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Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-05 04:04 AM

The Comb of Banafrit


Description:
A finely crafted comb made of a single palm-sized seashell, overlaid with specks of coloured stones. Small cracks along the teeth provide signs of frequent usage.


The Origin:


This item was commissioned by King Amenemhat and presented to his beloved Queen, Banafrit, as a birthday gift. According to folklore, Queen Banafrit has a particularly lustrous mane of hair that King Amenemhat lovingly brushes for her every morning, with this particular comb.

Current whereabouts:
Buried with Queen Banafrit in the royal tomb

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Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-05 04:08 AM

The Goblet of Victory


Description:
One of the cursed items recorded in the Annuals of History and Lost Artefacts, described as being surrounded by a dark forbidding aura. In appearance, this is a goblet shaped much like a Viking helmet, with two horns protruding out from the sides. Each of these horns carries a sheath made of silver.


The Origin:


Originally the heirloom of the royal line of Hampstead, this goblet was taken as one of the spoils of war by King Knut I of Stormhenge. This is also the infamous goblet that King Knut IX choked to death on while drinking a toast of celebration over victory at the Campaign of Roxwell.

Current whereabouts:
Unknown- One tale has it that the goblet vanished mysteriously after King Knut IX’s death. Another source is certain that the goblet is now in safe-keeping in the Temple of Zorn, the All Wise and Merciful. There are also periodic rumours of it being seen in all places around the world.

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30 Gods of Tirexia
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-21 03:52 AM
I agree with previous comments on this sub being sort of inconsistent in terms of originality and length of the different god entities. However, I did get a sense of this sub being useful for portraying the different cultures even before I read the dialogue b/w Echo and the author. So my vote is on the higher end. Go to Comment
The Spinneret Stylus
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:09 AM
This reminds me of Forgotten Realms again and I like it. Short and sweet this is. Go to Comment
The Shimmering Veil
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:27 AM
I like the intertwined benefit and drawback but I somehow feel that the twist section is a letdown, it seems to me this side-effect should really be expected rather than unexpected. But overall, I like this straight-forward sub. Go to Comment
30 Strongholds of Evil
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2014-12-13 10:10 PM
A high quality 30 as they go. Go to Comment
Stri'en - The Curled Lute
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:30 AM
I'm usually a serious-minded person but I feel like giving extra 0.5 mark just for the hilariousness of the lore section. Go to Comment
Elematrix
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-28 04:29 AM
Versatility is certainly the selling pt of this sub. Go to Comment
Winter's Fang
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:47 AM
I like this unconventional weapon, all sections are well done and fit really nicely together. Go to Comment
The Gi'en Scroud
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:42 AM
An entertaining read, I don't mind so much that it doesn't follow the quest format. Like the author says, the story is well worth the detraction from the template. Go to Comment
Silverbreath
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:35 AM
I agree with previous comment that the drawback doesn't really seem that much of a drawback but I really like the twist section. I'm less crazy about the lore but that's just me. Go to Comment
The Thunder Sphere
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:33 AM
The hidden benefit section provides really good imageries and overall, this sub seems more versatile in fitting into genres. Go to Comment
Chardis's Impeding Arrows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:27 AM
I think these arrows are fun so extra 0.5 Go to Comment
Banshee's Cry
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:22 AM
Short and sweet. Go to Comment
Moradin's Piece
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Sentient)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:19 AM
I really like the drawback and twist sections but the lore section somehow departs from the template for this quest and I personally feel that's a bit odd. Go to Comment
Biter, the Insatiable
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-28 04:23 AM
Very humorous vibe this sub goes. Go to Comment
Howard's Haliberd
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-28 04:16 AM
Did you realise that John Howard happened to be the Prime Minster of Australia at around the time when you wrote this? Anyway, the lore's pretty good. Go to Comment
Hammer of the Dark
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:14 AM
Decent item overall but I'm finding a few logical issues with the backstory and as Dossta said, linkage between various part is a little weak. But still, I'm giving this a solid 3. Go to Comment
Olla-Taur The White Fang
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:14 AM
I agree with Axle on the main. Still, I like the twist to this item (which originally I thought was missing cos not explicitly singled out under a separate header) but really on second thought I like the twist a lot. Go to Comment
The Sword of Angradhat
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:21 AM
Okay sword all-around and how this sword is to be used to invoke the Bane ability creates nice imageries. Go to Comment
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