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Town People
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-10-28 08:12 PM
One more character fortcoming to complete my contribution to this particular scoll. It's been both a challenge and fun to write about mundane (and yet not too much so) people. Go to Comment
Town People
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-08 06:59 PM

Sir Lloydlyn Sanmadran

Noble’s son in ‘Exile’


Tall and lean, Lloydlyn is plain looking in an entirely nondescript way. He often has a glazed look in his eyes when he is preoccupied with his own thoughts. However, once he starts talking of his collection, this will quickly be replaced by a almost childlike expression of glee.

Family and Life:

A recent arrival at town, Lloydlyn is the youngest son of Duke Sanmadran who has only recently risen in power. Having committed the ‘2 Great Sins’- incompetence and sloth (at least in the eyes of his father), he was ‘sent’ to the town to prevent the Sanmadran name being further stained by his embarrassing actions. Ostensibly, Lloydlyn was installed in the town to oversee the collection of taxes due to his father. In reality, he is mostly seen around various taverns conversing with adventurers or in the library seeking out obscure references. For Lloydlyn is neither incompetent nor lazy but rather an enthusiastic collector of curios absorbed in his own pursuits most of the time.

Lloydlyn is acquainted with Daunton from his days in court and is a steadfast friend with Tainu. In terms of social life, so far Lloydlyn has been rather successful at escaping the clutches of aspiring parents who want to present their daughters to him as eligible wives by making himself scarce. He does attend the one or two social events that are unavoidable when one belongs to the upper class.

Roleplaying Notes:

Always eager to talk to adventurers to gather news of various curious items, Lloydlyn would occasionally ask for help in procuring certain items in return for monetary reimbursement.  In addition, Lloydlyn might be willing to purchase particular items off PCs if said items take his fancy.

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Town People
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-08 07:09 PM

As promised, I've put in the last installment of my townspeople. By my count, there are now 62 town people here.

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Town People
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-04 01:31 AM

Christian Skoda

Chairman of the Merchants’ Guild

Christian is a short middle-aged man with a homely face. Yet, it is hard to not like the man, given his pair of smiling eyes and the warm genuine smile always on his face. He exudes a feeling of serenity and warmth even in the most disagreeable atmospheres.

Family and Life:

A very distant uncle of Deneir Skoda, Christian is married and have six children, four of which are twins, born to Gilsie Mayfair (Matron Maranisha’s cousin). He also has a large extended family, composed of a total of 5 siblings and 27 nephews and nieces. 

He is currently the chairman of the Merchants’ Guild. His daily responsibilities include overseeing the use of common resources by Guild members (eg. transportation channels etc.), brokering disputes between guild members and liaising with Sir Lloydlyn Sanmadran on behalf of the Guild on taxation issues (if only he could get Sir Sanmadran to even agree to a meeting).

Roleplaying Notes:

Christian would be a good source to contact for information regarding any mercantile issues or individuals operating a business. Christian might also need help on certain issues he comes across in running the Guild.

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Town People
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-04 01:36 AM
Since nobody has added to this in 2 years, I might as well as wrap it up. It now has 102 people by my count. Go to Comment
Pillar of Presceni
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Sentient)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-05 11:30 PM
A likeable quirky oracle Go to Comment
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-03-03 07:01 PM

Quirky in a likeable way.

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Cities of the Eternal Blackness
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-22 10:30 PM

Well-written, goes well with the Trench-dwellers post. I My favourite part is the bewildering geometric concept that their cities are built around as a result of their architecture catering only to acoustics

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The Rostral Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-18 05:45 PM
I like the evolution of the guild given in the History section and I like the structure of this piece. Not going to vote now though, need more time to think.

Some typos lurking around eg. "its" is typed "it's"; on 3rd last line, extra "the" b/w "recover" and "it" etc. Go to Comment
The Rostral Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-28 07:19 PM
Okay, decided on my vote. Was initially struggling because I see it to be at least worth a 4 but don't know whether to go higher or how high to go. But given that this is the result of the Old English challenge, I think I'm giving it 4.5 for being a very quality sub that answers the challenge and yet clearly Manfred has written subs that are more "wow" based on his own ideas, hence my vote. Go to Comment
Tsithca’ca’dss, the Trench Dwellers
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-23 04:40 PM

A well-written unique undersea race. I thought it's appropriate to HoH this in light of the most recent quest.

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Tales of the Court
Plots  (Event)   (Side-Quest)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-31 09:12 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
All Tied Up
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-09 05:08 PM
As said above Go to Comment
Pivoine d'Fer
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-28 12:52 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Highwayman's Vials
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-09 06:12 PM
A fan of fantasy and mystery, so 0.5 added to the basic 3.5 for a short, sweet sub. Go to Comment
Buzurivambavas, the Scuttling Apothecaries
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 09:35 PM
Like these low-level demons (in terms of fighting ability) that are preyed upon by the Vizier and have their own unique uses as alchemists. Go to Comment
Lady Shayla
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 08:29 PM
Same editorial problem still plaguing this sub as others before me noted. Otherwise, a great legend Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-23 11:28 PM
A good amphibian race with a few distinguishing traits. Overall a solid piece of work. Go to Comment
Princess Reisha
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 11:35 PM
I read this sub w/o reading any of the other ones in the set and it's still comprehensible to me. At this pt, I would say this is a solid sub that serves its purpose of describing a legendary personage well. However, I will vote upon revisit after reading the other subs.
*Commented on for the Commenting Challenge Go to Comment
So you wish to be a Bard....
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Players)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-06-18 07:23 PM
Not music oriented myself but the lyrics are quite lovely Go to Comment
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