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Dalme The Tinker
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-05-24 02:52 PM
This has enough of a painful reoccurance to the players that is bespeaks of many fun filled hours of reoccuring nightmares for them. They could meet him one day and have a splendid time, then the next time they meet him it always seems ot be a bad day for them to where they think he draws them bad luck, then the next time, good again. A perfect on again off again kind of relationship with an NPC like this is classic. Go to Comment
The Amulet of Looda Chriss
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-03-03 08:55 AM
Ok, how in the world with a 2.1 vote score did this ever make it to the HOH category?

Unfortunately my sensibilities about this are making me challenge this. And while I realize that the challenge feature is setup to challenge actual submissions, I am more or less challenging the HOH vote as there are dozens of other submisisons by EVERYONE that deserve a HOH and never recieved one. Go to Comment
The Steel Cathexis
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-23 11:02 AM
While I can see where the rest of the comments have gone I will not repeat what they say. I will say that most of the points i have given are from the way the submisison was written.

The few things that are lacking in it have been stated so I wont continue on that avenue of remarks.

The idea has purpose and promise, but needs ot be cleaned up a bit to rid itself of some of the bad aspects of it. Go to Comment
The False Sword of Crog
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-11-18 10:23 AM
Um I posted that... for some reason it didnt register my vote or my login. Go to Comment
House of Ancient Stone
Locations  (Desert)   (Establishment)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-09 03:48 PM
I like this. The building itself is hard to imagine, I was thinking of perhaps a domed Stone henge at first, yet it bloomed into something far grander than that.

I like the hidden cellar of sorts that house the preserved bodies of creatures for study, very dark occultish in a school with good intentions. I like this. Go to Comment
Aspect Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-08-10 10:36 AM
Its things like this that after reading it I wonder why I didn't think of it first. This is marvelous. I can see having on of these fall into the hands of my group and watch choas ensue if it fell into the right persons hands.

Question. What happens to the stone after one person gets aclimated to it? Does it still function? Or is it's properties only last for a certain period of time?

I realize that you said you can find them but do their properties last only for a set time? Like if one person wears it until they are completely changed, does it use up the power of the item? Does it work for two or three more times or is it perminent?

Just asking. Other than that I would say 4/5 Go to Comment
The Courthouse
Locations  (Establishment)   (Plains)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-08-09 12:37 PM
I love this concept. Simple, devious, I can see throwing one of my players into this situation as he is an arogant baffoon and would soon find himself in the midts of kill or die.

4/5 - I would give it a 5/5 if there was a larger backstory. Why was it built in the first place? Was it originally something else and turned into this debacle of the mobs spectacle?

But don't get me wrong, I love it. I just want more reason as to why it exists. Go to Comment
The Sword Leviathan
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2012-03-16 07:47 AM

Seeing how this has gone by the wayside and may have some promise, perhaps I'll take up the torch and redo it; ala The Bone Bow I did a few years back. Rehash this old sub. We will see.

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NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-06-21 04:21 PM
Maybe she espies a PC that catches her fancy and tries to copulate. And when the time comes... she knows... it worked.

So then you have the question. What do the PC's do with a half dragon chasing after one of their party and once she lures them into her bed chamber. What happens if she become pregnant? Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-28 12:11 PM
So I had a question for everyone here.

Knowing that if you were innocent you would willingly put the noose around your neck to prove it. Even though you know your innocent and you will not die (hopefully) would that not be a similar act of suicide?

So, would a priest or a Paladin or Holy Warrior of the church put on one? Knowing they were innocent, but by placing a rope of execution around their neck would that not be seen in bad taste? Just curious. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-23 12:28 PM
Edited some for content. Thanks for the compliments. I was worried about this one as it was difficult for me to bring to life.

Dragon Lord :
The item is very unique.

There could very well be other items of such history created. This was actually a dream I had which I fleshed out into this.

The other item in question (Pueola Demuet) is another such unique item whose origin can be linked back to the Gods. Which is being detailed as we speak.

The Gods have tried not to become involved with the mortals (in my world) on too many occasions but there are some items that have been created for special events, heros, kingdoms, and even by accident. See Pueola Demuet for a good example of an accidental item created by the Gods. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-20 10:13 AM
Thanks Moon.

I have been writing on this for four days now not happy with it. Now when I posted it... I was like, HOLY COW thats a lot of information.

Any other ideas then reducing the ramblings? Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-20 01:19 PM
Any good choice sites?

Wow printed up as 5 pages without comments... I will take the knife to it. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-05-20 02:38 PM
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-06-02 09:25 AM
I see your reasoning behind that. I was under the outlook that by physically putting the noose on, regardless of it's intent was an act of self harm, even though they willingly know it will not hurt them it is still the act of it that should be seen in bad form.

I was thinking that one of the two listed archtypes would demand the use of the noose to prove any innocence yet also degree that by being judged and having it put on them would clear them of any guilt at doing so.

Just my thought. But that is why I asked. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2005-12-05 12:33 PM
Edited some content to shorten the story some. Needs more of an edit, anyone willing to help is mroe than welcome. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-02-23 03:33 PM
Your a level 2 right now, put in enough submissions and add enough content and you will be level 3 and then you get one HOH a day.

Thanks for the compliment. This one was special to me for a while. I spent a lot of time and put a lot of effort into it and it came out far to large. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-03-11 09:00 PM
Thank you for your interest in the Noose Mur... I always liked this one. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2006-08-23 08:43 AM
Without the backstory this would be a pretty mundane item. The history behind it makes the item as the item doesn't do a whole lot. But thanks for the vote and the comment. Go to Comment
Noose of Redemption
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Mourngrymn's comment on 2007-01-18 10:35 AM
Is there any other type of magic campaign? Low magic is the best kind. Go to Comment
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