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A Bag of Beautiful Coyns
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-06 07:57 AM
Once again I realize I failed to vote on this when I had originally failed to vote on it.

Again good job Moon. Your submissions are always top notch. Everyone should strive for a piece of your quality. Go to Comment
The Valley of Undead
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-11 01:21 PM
Nice idea. Although it would be very creepy for an unsespecting group of adventurers to shamble into one of the towns not knowing the laws and destroy a group of undead.

What are the penalties of such an act? And can you exchange your life after death for more ammenities in life? Only ruling council are voted in if they have their undead card? Kind of like a donor card? You need money, you will agree to be raised for x amount years depending on how much you want/ need. Go to Comment
Kalahars' Gem
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2007-02-16 03:00 PM
Interesting idea. I realize this is a tad on the old side but if you look past all the grammer, spelling errors it has potential. I would like to know more about al lof these orbs instead of seeing that they exists and all of a sudden a master orb is created in a way that no one knows how. A bit to generic for me, but hopefully someone wil lsee this and expand on it. Go to Comment
The Prophet
NPCs  (Extras)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-07-15 03:27 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Aurinellian's Wedding Bands
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-15 04:20 PM
I like the concept a lot. Interesting, captivating, and unique. Curious as to why the smith put all that effort into the rings to begin with and didn;t tell them. Sure he could have been fond of their love and affection, but why put in all the hidden powers if they didn't ask for it.

Also, why would the elven nation let the rings loose into the world? Would they not have wanted to keep the rings close, being they were made by the best elven smith and they were given a sort of Tragic History. I would think they would keep them clsoe by for historys sake. Go to Comment
The Dreamweaver Revisited
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2007-02-16 02:58 PM
Generally it has merit and can be formed into something, but the entire thing waves me off with the preconcieved conversation between the PC's and Bob. One thing I am very picky on, especially myself, is forced conversations. Go to Comment
The Ruins of Aliet Manor
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-02-28 03:07 PM
Ok, why go from talking about how the rumors of the manor being haunted is true from, the bandits didn;t believe them.

Where did the bandits come from and why were they in the ruined manor to begin with? I will not repeat what Moon commented on, and perhaps this is just a very old thread that was transfered over from the old site. But this lacks anything.

It has a few, and I mean a very minor few, interesting plot associations with it but you have to work far to hard to get them to work or into the light for the lack of information. Go to Comment
The Ruins of Aliet Manor
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-02-28 04:11 PM
Why is the date saying march all of a sudden? Go to Comment
Ferian Fortholén
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-07-31 01:19 PM
This has promise but I feel it needs more. I also realize this was posted back in 2003 but I followed this by a random link and while it is interesting and somewhat entertaining I feel it needs more to be spectacular. Go to Comment
The Box That Cannot Be Opened
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-17 12:13 PM
Why is it that I seem to forget posting on all of these submissions. I read them often yet don't realize I forgot to post in them after the third time I read them.

A good bit of wonder there manfred. I like it and always have. Go to Comment
The Box That Cannot Be Opened
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2013-05-13 11:16 PM
I don't remember if I voted on this all those years ago but I thought about it the other day and threw it at my players. It was an item left in an alchemical lab of a deceased sage. They found him dead along with a few other notable people in the city together.

The were searching his tower for information regarding a particular issue they were having when they came across his lab. Pocketing a few items, the thief of the group tossed the box in his satchel hoping it contained riches or items of magic. He has broken four of his lock picking tool kits and is attempting to find more. He swears that the fact I am not letting him, open it means there is something in it I don't want him to have. It's fun.

Thank you for creating this pleasurable tool of torture. Go to Comment
Canteen Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2007-09-16 09:29 AM
I too like this and think it's a diamond in the rough. It tells what needs to be able to be used and function. I of course want to know who/why/ and how personally. Who made the first ones, why, and how were they made. Other than that, I think this speaks volumes. Go to Comment
Cowl of False Reputation
Items  (Clothes)   (Combat)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-08-17 12:59 PM
I agree with Manfred, long have I missed this. It is far to simple to rate much higher than I have but I gave it a +.5 for being original, somewhat. Good job. Go to Comment
The Land of the Living
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2004-12-28 02:32 PM
Wonderful. The Cloud Walkers grabbed my attention and sent images rolling in my mind of white clothed warriors leaping from the mist and shadow to end the life of a trespasser. Truely wonderful.

5/5 Go to Comment
War Cleaver
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-27 08:21 AM
I fail to see the real uniquness in this. I voted on it for it's humor factor of a horde of large cretures weilding huge sheets of metel for weapons. Again, I don;t care for it personally but to have a few squads of these things rush at the players would make them pause.

It is too Final Fantasy for me. Go to Comment
The Old Kingdom Plots
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-06-08 11:59 AM
Think this could be so much more defined and better if there were more plots to sift through. Not just world defining but simple daily plots that could or could not affect the outcome of the players lives and daily habits. Go to Comment
Quatre O'Malen
NPCs  (Minor)   (Natural)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-09 09:21 AM
Ok, I found this to be lackluster. To many comments of, he does this like this person, he is similar to this, and so on. Please describe those similarities as if they were his personally. His lack of background is disappointing. A 90 year old man who looks 25 can be interesting as I once had an NPC who was close to 800 years old and looked 70 but was healthly and nimble like an 18 year old. It can be done. But give a reason why he is that old but looks so young. Go to Comment
Drizzt
NPCs  (Minor)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-07 09:49 AM
The irony to this, it is one of the most ill spoken submissions about how not to be yet it is by far the most read submission. I would only give it a 1 but the fact that perhaps people are getting an idea about what NOT to submit, this could be a helpful submission. Go to Comment
Hot Wheels
Items  (Transports)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-08-29 03:40 PM
Interesting. Go to Comment
Promises of the past
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-05-04 12:13 PM
I like the basic ide aof the plot, but I feel it needs ot be fleshed out a little more. It all seems a bit to vague for me. But again this was originally created back in 2003.

This also aspires me to the undead army of LOTR. Go to Comment
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