Like the trade-off b/w absorbing a magical spell against normal strength of protection.
Like Ramhir, I'm happy with the lightning effect on those with bad alignment.
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Besides this plot seemingly being submitted for the wrong category (I agree this is more of an encounter as opposed to a side-quest but then possibly the author has his own interpretation of what constitutes a side-quest), I think this is a solid submission. Not that original and refreshing in itself but then it did spark nice inputs from others that have added a great deal to it. Go to Comment
This would have been a solid sub and it surely is written okay but like the Captain, the fact that the reason why the mage cursed this seemingly goodness-aligned general is unexplained leaves me with an adverse impression on this particular sub. Go to Comment
This might have been a very old sub submitted in the early days and while this sub is complete, I cannot really view it as a solid sub given the sparsity of details so I will have to vote 2.5 unfortunately. Go to Comment