Ok, creepy. The thing that sticks into my mind the most is her dead daughters body. I really can not fathom that it is on display where everyone can see and smell, but.... its just odd. Adds to the creepy "Im and evil ruler." face but wow.. .definately over the top.
I can see where you came up with that thought. However, all of his abilities, tattoos... are all limited and have draw backs to them. I always place conditionals on my magic in my system. But I will look at it again. Go to Comment
I like it. It is simple in the beginning yet can be as complex as the players and the Dm wish it to be. The indepth outcomes that have ben provided supply a decent amount of room for ideas on how to get the players involved.
I don't like the musket's however, and the fact that a 14 year old is as skilled as she is and still commands a comapny of men. Even though they are neanderthals, my idea of neander thals were never high on a technological level and therefore couldn't comprehend how to use delicate weapons such as crossbows and swords. But that is just me.
Even still 4/5
I see possibilities for me to use this. Go to Comment
I liked this when it was on the pre v2.0 site. And I still do. Once again I like the completness of it. It leaves little to the imagination and give you plenty to work with. Go to Comment
You could also use the rebirth theory in that Eliam has long since died of old age, natural causes, whatever you choose yet his spirit/ soul was given to another.
Since she has this unyielding desire and need to find him, the person that she finds to hold that love may not be Eliam but his loving soul.
That could cause problems if the person who she is claiming to be Eliam or his soul is in fact a PC who is a woman/ married/ or otherwise disinclined to have a stone statue craving for his affections. Go to Comment
I like it a lot. A ring designed to keep oath breakers or your retainers from breaking their oaths. Good for knights and stewards.
I would have given it a higher rating but the one paragraph was a little harsh to read and the few mispelled word. Otherwise a decent job. Go to Comment
Sorry to give it a 4/5 because the tale was wonderful.
What I docked a point for, why were the snakes magical in nature and why were there sofew of them? If they wer ehunted to near extinction, then where was that information documented at? If Crowley fought and killed the leader, did the other members get involved and if not why? Did the blood have the effect that Croawley was hoping for, to extend magic properties etc?
It seems after he killed the snake his original goal was left out or fogotten. Go to Comment
NPCs (Campaign) (Political)
Over all its pretty good. Go to Comment