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Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
Murometz's comment on 2006-03-23 02:24 PM
a perfect concise treatise! not only is it a great tool for introspection, but I got a tremendous amount of inspiration from this for upcoming submissions! Go to Comment
Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
Murometz's comment on 2006-04-05 02:22 PM
Confucius say...BUMP! Now add the eastern rigmarole! :D Go to Comment
30 Goblin Gifts
Items  (Other)   (Combat)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-16 07:52 PM


Sneaky, Cheka lol Come up with 10, post a 30, bam! I think you can at least add Dozus' name to the authorship for his 10, no? :) Plus this way you can edit out the unseemly "(This person's ideas)" nonsense.



But much fun was had doing this. All gobliny, gross, and gruesome. Kudos to all!

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30 Goblin Gifts
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Murometz's comment on 2014-03-16 09:31 PM


Added Suzod for you. Got rid of the who did what. Strolenati Forever!!11

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Demon Summoning for Idiots
Systems  (Mystical)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-13 10:38 AM
I enjoyed this irreverent take on demon summoning and laughed a few times. Can see a humorous campaign, wherein the imps, elementals, and afrits attempt to hunt down the Idiot's Guide and destroy it, to keep it from being read, as well as hunting down the flippant author. :) Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-13 10:50 AM
Good, solid points across the board. These tips can only be helpful to first-time posters, even if a few can be debated. Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-18 10:04 AM
I smell a potential "comment of the year" here, Ls. :) Go to Comment
The Vile Vial
Items  (Potion)   (Villanous)
Murometz's comment on 2013-05-10 06:40 PM
Now see, i read the name (great name) and figured the vial *itself* would be vile. In other words, an evil, sentient glass container that can either corrupt whichever liquid (magical or otherwise) is placed inside, or worse yet, it doesn't mater whats inside! You can throw the vile vial at a fleshy opponent, and upon breaking, the glass shards worm their way and "crawl" deep inside flesh, severing arteries and causing great damage otherwise. Later, the glass shards seek each other out again, and re-form the glass vial, complete with evil sentience again. Go to Comment
Gravediggers' Legacy
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Combat)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-08 04:41 PM


Aaarg, I wish I'd thought of that! They kill diggers, that's brilliant! And miners makes sense too. I may have to add that. I'm rusty.

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Gravediggers' Legacy
Items  (Equipment Listing)   (Combat)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-09 02:22 PM


yep, yep, you and axle are right! Will edit this to change from stabby, stabby, bash.

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A Dozen Unusual Flowers
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-18 10:51 AM
Looking forward to the revamp. The Unseen Fortress seems to be the Fantasy Flora Mecca of the Citadel! Go to Comment
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-05 09:56 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-05 10:41 PM
I liked this. I read this on a phone in bed, and I still can't believe I made it to the end (quick funny story, came to what I thought was "the end" but then saw it was only Part I lol). This has a lot of human nature true-isms in it, and explores free will, self-loathing, faith and pride, ably. Had some powerful emotional tugs as well, with the children and all that.

Memorable takeaways were:

1. the way this society and world is slowly but surely painted
2. rescuing Diures from the fire, with a feeling of "superiority" over him.

Not much for rpg-ness here, aside from the window onto this particular world, but a well written expose of one man's roiling thoughts and doubts!

I'm also amazed your usual assortment of typos are mostly missing. Kudos. Go to Comment
30 Arrows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-04 08:56 PM
Hmm, i put forth Frog-Crotch Arrow for # 30.

Of course any archer PC reading this would probably want a half-dozen of each in the ol' quiver. Go to Comment
My Last Crop of Humans
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-04 11:42 AM
Echo? Are there missing comments in this post? Go to Comment
My Last Crop of Humans
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-04 04:44 PM


Well, i enjoyed this greatly! It's funny, pseudo-deep, and a little disturbing. Create and Destroy! Abrupt end seemed perfect to me.



I can see why Sil and knowman want to know more though...the ending begs for more!



And yet, that's my takeaway. The reader decides why everything is clear to it now. The computer doesn't know jack shit.

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Dr Agamemnon Spengler
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-26 10:16 AM
Just wow. This was a joy to read. What a fitting tribute! And of course perfectly entwined into the Cosmic Era. Go to Comment
Dr Agamemnon Spengler
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-04 06:06 PM


Harold Ramis says...."take an HoH!"



Edit: umm, in 4 days.

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Lescelina the Witch Queen
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Religious)
Murometz's comment on 2014-03-01 12:25 PM
Very well written as others have said, from her appearance to her ritual, to her throne room and everything in between is nicely described allowing for immediate, well-rendered visuals. I enjoyed the style of writing..."tooth and tail, water and smoke, task and burden, walls and net, torch and light"...very nice!

She's so well-rendered that you can either use the mythos and society she is enveloped in, or plop her down in any given campaign with minimal prep. Go to Comment
7 Things About Criticism
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Citadel Help)
Murometz's comment on 2014-02-26 10:12 AM
Well-worded. Helpful. Gives one something to think about before typing out a comment. Go to Comment
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