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Saber Rat
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-18 01:38 AM
The fundamental idea is there (and as far as the bg goes, it's okay, but the way it's written makes things seem abrupt) but I can't give it a 3 because the amount of details given doesn't support such a score.
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The See-through Assassin
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-21 12:48 AM


A truly devious construct


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The Art of Healing
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-20 07:23 PM
The myth is excellent and also, I just happen to like all utility item subs. Go to Comment
Claw of the heart
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 01:58 AM
Aside from editorial issues, the story of Hensaz wasn't badly written although on the actual item, it's really just sth that will get whoever acquires it killed in prob. no time unless it's picked up by a hermit living in a place with nobody else. I will go with a vote of 2 as well since as it is, I think it could be some random story told by an odd old man who goes around villages telling stories or sth (like Belgara in the Belgariad by David Eddings) Go to Comment
Demano Demois
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 07:44 PM
A classic 2 to me, no logic flaws but just too sparse in details. Go to Comment
Cloak of Wailing Misery
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-02 03:15 AM
Agreed with Val.
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War Paint of Dothkar
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-19 10:42 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Swords of Kanalith
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-17 07:33 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Land That Forgets
Locations  (Other)   (Establishment)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-25 01:44 AM
An eerie place that could be dropped into most fantasy settings. Go to Comment
Sadist Dagger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-21 12:35 AM


A short, simple but complete sub with logical, coherent links between the item's origin and its properties.


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Dro'Hizzir
NPCs  (Minor)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-02 06:39 AM
This is less than a 2 because I don't think it makes sense to have an insane character that can be devoted to a care-taking responsibility at the same time unless said role was just about manually cutting down ppl but then that's really stretching the normal definition of care-taking.
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The Paintings of Marcus Diellus
Items  (Art and Music)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-02 05:18 AM
Bonus 0.5 points for the added paintings, otherwise a solid 3.
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The Green Rose
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-26 05:56 AM
Same as what other said, more details would be good. As it currently stands, it's more complete than a 2 but has less content required for a 3 so hence a 2.5 this is for me. Go to Comment
Keep Silence
Locations  (Ruins)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 02:17 AM
I think the 'all rumours' aspects of this sub but it is somewhat hard to read. Go to Comment
Glass Mountain
Locations  (Desert)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-19 05:37 AM
Another short and sweet sub. Lovely. Go to Comment
Bag of Other People's Stuff
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-12 09:04 PM
A fun item Go to Comment
Jin Kalib's Boots of Shadow Walking
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-18 02:10 AM
What everyone else said.
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Kubla Khan's Herb
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 07:37 PM
Like this. Short and sweet mundane item. Go to Comment
The Crystal Sphere of the Throne
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-29 10:04 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Beast Weed
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 01:44 AM
Esp. like the deviousness of the last line in this sub. Go to Comment
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