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The Chosen
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-28 01:38 AM
For a prettified 'abandoned idea', this is actually very good. Go to Comment
30 Genies
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 02:23 AM
I think this is definitely a fun sub that grows on you. Go to Comment
Items  (Materials)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 07:28 PM
Agreed with the above, complete as a 100 word but also beyond the normal quality of a lot of the 100s. Go to Comment
Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-03-01 05:17 PM
Changed sub status as per request Go to Comment
Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-03-03 07:15 PM

The Needles of Zhi and Wu (Acupuncture Needle)


A set of acupuncture needles ordinary in every way except that they are of a green colour as if made of jade, rumoured to be so potent in healing properties that even revival of the dead are achievable.

The Origin:

These needles are the tools of trade of Bian Que, the miracle doctor of the Era of Spring and Fall. It was rumoured that Bian Que is in fact the offspring of the Goddess of Mercy and is a divine entity himself. According to such sources, these needles have developed direct healing qualities themselves as a result of prolonged contact with Bian Que with his godly presence pervading this set of tools.  

Current whereabouts:

Unknown- Immediately following the end of the Era of Spring and Fall comes the Period of the Warring States, a time of turmoil accompanied by many refugees of wars fleeing the Dragon Empire for more peaceful outlying regions. It was speculated that Bian Que and his family might have been among such refugees.

Note: This is historical fiction since it is genuinely recorded in Chinese history that there was a miracle working doctor known as Bian Que active during what is known as the Spring and Autumn and the Warring States Period.

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Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-12-08 08:21 PM
Update: Promoted again to normal status since this is quite an interesting Wiki or at least 2 ppl thought so :) and ppl might want to contribute to it Go to Comment
Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-01-02 07:32 PM
This is supposed to be a Wiki to the extent I thought this will be a fun submission that everyone can contribute items towards if they want to so putting it as a Wiki is just a way of throwing the sub 'open' so to speak. Since you are able to put in that two lines into the sub, it seems that the 'anyone can edit and have it appear as 1 seamless sub' part does work.

As to why this is currently in 'scroll' format, maybe it's because Muro and I used the 'add an idea' button to add our items (actually I couldn't remember what I did exactly but seeing the "user submitted ideas(2)" header I speculated what's what we did)?

Personally I actually thought the 'scroll' format suits this submission more since it's gonna be a list of items (with short descriptions) and if the format is just one big sub without line breaks it's going to be very hard on the eyes.

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Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-05 04:04 AM

The Comb of Banafrit

A finely crafted comb made of a single palm-sized seashell, overlaid with specks of coloured stones. Small cracks along the teeth provide signs of frequent usage.

The Origin:

This item was commissioned by King Amenemhat and presented to his beloved Queen, Banafrit, as a birthday gift. According to folklore, Queen Banafrit has a particularly lustrous mane of hair that King Amenemhat lovingly brushes for her every morning, with this particular comb.

Current whereabouts:
Buried with Queen Banafrit in the royal tomb

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Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-05 04:08 AM

The Goblet of Victory

One of the cursed items recorded in the Annuals of History and Lost Artefacts, described as being surrounded by a dark forbidding aura. In appearance, this is a goblet shaped much like a Viking helmet, with two horns protruding out from the sides. Each of these horns carries a sheath made of silver.

The Origin:

Originally the heirloom of the royal line of Hampstead, this goblet was taken as one of the spoils of war by King Knut I of Stormhenge. This is also the infamous goblet that King Knut IX choked to death on while drinking a toast of celebration over victory at the Campaign of Roxwell.

Current whereabouts:
Unknown- One tale has it that the goblet vanished mysteriously after King Knut IX’s death. Another source is certain that the goblet is now in safe-keeping in the Temple of Zorn, the All Wise and Merciful. There are also periodic rumours of it being seen in all places around the world.

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30 Gods of Tirexia
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-21 03:52 AM
I agree with previous comments on this sub being sort of inconsistent in terms of originality and length of the different god entities. However, I did get a sense of this sub being useful for portraying the different cultures even before I read the dialogue b/w Echo and the author. So my vote is on the higher end. Go to Comment
The Spinneret Stylus
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:09 AM
This reminds me of Forgotten Realms again and I like it. Short and sweet this is. Go to Comment
The Shimmering Veil
Items  (Clothes)   (Villanous)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:27 AM
I like the intertwined benefit and drawback but I somehow feel that the twist section is a letdown, it seems to me this side-effect should really be expected rather than unexpected. But overall, I like this straight-forward sub. Go to Comment
30 Strongholds of Evil
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2014-12-13 10:10 PM
A high quality 30 as they go. Go to Comment
Stri'en - The Curled Lute
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:30 AM
I'm usually a serious-minded person but I feel like giving extra 0.5 mark just for the hilariousness of the lore section. Go to Comment
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-28 04:29 AM
Versatility is certainly the selling pt of this sub. Go to Comment
Winter's Fang
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:47 AM
I like this unconventional weapon, all sections are well done and fit really nicely together. Go to Comment
The Gi'en Scroud
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:42 AM
An entertaining read, I don't mind so much that it doesn't follow the quest format. Like the author says, the story is well worth the detraction from the template. Go to Comment
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-06-07 03:35 AM
I agree with previous comment that the drawback doesn't really seem that much of a drawback but I really like the twist section. I'm less crazy about the lore but that's just me. Go to Comment
The Thunder Sphere
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:33 AM
The hidden benefit section provides really good imageries and overall, this sub seems more versatile in fitting into genres. Go to Comment
Chardis's Impeding Arrows
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-31 04:27 AM
I think these arrows are fun so extra 0.5 Go to Comment
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