, in which case, you can attach 90% of the site's subs to this, since you can technically run away from many, many, many things. Love the sub and concept, don't get me wrong, but the linkage seems arbitrary and cheapens the sub somehow, not to mention the semantics involved. Can you technically "run away" or "hide" from a prison? a spear? a god? To me, run away and hide implies that there is some kind of pursuit involved, for example.

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Ko Girls
Society/ Organizations  (Artistic/Performance)   (Area)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-12 08:51 PM

Gangster fashionistas. Very Japanese of you. And sexy! Love the skirt/stocking rank structure. The Ko Girls strike a nice balance between the banal and the "dangerous". I assume they are underestimated by other/rival gangs, much to those other gangs later regret at doing so.


Is there any meaning or significance behind the word "Ko"?

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Catbooks
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-12 08:31 PM
Terrific idea! Fun to read, witty and clever. Wish I thought of it and can't wait to use this somehow. The what happens when they breed comment by val sent me down a whole new wormhole of thought, and I wasn't even done thinking about the initial concept yet. This is a fascinating sub! Go to Comment
Anophelite, Male
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-14 08:44 PM
I've always had a perverse fascination with mansquitos. Juicy info! Thank you. Go to Comment
The Electric Chapel
Locations  (Establishment)   (CyberSpace)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-15 12:46 PM
Wow.

I see the Gibson, but I also get a "Strange Days" flavor and an aroma of Pynchon. I don't even think of this as "futuristic", as much as a mirror on the "current" (yet post-modern)

"Readers who think that SF is 'about' the future are naive," Gibson reminds us. "I don't think science fiction has a lot of predictive capacity, but it's an interesting tool for looking at the world you live in." Go to Comment
The River of Sorrow
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-14 02:15 PM
Wow. Just awesome. Fascinating concept and very well written!

"there is a river that flows between the membranes of our realities" could be the first sentence of a great book!

have my first 5 since the winter of 2012 :) Go to Comment
New to Strolen's Citadel
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-15 12:21 PM
Great one!!

According to the chart, a 5 vote says, "Excellent Submission. Extremely usable(!), well written and organized.

I guess I will give this a 5. Go to Comment
Your First Submission
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-15 12:18 PM
Oh, I missed this series of subs somehow. Good work Strolen! There will never come a time when this sub and its relatives, are not useful to our community. Go to Comment
The Iron Ghost
NPCs  (Major)   (Mercantile)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-14 08:56 PM
DESTRO!!!!!!!! Go to Comment
Kyle DiGlado
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-14 02:17 PM
good npc. Solid, gritty (as mentioned), and believable. I know a guy like this. Go to Comment
The Streets of Baisaltir
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2013-01-15 05:14 PM
Really like the format used here! Go to Comment
The Hellephant
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-20 12:01 PM
A worthy Behemoth! Great visual. Nice touches on the origin and its hellebabies! Go to Comment
10 Chance Meetings
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Encounter)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-14 11:54 AM
A nice twist on plot hooks. Some philosophers will tell you that there is no such thing as a "chance" meeting or encounter, but that is neither here nor there :) Go to Comment
30 Joes
NPCs  (Extras)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2013-01-25 10:20 AM
Brings back fond memories for me of playing with my GI Joe action figures with my buds!! Go to Comment
The Qualm
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Space)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-20 11:51 AM
I'd comment, but would just repeat what everyone else has already said... :)

Good one! Go to Comment
The Moon Hunter
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Space)
Murometz's comment on 2012-09-12 09:01 PM
I can only echo what Dossta said because he said it well. And add an "awesome!" I'm sad that I missed this quest. Go to Comment
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