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Wood Spiders
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-01-26 07:29 PM
A well thought out idea, very complete. Go to Comment
Book of Eternity
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-09 07:28 PM
Would have given a 4 except for the fact that I don't quite understand the section on the downside of sectioning (do you mean there's no index within particular sections so you just have to flip through a whole section to find a particular page? if so, the description as it currently is is a bit ambiguous) so 3.5. Go to Comment
Tatterdemalions-of-the-Flailing-Leper
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Swamp)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-07 01:06 AM
Liked this kill-two-birds-with-1-stone sub that belongs to both the Whimsical Flora and Red Herring Codices. Actually, I ran into this years ago and somehow didn't vote on it, mistake corrected now. Go to Comment
Great Spear Festival
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-01 10:25 PM
A nice stub to add colour to any world. Go to Comment
30 Divine Concepts
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Defining)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-15 09:24 PM
Very good 30s. Go to Comment
Printer's Devils
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-23 07:08 PM
What everyone said above Go to Comment
Mnogos, the historian of spirits
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-29 02:27 AM
I believe everything I want to say has been covered by previous comments already. Good work. Go to Comment
Gragami
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-05 10:10 PM
I also agree abt the length of the myth section, otherwise a good piece that is well written. Go to Comment
Noamuth
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-12 12:28 AM


Good descriptions and overall good execution.


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The Knights of The Lady
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-17 08:48 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Book of Remembrances
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 06:29 PM


I quite like the basic idea and the write-up. It was an enjoyable read.


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The Magic of Food
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-06 12:07 AM
Fantastic formatting and very comprehensive article on the topic.
The formatting for the Appendix table, however, is slightly messed up towards the end (from no. 5 onwards after the Magic Allegy section). Also, for scroll 5 and 7, extra line break tags probably needed since there are bolded word that should go onto the next line. Go to Comment
Methranar
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 03:16 AM
Well written, but like MJS, would have liked more details on mythic origin and legends etc. Go to Comment
Maug, The Bitter God
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 11:43 PM


A refreshingly different God


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Mongol Military Organization
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-30 02:12 AM
Thank you for this sub, comes in handy as research material for my novel. Other than that, a solid info sub. Go to Comment
Andrew Wells, Storyteller-General
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-11 06:55 PM
A solid sketch of how this royal singer came to be found among outlaws. Bonus marks for the links. Go to Comment
Tools of the Faithful
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-23 02:34 AM
I like the basic idea for this scroll. Also, like Manfred, the Tools of the Skyfather are what I think the best part of this sub. Go to Comment
30 Hammers
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-01-29 12:29 AM
28- Twin Lotus
This set of lightweight hammers are fashioned to be used by female warriors in battle, with a spell of quick movement ensorceled into the weapon. As the name suggests, each of the two hammer heads are fashioned into the shape of a lotus flower. Crafted by a female smith, name unknown Go to Comment
The Pirates' Map
Dungeons  (Forest/ Jungle)   (Puzzles)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-19 11:45 PM
A nice puzzle to confound/frustrate players. Go to Comment
Twin goddesses of the Medusa
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-23 02:42 AM
I do like these two goddesses but the write-up leaves me with one major question: how did the goddesses spawn out of a race who's forsaken religion altogether? I mean, first you said the some of Medusan race developed different traits and how the goddesses were discovered (meaning they were always there. If so, I buy the story that the unusual traits that some Medusans develop were the twin Goddess' attempt to get their attention) but then in the ending, you said sth abt the Yuan-Ti being responsible for the Medusans' suffering and that's what led to the Goddess' creation? In this case, my question arises and I just don't see the logical link b/w the two. Go to Comment
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