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The Dwarven Beard Explained
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-17 01:36 PM
Blood bladder is interesting too, and makes me think of...what else? Four-chambered hearts? Double stomachs? Go to Comment
The Dwarven Beard Explained
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-17 02:28 PM
what? I'm referring to *other* potentially interesting Dwarven biological and/or physiological traits...but yeah, ok. Go to Comment
The Dwarven Beard Explained
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-17 01:27 PM
What Tuss and Stork said! Go to Comment
The Dwarven Beard Explained
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Mountains)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-17 03:09 PM


Ah right. When I say "four-chambered" I mean "different number of chambers, not four" haha



The double stomach came from watching animal programs last night, where the langurs of Cambodia have an extra stomach full of fancy bacteria that help them break down the cellulose of leaves. Anyway, was basically contemplating Dwarven adaptations to the underground. How about this? An fish-like organ that regulates pressure/oxygen/something.. :P

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27/30 Bad Things about Treasure
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-17 02:26 PM


Nice job here, always fun to come up with ways to thwart PCs, even after they have found the "great treasure"! The links are nice, though I think if the same (your favorite) links are used for any new idea over and over again (Mathom, etc) it take a bit away from the piece.

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The Return of the White Deer- Prologue
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-13 07:11 PM


*the* Temujin? :) Cool. There's a "D" in the title you might want to slice off. So, is this an opening chapter type of thing? Will the Crunalan Empire tale reflect the Song/Yuan Empire time frame approximately?

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The Return of the White Deer- Prologue
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-17 02:22 PM
I'd maybe change this line..."“Watch out for each other.” With that he made an abrupt departure, leaving the three youths dumbfounded and staring at each other."

The "each other" twice sounds a bit awkward. Go to Comment
Why is Ireland such a Hotspot for Supernatural Activity?
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-13 07:16 PM
Interesting. The title made me think it would delve into fey, formorians, and that type of stuff. Go to Comment
101 Player Character Quirks
Articles  (Character)   (Players)
Murometz's comment on 2014-11-27 07:12 PM
Great! Never gets boring, reading quirks. Also, you have here an instant generator with your name on it, if you wish it. Welcome! Go to Comment
Swamps 101
Articles  (Regional)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-04 11:33 PM
Is it very interesting? I think it's lame that you commented on Sil's subs, just to help her win the Quest. Go to Comment
Swamps 101
Articles  (Regional)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2014-11-25 11:34 AM
And when you're ready for some more bizarre swampy madness... 3664 Go to Comment
Swamps 101
Articles  (Regional)   (Swamp)
Murometz's comment on 2014-11-25 11:29 AM


I love swamps! I think this is a perfect "old school" entry actually! Excellent primer, hitting most of the pertinent points! I cant help but add...since its a 101 on swamps and all...it would have been great if you included a little extra toward the beginning with a little info on the slight differences between...swamp, bog, marsh, and fen, with maybe an image of each. But that's just nitpicking. Great sub!

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Rats in the Basement
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-02 12:32 AM
This is why I love gm'ing ^ Go to Comment
Rats in the Basement
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Style)
Murometz's comment on 2014-11-26 03:13 PM


Well, this is rather flawless and I've read it twice. Tucker Kobolds the were-rat version! The level of detail with every contingency accounted for, brings to mind published adventure material, naturally. Having no interest in Pathfinder stats, didn't take away anything from this, for me. I simply read those bits as..."Rat, trapper/ranger lvl2, fights with wakazashi, sneaking and wounding"..."Rat, 2nd lvl transmuter...Rat...ninja...etc..." ok, got it! Can adapt that to my game without issue.



Kudos to you. The commitment and effort involved in writing this shines through admirably!

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The Legend of Still and Limbo
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (General)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-04 02:01 PM
Intriguing but slightly disjointed as far as presentation of the idea, as val and Scras allude to. But lots of interesting aspects to ponder. Love the name and tagline of the piece. Still and Limbo. Needs something more/else though. Go to Comment
30 Chinese Archaic Names
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2014-11-22 11:23 PM
I'm not objective with us, but 5! :) Go to Comment
Inemuri Salon
Locations  (Establishment)   (CyberSpace)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-17 02:50 PM
Sexy, exotic, and fun to ponder! Go to Comment
Murometz's comment on 2014-11-17 11:13 AM
1/3rd of the way done...taking a break. Go to Comment
Myzrym
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Murometz's comment on 2014-12-04 01:53 PM
Drow, Lolth, Beholders, immense powers...certainly reminiscent of old-schooly mega-villains.

I agree with val...i begin imagining the 'powered-up' PCs that can actually take this thing on and beat it. :)

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Murometz's comment on 2014-11-15 07:16 PM
I love it. Very heady and well thought out cosmos origin. You seem to have everything covered. Souls, life, alignments...

Particularly interesting to me are the automatons of Order and the Dragons of Chaos.

The question that comes to my mind is, how if at all, does this mythos affect your game world specifically? Do the characters have some overall sense of this understanding? Oblivious to it? Or somewhere in between. Just curious.

Nicely written. Welcome to the Citadel!! Go to Comment
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