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The Leech Cloth, or The Cloth of Souls
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-07-18 02:06 AM
A very engaging piece, good work. Go to Comment
The Mask that Grins and Lies
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-23 10:46 PM
Great cursed item, the prose of this sub is certainly first class. While it could do with more details like others said before, I'm personally satisfied with the current state of this sub. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Other)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-12-21 07:07 PM
A good addition to the Conclave setting, which has an overall macabre feel. Not a fav with me but there's definitely sth different about it. Go to Comment
Continuous Plot
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-30 01:22 AM
Revisiting my favourite folder brings me here and then I see that Strolen had continued after me after 4 years' obscurity. So HOH to bring this back to the light again. Go to Comment
Continuous Plot
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-10-28 10:19 PM

Through consultation with Clergyman 2, the PCs had narrowed down the list of suspects to 3 possible parties:

1. The Order of Wisdom from the Earth which have a long rivalry with the Church over followers and conflicting theologies. It was speculated that the theft of the artifact might be an attempt to discredit the faith of the Heavenly Sight. The rumors currently flowing around town on the church angering their own deity and the artifact having been taken back as punishment seem to support this theory.

2. The "Unfaithful One" who was banished and just before his banishment was caught trying to taint the artifact with his unholy stain. While more protection had been put in around the artifact after the attempt, the "Unfaithful One" has his own unholy powers and his familiarity with the church would give him a reasonable chance of success in stealing away the artifact.

3. An overzealous patron of the Church who had expressed his desire to house the artifact in his own mansion in 'proper splendour'. It was clear that he had both the resources and the possible motivation for arranging for the artifact to be stolen.

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Dust of Sages
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-14 12:41 AM
Original idea, solid write-up and overall a submission with untapped potential. Go to Comment
Tome of the Ancient Kingdom
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-14 01:09 AM
An intriguing story. Go to Comment
The intertwining of Time and Music
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2016-06-29 07:56 PM

That's why we are both Weavers, and thanks for giving attention to one of my old subs :)

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A Cupid for Cornelius
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-27 05:34 PM

A well-written submission based on an amusing concept of novelty.

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Timmy the Tequila Worm Brand Tequila
Items  (Potion)   (Sentient)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-24 07:03 PM

The underlying idea is solid and logical. The overall submission is also quite likeable as a whole. A good first post.

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The Keep Beneath the Dusky Star
Dungeons  (Mountains)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-17 05:42 PM

A superb combo of atmospheric writing, images, and easy readability.

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The Seir and the death of the Old World
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 11:05 PM

I read this purely as a creation myth without any knowledge of the Locastus setting and liked the way  the idea was executed, esp. the first part on the myth of the Grey Lady and the Seir ( I agree with Silveressa's point on the sci-fi terms although personally I just glossed over their actual meaning and interpreted them as being part of the description for a titanic battle with devastating impacts on the world so I didn't deduct any points for this aspect).

Overall, however, I did think this seems like a sub that has enough content to be labelled complete (and is accompanied with good quality write-up) but still lacks something  to reach its full potential. In particular, I think the sub would have benefited if you could insinuate more on the culture of the Seir within the creation myth so that they are more vivid as a people. I think that would also address Silveressa's comment on this currently doesn't quite fit into the category of Lifeforms.

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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-24 10:11 PM

62. Extra recreation activity- train your pet croc!

63. Opens up a new career path as animal trainer

64. Provides a quick way of earning some money when short on cash- surely the novelty of seeing a croc performing ‘tricks’ on command will draw some spectators

65. Be renowned for the entirely new unique “fighting with a croc at your side” style of combat

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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-26 07:48 PM
77. New way to throw off pursuits- join a travelling circus/entertainment caravan as a trainer of crocs

78. Along the same line as 77, this is an effective way to join a travelling circus/entertainment caravan which you might need to get close for some purpose (eg. murder investigation, need to get close to a particular member to retrieve sth or get info etc.)

79. Hire your croc out as a mount for a river-side cruise when you need money Go to Comment
93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-26 07:54 PM
Nearly 80 now Go to Comment
93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-04 07:59 PM
92. A new way to sneak up on enemy vessels in the middle of the night- ride your croc to it and climb aboard!

93. Pioneer a new fashion in camouflage wear- croc-skin suits (to be used when swimming along your pet croc on vessels spying missions). Of course, said suits are made of normal clothing materials instead of real croc-skin (you don't want to upset your little pet croc on its sensitive spot) Go to Comment
Things Are Not Always As They Seem
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-01-14 12:33 AM

Short and sweet and funny

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The Majestic Silver Oak
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (City/ Ruin)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-12-22 08:08 PM

Overall, a solid piece. Like Dossta,  I like the tragic yet positive ending to the bard's story that gives rise to the tree.

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The Lost Flute of Jasloff
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-12-20 11:52 PM

A solid first submission. I quite like the descriptions in the second paragraph. Personally, I would insert some bold headings to separate out different sections but as it is, it's still quite easy to read and I didn't take any points off.

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The Golden Pool
Locations  (Other)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-12-21 06:55 PM
Short and sweet. Go to Comment
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       By: Michael Jotne Slayer

The party wakes up in an inn around a table with wine goblets near at hand. They have forgotten all that happened the last day. As they seek to find the truth they come in contact with a man that gives them a job which pays quite nicely.
When they have finished with this rather dubious assignment they are invited to dinner by the the man...
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