Strolen\s Citadel content. 
Feather-Dusters of Dra'Solme Tsolyul
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2015-04-22 09:10 PM
tried uploading a pic inside the main sub. Failed. So here is sort of what they look like...

http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-4Yz8XZ-ddk4/VChtkGj-ZWI/AAAAAAAABaY/goUrKvr4jp4/s1600/image0014.jpg

Go to Comment
Feather-Dusters of Dra'Solme Tsolyul
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2015-04-22 11:34 PM
I suppose :) Go to Comment
Skeleton Bow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Cursed)
Murometz's comment on 2015-04-22 09:28 PM
Read the title and would have bet money the bows were crafted of Skeleton spinal columns. I stand corrected! Nice amount of detail with few words~ Go to Comment
Vaakri's Empyral Bow
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Heroic)
Murometz's comment on 2015-04-22 09:26 PM
Concur with the lads. Great legend/myth! Almost doesn't matter what it does Go to Comment
Circlet of Cerberus
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Murometz's comment on 2015-03-10 12:55 AM
I really like how you weaved (wove? woven?) greek myth and mermen. Seamless. Good read, and nicely balanced item. Go to Comment
Ballad of the Malconvoker
Locations  (Area)   (Plains)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-25 07:52 PM


Nice twist, nice poem, and nice add-on explaining the options!



Have random questions on the fascinating wording...



1. "The clergy unable reconcile" there's no "to" between unable and reconcile on purpose right? 2. "Her infernal servant fond" what is meant by fond here?



I don't care about grammar, vocabulary and spelling, I'm just asking because I like the style.



Anyway, good job!

Go to Comment
Downington Sphere
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-22 07:19 PM
This was a fun read!! Not sure how to explain why, I guess it's all the somehow fitting names for things, the lingo and nuance. Oh yeah, and the bizarre space lifeforms! Go to Comment
TRANSFORMERS RPG: Part 1
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Murometz's comment on 2012-02-15 12:30 PM


Wow.



 



Once you're done with the foundation, brainstorming, format and logistics, I'd like to PLAY this game! :)



 



And once youre done with this, please consider...Thundercats, He-Man, Space Ghost, etc

Go to Comment
Queen Llaewyn Reborn
Plots  (Event)   (Multi-Storyline)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-11 10:55 AM


I was just going to add, some nice use of prose in this piece! I like the campaign thoughts as well. And welcome Isharii!!

Go to Comment
Infestation
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-07 10:06 AM


Wow, fancy writing!! The opening grabbed hold of me and wouldn't let go. Going to read this again with floyd's waiting for the worms softly playing in the background

Go to Comment
Slang and Jargon Beneath the Waves: The Big Under
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-26 02:27 PM
This is pretty darn impressive axle!! Love the slang etymology explainers! Strong shades of Burgess' Nadsat. Go to Comment
Xue Ren (Snow/Blood Blade Edge)
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Combative)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-05 01:08 PM


Reads like a nice Wuxia plot, and a likable assassin :)



The deviant art link no worky.

Go to Comment
The First of Cities
Locations  (City)   (Other)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-05 01:39 PM
Good world tale, nice amount of detail. I enjoyed it. And what LW said, too! Go to Comment
The Tale of Solomon Soulhammer Pt. I
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-02 10:45 PM


Well this is nice. Well-written, concise, and consistent greco-roman "Namery" (new word, means same-sounding naming). Looking forward to part II, in which I'm guessing, Solomon goes on to do something epic.



And bless you for splitting this into parts. Wise.

Go to Comment
Apocalyptic Vampires
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (City/ Ruin)
Murometz's comment on 2014-01-18 11:07 PM
What madness this? :P Go to Comment
Castle Kaukenn
Dungeons  (Other)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Murometz's comment on 2012-03-10 07:20 PM


In the old forest that Kaukenn was originally built under, such a pattern acted as simple camouflage among the sun-dappled shadows thrown by towering trees. Each marble block holds an enchantment subtly enhancing that effect, causing the veins to undulate slowly in a breeze or the colors to darken or lighten to match the ambient light.



A deceptively simple yet evocative detail!


Go to Comment
The Elder Crow of the Tarlathii
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-05 01:15 PM
Yay an AG return!

Moody and atmospheric. The "where" part was my favorite. Elder shadows biding their time beneath the rust-colored leaves of certain trees. Conjures nice visuals!

I also think the merchant is the most interesting of the three.

Great addition to the Coldforged mythos. Go to Comment
Mark Greaves, Assassin Hobo
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-03 05:02 PM
Creepy good!! It reeks of the "real" because this guy is scarier than ten fancy, flowery assassins put together.

I picture his mind ravaged over time. Maybe he slowly turns from assassin to wanton murderer. He shares a train with some other destitute hobo, and just kills him, because he can. And enjoys himself. Dumps the body from the train. Never makes the police reports. No one cares about a dead hobo on the side of the tracks. Mark moves on to the next town.

Well done, Myst! Go to Comment
Mark Greaves, Assassin Hobo
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Travelers)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-03 05:06 PM


Hmm one more thought. This guy is scarier without the "fey" angle to me. Why can't he just be a true human monster, like hh holmes or gacy or someone like that. Maybe he was just a curse-less hobo.



Great character.

Go to Comment
Freya, Assassin
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Murometz's comment on 2015-02-02 12:19 PM
Can't think of what to add. Nice characterization here. Well done! Go to Comment
Total Comments:
4038

Join Now!!




Fatal error: Call to undefined function top_menu() in /home/strolen/public_html/lockmor/application/views/citadel/vfooter.php on line 2