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Secret Life of the Assassin
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-19 03:13 PM
Oddly enough I have a player who is portraying an assassin at night and a student by day. He has joined a guild that could easily ask him to do jobs and help the local militia. This fits well, but I agree that it is a very situational plot and has to be worked real hard into a setting. Go to Comment
Lost children...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-06-15 10:28 AM
While it has been said multiple times already, I determined the whole plot before it was finished but it is evil enough to throw a few twists in to make it workable in a game. Well done.

Oh and yes I read this a year ago and it was lost to the ages, I just found it again. Go to Comment
Evil mischief with gremlins
Locations  (City)   (Any)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-05 02:53 PM
I found the one paragraphs difficult to read actually. It seems entertaining but that along with the movie comments turns me off this. It seems like a bunch of mives were slammed together to get this idea. it has potential but it needs work, to me. Go to Comment
On the House
Plots  (Duty)   (Side-Quest)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-02-14 03:45 PM
I am not going to vote on this just yet in the hopes that it will be visited again and be expanded. This has touched a similar instance in my game and I want as the Horde said, closure. I want to see a few possible outcomes and ways to transform this from wrong place at the wrong time, to a successful adventure. And right now with barely three paragraphs that isnt possible. Go to Comment
The bug
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-05 10:48 AM
I actually like this idea. I don't really know why.

It is a simple idea, but because it is detailed in such a simple manner, I don't really enjoy it that much. It has so much promise as the two commetns above me has stated. This does have potential, which I gave credit for, but I also took off a lot for there not really being much background or information regarding who, what, where, why, and how. Basics to any story.

On a side note, I actually saw this in an X-Files episode where 'Aliens' had metallic roaches. They looked real, but if you crushed one it would leave metal splinters. Kinda creepy. Go to Comment
Ransom Note.....huh?
Plots  (Duty)   (Multi-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-05-11 06:02 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Death Gate
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-16 11:16 AM
Absolutely. I agree with Iain here. This is a perfect setting for many conflicts of interest. With undead/unclean aspect to the do we kill the Kihng by pushing him off a balcony and cry calling it an accident? Or will us killing him bring about the plague and desease we are so afraid of?

Perfect for someone try to take over the city/ kingdom. Murder the king and produce some kind of removable plague in the area. Those who live there wil ltake it as a sign and leave, which then the real perpetrators will just walk in through the gates and claim what is now theirs.

You can't be accused of invading a city that is deserted. Go to Comment
Winter of Discontent
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-04-15 12:26 PM


Agree with those above me...


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Jiklud's Axe
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-03-22 12:15 PM
With a little more work, backstory and history and description this may just be a very nice item. Go to Comment
Beggar's Curse
Plots  (Discovery)   (Campaign)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-06-13 04:15 PM
Its comments such as this that make me question commenting or voting until its clerified. Go to Comment
Sword of Belwar
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-01-04 02:13 PM
I think the .5 on it is a little bit to friendly.

I do like the idea of it being easier to use for someone unskilled, but the way it was done and brought up lacks any desireable effect at all. Go to Comment
Sword of Belwar
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-06-10 01:59 PM
This sounds very similar ot a weapon I read in a book titled very similar. Go to Comment
Forgotten Treasures
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-01-25 10:54 AM
This is a funny blast from the past. Anyone looking at this and that has been here for any length of time can definitely see the difference in quality that the site has brought. From this to say Regression by Iain... classic stuff.

Remember, everything begins somewhere and nothing is original. Go to Comment
Forgotten Treasures
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-03-22 08:09 AM
Sounds like an instalment of an indroductory Keep of the Borderlands module. :) Go to Comment
Forgotten Treasures
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2011-04-22 08:16 AM


I think these old subs such as this need to be brought back and possibly be reborn. Write another sub tying them together perhaps.


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