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Lady Shayla
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 08:29 PM
Same editorial problem still plaguing this sub as others before me noted. Otherwise, a great legend Go to Comment
Anura
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-23 11:28 PM
A good amphibian race with a few distinguishing traits. Overall a solid piece of work. Go to Comment
Princess Reisha
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 11:35 PM
I read this sub w/o reading any of the other ones in the set and it's still comprehensible to me. At this pt, I would say this is a solid sub that serves its purpose of describing a legendary personage well. However, I will vote upon revisit after reading the other subs.
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So you wish to be a Bard....
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Players)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-06-18 07:23 PM
Not music oriented myself but the lyrics are quite lovely Go to Comment
The Spinning wheel and the Courtier’s gown
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-22 12:06 AM


Like everyone said, a great tale


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Blissmort Toxin
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-03 09:11 PM
Short and sweet.
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Mastabah Island
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 08:46 PM
A good link-up with the other subs. Go to Comment
Cometia Island
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 06:34 PM
Good write-up of a grim tale. Go to Comment
Goeric's Bountiful Creel
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 11:29 PM
I quite like this and I think the very first comment captures the essence of what I want to say abt this sub.
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Mama Always Said...
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-18 01:03 AM
Sweet, to me anyway. Now that I've turned my hand towards novel writing, I find that I love making up my own proverbs for various settings. Go to Comment
Uuthli Solen, The Island of Sapphires
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-17 09:16 PM
As always, beautiful execution of an idea. Will HoH this tmr. I think I'm developing into a fan of Scras' writing. Go to Comment
Flask of Fire
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-21 08:43 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Dwarven Steelbows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 12:33 AM
The origins of these weapons and the riddles on the Eight are quite intriguing. A good sub overall.
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The Priests of Droven
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-11 07:06 PM
The edit fully eliminated the problem pointed out originally and like Strolen mentioned, it makes sense how this particular religion would be able to draw human followers and even have other interactions with humans besides its immediate followers. Like all your other blockquote, this letter written in a personal voice brings out the content vividly. HoHed this so that more people can see this reworked piece. Go to Comment
Creation and the Great Wager
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Moonlake's comment on 2014-12-31 01:15 AM
I like this piece quite a lot although somehow formatting is a bit weird here and there with one paragraph being somehow tabbed while others aren't and missing line break for one paragraph. But I haven't really deducted marks because of that.

'The perfect Being begin to crack and flaw in the sight of the Watcher, because the Being adored nothing as the Watcher adored the Being. Thus the Being was imperfect. So the Being went to the Watcher and adored it, and the adore spilled out around their union.'
This bit of prose really blew my mind when I first read it but after I got more into the piece, I sort of get the gist of it. However, I'm still tempted to ask what is the cosmo logic (or maybe logic from the viewpoint of the Watcher and the Being) in the bit about the unequal adoration of the Watcher and the Being for each other making the Being imperfect and why would the Being care about this fact so much that he would actually be prompted to adore the Watcher? Or is this the finger-waving aspect of a creation myth that I'm supposed to not worry about, I'm not sure. Go to Comment
Creation and the Great Wager
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Moonlake's comment on 2014-12-31 04:00 PM
I see, certainly an interesting proposition about self awareness that you have here and now I understand perfectly. Go to Comment
Plenty O' Enterprizes
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-13 03:18 AM
The Know-It-All

This specialised for-hire service deals with information of all sorts. It is used on a contract-by-contract basis when the client requests a summary of information on a specified topic. However, it does not guarantee as to the reliability of its information sources.


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Plenty O' Enterprizes
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-13 03:20 AM
A great utility sub. Just posted an addition- a fantasy take on the Internet, really. Go to Comment
Plenty O' Enterprizes
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-15 07:09 PM
Doll-to-Order

A service started by the same owner as Maid-to-Order, it has expanded quickly and now sells a range of custom-made dolls to children and ladies of the nobility as well as its iconic product- the Furries.


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Plenty O' Enterprizes
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-15 07:10 PM
3 more and it's a 30! Go to Comment
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