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Guild of the unblinking eye
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-01 09:33 PM
What a score of 3 says. Written well but probably leaning a bit towards the mundane in terms of content. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-02 08:06 PM
I like these creatures in a way but I also see the issues Val raised. In particular, when you mentioned that these Selvaks fall into a deep slumber after a meal, the first thing that pops into mind is that this is the perfect time for humans to go around and exterminate them. These creatures might have a chance to work, though, in a very out-of-the-way place where human inhabitants are somehow spaced a fair bit apart so that one or two missing persons might not be easily noticed by everyone.
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Golden Cherry
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-25 01:35 AM
A fun sub on an out-of-the-common but not too much so flora. Go to Comment
Of Spirits
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-26 10:41 PM
Although written for a specific setting, can be easily applied to any other settings. Also, a system based soundly on logic, very solid submission overall. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-03-06 06:04 PM

The ant egg is a nice touch. Overall, a solid sub.

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Korinthan Cracker Powder
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-12 08:13 PM
Short and sweet.
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A day in the life of a cleric...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-14 12:28 AM
good solid utility sub Go to Comment
Aviontix Gods
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Historical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 01:35 AM
I like the bit abt these people's views on sins and the afterlife. Go to Comment
Aspect Stones
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 01:23 AM
A neat idea and the documentary tone of bringing the readers back in history is great so bonus marks. Go to Comment
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Mystical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 09:15 PM
A good Gandalf/Edminister substitute. I quite like him personally.
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Towers of Volturn
Locations  (Ruins)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-11 11:58 PM
A high quality piece that effectively serves its purpose. Good write-up.
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Selyn DeJaod
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-11 10:01 PM
A solid 3
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Crystallised Dragon Blood
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-16 09:46 PM
Interesting take on the mana battery idea. Go to Comment
The Road
Locations  (TransWorld)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-05 11:25 PM
Quite nice concept, simple but having great utility uses. Go to Comment
Fungus Spear
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-21 01:38 AM
I'm with d_d on his pt of having more symptoms for the fungus, otherwise, this is a solid sub Go to Comment
Coldfire Urn
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-19 11:57 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Mask of the White Witch
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-20 10:58 PM

A well written piece. I especially like the coherence of this item's magical effects to the backstory.

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The Green Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-21 12:01 AM
I'm with Echo on this, a 3 it is. This has potential but I don't vote on potentials, only how it is. Go to Comment
The Wheezing Dragon
Plots  (Discovery)   (Side-Quest)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 12:05 AM
I like the simpleness of this plot but personally, I do not like the bit abt the evil black dragon much nor the implied thing abt the PCs have to help out or else.
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Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-02 06:28 AM
After reading thru the comments and all, I think this is an okay idea. However, in the actual reading, I was misled into thinking into someone blackmailed a mage into making a Foolblade with its current curse set in which confused me. It wasn't until I read the comments, I realised that what happened was the mage was blackmailed into making a weapon and she put in the curse to pay the person back. Therefore, 0.5 points deducted, making this 2.5.
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