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Spirit of the Steel
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-19 08:43 PM
I like the sub as it is w/o any fluff but like Valadaar, I also feel this sub can be more somehow. Also, personally I feel somehow the sub becomes a bit disjointed when moving from the first paragraph to the second. Go to Comment
The Fatal Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 08:55 PM
The quote that Ouroboros just mentioned above has my head spinning (in a good way) but I see it as the essence and magic of this sub. I'm currently out of votes so will come back tmr to vote. Go to Comment
The Fatal Sword
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-23 07:02 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Black Man
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Side-Quest)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-09 06:10 PM
A basic 3.5 for being short, direct and complete. +0.5 for delving into the racism theme (I'm a fan of stories delving into any kind of meaningful/thought provoking life issues, hence Lord of the Rings remains my all time fav) Go to Comment
The Dreamkin
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-05 04:37 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Art of Linking
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-11 07:20 PM
Extremely useful! Go to Comment
Effects of Touching Powerful Evil Artifacts
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-07 11:38 PM
A quite neat 30. Go to Comment
The Treasure of Alaxsxaq
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-18 02:47 AM
Bonus marks for making a detailed and reasonable sub out of many of these low-scored subs.
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Post Mortem, Darkly
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-11 10:53 PM
A nice coherent plot that seamlessly integrates the 5 subs and incorporates moral elements.
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My Travels in the Lands of the Pyromancers
Locations  (Ruins)   (Desert)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-23 11:58 PM
While I often ask for more details and clarifications, I agree with many others before me that the charm of this particular sub lies in its provision of tantalising details that spark readers' imaginations and 'tease' them. Not quite a 5 for me but definitely a sub where I wouldn't want to change a thing. Go to Comment
Pegoran Spirit Room
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 12:18 AM
A good addition for dungeons plus a nice idea on itself.
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Beyond the Sea of Serpents
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 10:28 PM
It is quite long but very good write-up. The itallic sections are simply amazing.
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She, the Sorrow of Despair
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-12 12:19 AM
Too bad with the confusing cross-links. Like the others, I think the core idea is haunting and a great addition to the Sorrows. However, the cross-links can really make one's head spin.
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Staves of Servants
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-12 09:57 PM
A nice item for adding colour to a world.
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Cinque-Parte Polygnostic
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 11:49 PM
I actually read this as a serious sub and I think it still does okay. As for this being a 5 in 1, I personally think that the 5 haven't been as tightly interwoven into this sub as the other Quest subs but then this could be due to the particular 5 used. Overall, I do like it but probably not as much as the others who commented before me.
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Chards Folly
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-19 12:26 AM
Great formatting that makes it very easy to read and seamless integration of the 5 subs. A good piece of work.
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The Widerdonum
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 11:21 PM
Everything that I want to say has been said before.
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Gravestompers
Items  (Clothes)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-02 06:18 AM
To me, a standard 3.0 piece although I agree the name is very fitting and has an enhancing effect on the piece.
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The Court of a Thousand and Nine Sorrows
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-09 06:02 PM
As everyone said above, will HoH this tomorrow. Go to Comment
Children of the Lord of Black Pleasures
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Local)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-12 10:03 PM
A good tie-in with Oni and Engel.
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