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The Shimmering Veil
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:27 AM
I like the intertwined benefit and drawback but I somehow feel that the twist section is a letdown, it seems to me this side-effect should really be expected rather than unexpected. But overall, I like this straight-forward sub. Go to Comment
30 Strongholds of Evil
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2014-12-13 10:10 PM
A high quality 30 as they go. Go to Comment
Stri'en - The Curled Lute
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:30 AM
I'm usually a serious-minded person but I feel like giving extra 0.5 mark just for the hilariousness of the lore section. Go to Comment
Elematrix
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-28 04:29 AM
Versatility is certainly the selling pt of this sub. Go to Comment
Winter's Fang
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:47 AM
I like this unconventional weapon, all sections are well done and fit really nicely together. Go to Comment
The Gi'en Scroud
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:42 AM
An entertaining read, I don't mind so much that it doesn't follow the quest format. Like the author says, the story is well worth the detraction from the template. Go to Comment
Silverbreath
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:35 AM
I agree with previous comment that the drawback doesn't really seem that much of a drawback but I really like the twist section. I'm less crazy about the lore but that's just me. Go to Comment
The Thunder Sphere
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:33 AM
The hidden benefit section provides really good imageries and overall, this sub seems more versatile in fitting into genres. Go to Comment
Chardis's Impeding Arrows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:27 AM
I think these arrows are fun so extra 0.5 Go to Comment
Banshee's Cry
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:22 AM
Short and sweet. Go to Comment
Moradin's Piece
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Sentient)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:19 AM
I really like the drawback and twist sections but the lore section somehow departs from the template for this quest and I personally feel that's a bit odd. Go to Comment
Biter, the Insatiable
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-28 04:23 AM
Very humorous vibe this sub goes. Go to Comment
Howard's Haliberd
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-28 04:16 AM
Did you realise that John Howard happened to be the Prime Minster of Australia at around the time when you wrote this? Anyway, the lore's pretty good. Go to Comment
Hammer of the Dark
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:14 AM
Decent item overall but I'm finding a few logical issues with the backstory and as Dossta said, linkage between various part is a little weak. But still, I'm giving this a solid 3. Go to Comment
Olla-Taur The White Fang
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:14 AM
I agree with Axle on the main. Still, I like the twist to this item (which originally I thought was missing cos not explicitly singled out under a separate header) but really on second thought I like the twist a lot. Go to Comment
The Sword of Angradhat
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:21 AM
Okay sword all-around and how this sword is to be used to invoke the Bane ability creates nice imageries. Go to Comment
Fantasy!
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-31 07:39 PM
I can certainly relate to what this article says about the attraction of fantasy to me. Go to Comment
Alucardian Psionovariates
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-13 10:03 PM
A fairly original concept, to interpret vampires in terms of psionics. Write up is also solid. One nitpick with it, however, is that halfway thru the "What is a Psionovariate?" section (having forgotten the title) I really wondered abt why the exclusive focus on the Alucardian Psionovariates as I was expeceting a brief description of each Psionovariate type. Maybe change the section heading or regroup content in the opening paragraph and the What is a Psionovariate section (I mean, currently it just seems a bit confusing to me because the starting paragraphs talk abt Alucardian Psionovariates specifically. Then the "What is a...?" section starts from a general overview on the Psionvariates and then w/o warning it goes back to focusing specifically on the Alucardians.) Go to Comment
Rings of Mutual Exclusion
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-26 03:27 AM
A simple but sweet idea. Liked the illustrative uses for these rings. Go to Comment
The Ten-Second Story
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 03:30 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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