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The E-Stix
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-24 09:18 PM
Not something I would ever have come up with, so I like it! Welcome, xmx! Go to Comment
Marked One
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-23 06:12 PM
sammo, if this is how you write at 16 I'm literally excited to see how you write in another decade or two. Great tale! Drew me right in. Good, solid, colorful (heh) npc! Go to Comment
Vals Notes
Systems  (Mystical)   (Historical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-23 10:11 AM
Your private draft is showing...its supposed to be? Go to Comment
Aramax
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Cyberspace)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-22 05:16 PM
Would make a good forum post in the Extraneous Voices of Picayune section. Don't ask me, I like you, still don't know who or what Picayune is. Go to Comment
Spritestones
Items  (Materials)   (Sentient)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-23 01:51 PM
I like the fact that they react strongly to whichever element makes up their core. Nifty. Also, as others have mentioned nice "flavor" here. Fairy-tale-ish in a good way. Go to Comment
Gark'ng, the Man who Burned
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-20 03:24 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Gark'ng, the Man who Burned
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-20 03:11 PM


Whoa. Lots of different ideas and concepts in this one. It could use a polishing read-through I think, but it's a poignant tale. Almost reminds me of a game of thrones type of tragic family drama...the father angry at the newborn that slew the woman he loved, by simply being born.



So, will you reveal the mystery of the fire? And what happens to Gark'ng next?



Welcome to the Citadel, sammo!

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Gragnark, King of the Orcs
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-20 02:56 PM
So this what happens to those orcs that survive the test of time...

You don't come across too many semi-retired, world-weary orcs.

Now, having read the background bit, im left wondering if he's still going for his revenge, or content to eat,drink,sleep, and rule?

Welcome to the Citadel!

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Introducing Generators!
Articles  (Other Gaming)   (Citadel Help)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-19 10:14 PM
A true citadel treasure!!

Thanks val for all the collating!! And for putting the Gens under one roof! And for the How-To! No doubt this should lead to more generators from the readers!!

Friday Freetext is Dragonlordmax btw, DragonLord is a different dude. We may need a new generator for these guys :) Go to Comment
Silverfox Mill - Part I
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-19 12:56 PM
This is really really good!!! I'm not sure where I fall on the split or not to split conversation, but this a wealth of juicy info!

LOVE, the Terror of the Revenants part!! Go to Comment
Silverfox Mill - Part II
Plots  (Discovery)   (Multi-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-19 12:16 PM
Just excellent. Go to Comment
The Threat of Sugar
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Artistic/Performance)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-16 11:14 PM
I want to vote this high because it's so damn original, but my brain hurts. I feel I'm missing something (everything?), and yet it's so intriguing! Will read through again tomorrow, and return to comment/vote. Go to Comment
The Threat of Sugar
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Artistic/Performance)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-22 08:11 PM
I have fun trying to understand this. Nicely written. Droll and dry and clever, and all that. Go to Comment
Bishop Saul O'hara
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-16 09:08 AM
Poor Saul.

I feel there's some part of the tale we're missing here involving Saul, Gabriel and Selmy. Other than that, interesting example of possession.
And fascinating use of Scras' Bone Stitcher in a genre-bending way!

Good luck to your players. Saul sounds like he's now ready to kick some ass. Go to Comment
Bishop Saul O'hara
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-16 12:53 PM
Hey Ted, just realized you may want to throw in some dates, or at least 1 date :) Just remembered this is from your 1640's campaign. Might help the readers having an idea of time/place/genre. Go to Comment
The Ruins of Oldport
Locations  (Ruins)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-15 02:50 PM
Love it. Big fan of submissions that take you on a tour of a place. Some shops, some natives, a few watering holes. Very nice atmosphere created here. Gives that warm feeling of wanting to visit.

suggestions for god names:

Sea: Odovithast
Greed: Marmo Go to Comment
Remove This Gag Sub
Articles  (Tools)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 05:33 PM
No plot hooks? Go to Comment
Remove This Gag Sub
Articles  (Tools)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 06:19 PM
Should have left it as an idea seed. Go to Comment
Remove This Gag Sub
Articles  (Tools)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 06:50 PM
insufferable drivel. Go to Comment
Mien Endsieg
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2014-10-14 11:28 AM
There's a decent idea here, hiding within the manic presentation. A madman's post-mortem ramblings captured in a tome by his deranged followers via the dark arts. Paraguay and Mossad are nice touches that give this some verisimilitude.

Some bits are sloppy though, and the "101 white males" feels contrived and rushed.

Anyhoo, this would make for a interesting little modern-day (or post WWII-era) rp. Go to Comment
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