Ok, I like this for the simple fact that I have a race very similar to their design. I would like a little more information on them however. I realize that they are quiet about their origins and history. Of course if it is just a unfleshed out idea than it is still a good submission. Go to Comment
This is a lot better than the Midarans. Better in the aspect that it is much more detailed. I like it. Sentient guardians are wonderful. The fact they have evolved from a number of different aspects and are now as versitile as they are. Wonderful. Go to Comment
Ok this is wonderful detail into the concept of a gargoyle. Interesting idea seemingly that they are alien. However, everything about them seems to perfect. Their vision and hearing is near unlimited and can be bent to go around corners. They are experts are most thing mental, making me think they would have far more superior mental powers other than clairsentience.
I like them, and they are defined very well. But something just doesn't hit me like, WOW!... Go to Comment
Definately takes the odd ot the extreme. I like the thought of this being a form of an air elemental. Odd choice of descriptive sound but the knowledge of what multiple raquete balls sounds like is intriguing. And I can see how that could make someone go nuts. Go to Comment
Interesting idea. I would think they would be very hard pressed early on to control their emotions in the beginning, therefore their population must have dimemd out quickly. Seeing someone with viens bursting from their skin... bleh thats gross. Cool though.
If they were humans once, why did they move to the mountains in the first place? What made them the way they are today? I realize you gave the random mutation or magic explanation. But can you feel that out more? Possibly an area they live in has a high content of radioactive magic energy and that is what originally altered them.
With their immune system so high has that affected their age any? Do they live longer than the average human does? Go to Comment
This is very reminiscent of the X-Files and the black tar ooze they kept finding.
This adds a creepy feel to things you possibly run into and don't know what they are or where they came from. The fact they can take over another lifeforms body is very creepy and worth the effort to do to a game group. It would be a nice turn of events to have something like that attach itself to a player and begin controlling them for a time.
But what do they do once they gain a physical body and how long can they stay in that body? Can they stay in it for an infinite amount of time, or will their very presence degrade the living body and eventually kill it by sapping its energy? Go to Comment
This is something that took me a while to figure out once I read it. I don't care for it personally but it is very detailed and can be followed. I will try to use it with my gamers to see if they can follow the rules with ease.
However. After reading it more than once it hits a familiar ring to my ear like I have visually seen this before. The floating heart makes it seem that much more like I have seen this before, yet in an actual video game. Perhaps it is just coincidence. Go to Comment
To kill Unicorns, or Dark Unicorns? I could imagine Unicorn HUnters in the vien of Dragon Hunters that seek out and attempt to remove the dark blight that they have become. Interesting plot idea for pcs. Go to Comment
While that is a simple question it is not a real easy answer. They have been seen as mounts for powerful demons but whether it is a broken and tamed thing or a power/ respect thing is totally unknown. No good person will be able to ride them regardless. Go to Comment