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Corpsemaker
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2013-05-21 10:06 PM
At first it almost seems to unrealistic and over powered. The ability to create zombies at will by piecing them together like a child's play toy.

That being said. I gruesomely love it. On first reading I said a loud this needed to be under the undead freetext and lo and behold it is. And a Cult quest at that. I'm failing at my own mastery of my Cult of the Dead.

Aside from my minor gripe, I would tend to use it as the corpses would pull free from its body when enough parts amassed together in a single spot spilling forth undead to protect it solely for no other purpose.

A great and creepy monster indeed. I personally wouldn't make it as impossible to destroy as it sounds as an end boss but still creepy and memorable when one brings one of these out.

Kudos. Go to Comment
Anadem of Kormak
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-11-23 04:27 PM
I got tired of looking at this in my unfinished folder...  Go to Comment
Anadem of Kormak
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-11-24 03:12 PM
Fixed and fixed... the anadem is a crown also detailed as garland or a wreath worn around the "crown" of the head... So it is a band worn on the head. And the voice of said narrator may be seen in the future for another item/NPC etc. Go to Comment
Anadem of Kormak
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-11-25 10:24 AM
Anadem of Kormak
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-11-28 09:49 PM
Dark Unicorns can fill in that void. Go to Comment
30 Things That Grow in a Dwarven Beard
Systems  (Agriculture/ Husbandry)   (General)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2013-05-20 10:19 PM
I'm not sure if I created the undead beard fleas because of this or it was added afterwards. Regardless I feel obliged to vote, although I though I did before.

My son is playing a dwarven mercenary in a game. I will introduce him to this list for him to go through to add a "tick" to his character. No pun intended. Go to Comment
30 Things That Grow in a Dwarven Beard
Systems  (Agriculture/ Husbandry)   (General)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2013-05-20 10:19 PM
I'm not sure if I created the undead beard fleas because of this or it was added afterwards. Regardless I feel obliged to vote, although I though I did before.

My son is playing a dwarven mercenary in a game. I will introduce him to this list for him to go through to add a "tick" to his character. No pun intended. Go to Comment
Cela Ardonyth
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-10-22 08:55 PM
I never vote like this, and all I can say is marvelous. Go to Comment
Dwarven Pets
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Underground)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-10-03 08:56 PM

Definately interesting. I do enjoy how it is from the view of an outsider and how everything could be completely wrong.

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The Bank
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Cyberspace)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-10-02 07:14 AM
Kind of difficult to read, which I assume was on purpose. The idea, or at least what I think of the idea, is a sound one and decently realistic to be morbid and a tad scary.

A few plot hooks and a short list of what the banks use your information for would be great. I realize putting those in are outside the transmission part of the sub but put it in for us knowledge freaks. Otherwise I like it. Go to Comment
30 Dwarven Treasures
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-10-01 07:12 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Exitium
Locations  (Ruins)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-09-29 11:27 PM
This seems more like a simple story and should be in the forums... unless I am missing something. Go to Comment
Exitium
Locations  (Ruins)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-09-30 09:12 AM
I wasn't saying I didn't like it, I just saw it as fiction... but to each... Go to Comment
Murderblaze
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-09-29 09:16 AM
I like it, but something just doesn't seem to sit well with me. He definitely seems a being, creature, entity or what have you, of evil and death. The concept of reducing what we know to be a being of pure light and goodness (some settings anyway) into its antithesis is awesome and you have done that. I just cant put my finger on it. Withholding my vote right now until I read it a few more times.

Current vote would be a 3/5 but wanting it to be higher. Go to Comment
Murderblaze
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-09-29 05:24 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Moira Chalice of Kormak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-09-27 06:03 PM
I have an image to go with it. I'll try to link it tonight. I thought of the questions you asked about but due to time and the formatting messing up on me I forgot to add them. I'll fix it tonight. Go to Comment
The Moira Chalice of Kormak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-09-29 11:17 AM
Updated with a small bit of information per Dosstas' suggestions. And here is a link to an image that inspired said thought. Although the skull in the image rests on what seems to be a golden goblet, the Moira Chalice of Kormak rests on a similar base although it is made of blackened bone.

http://i289.photobucket.com/albums/ll204/Quetzalcoatl_12_22_2012/KaliChalice1a.jpg Go to Comment
The Moira Chalice of Kormak
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-09-29 03:10 PM

Moira was known as the three fates... possible more items coming soon to maybe make a trio of fateful necromantic items.


http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moira

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Scrasamax's Necrological Treatise
Systems  (Mystical)   (Defining)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2013-06-09 10:52 PM
This so needs to be finished... I like where it was heading. Go to Comment
Undead Beard Fleas
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-09-26 05:35 PM
This was simply a poke of fun at Muro as we bantered in chat. Sticklers abound, it is simply for fun. Go to Comment
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The Candle-Eyed Man

       By: Murometz

The third son of a candle-maker, and secretly a spy, Tsiao Fong Wei betrayed his family, clan, and town to the merciless Qongg Dynasty, causing the deaths of his own family members. He survived to an old age hiding out in the country side and keeping a low profile. One day however, the “Paper Knife” finally found Tsiao Fong Wei , and exacted his revenge on behalf of the folk, dead and tortured.

After a furious struggle, the “Paper Knife” plunged twin burning candles into the eyes of the traitorous old man and laughed, as Tsiao Fong Wei howled in dismay and pain. Some say Tsiao Fong Wei died that day. Others say that the old man somehow escaped despite his sudden anguish and utter blindness.

The truth is lost to time.

But to this day the children of the Red-Ridge County towns and villages are told by their parents to always beware twin lights in the darkness and to never venture into the woods at night, and to keep an ear open for the Groaning Ghost, for somewhere out there Tsiao Fong Wei the Traitor, now a vengeful spirit, stumbles about the darkness moaning and wailing, candles still sticking forth from out of his otherwise empty eye sockets. And though the candles plunged into his eyes all those years ago were a’flame going in, now the wax protuberances are somehow lit from within and burn without, and two flickering lights in the darkness, always portend his coming.

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