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Trollisquarry
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-03-03 07:01 PM


Quirky in a likeable way.


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Cities of the Eternal Blackness
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-22 10:30 PM


Well-written, goes well with the Trench-dwellers post. I My favourite part is the bewildering geometric concept that their cities are built around as a result of their architecture catering only to acoustics


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The Rostral Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-18 05:45 PM
I like the evolution of the guild given in the History section and I like the structure of this piece. Not going to vote now though, need more time to think.

Some typos lurking around eg. "its" is typed "it's"; on 3rd last line, extra "the" b/w "recover" and "it" etc. Go to Comment
The Rostral Guild
Society/ Organizations  (Travelers)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-28 07:19 PM
Okay, decided on my vote. Was initially struggling because I see it to be at least worth a 4 but don't know whether to go higher or how high to go. But given that this is the result of the Old English challenge, I think I'm giving it 4.5 for being a very quality sub that answers the challenge and yet clearly Manfred has written subs that are more "wow" based on his own ideas, hence my vote. Go to Comment
Tsithca’ca’dss, the Trench Dwellers
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-23 04:40 PM


A well-written unique undersea race. I thought it's appropriate to HoH this in light of the most recent quest.


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Tales of the Court
Plots  (Event)   (Side-Quest)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-31 09:12 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
All Tied Up
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-09 05:08 PM
As said above Go to Comment
Pivoine d'Fer
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-28 12:52 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Highwayman's Vials
Plots  (Discovery)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-09 06:12 PM
A fan of fantasy and mystery, so 0.5 added to the basic 3.5 for a short, sweet sub. Go to Comment
Buzurivambavas, the Scuttling Apothecaries
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 09:35 PM
Like these low-level demons (in terms of fighting ability) that are preyed upon by the Vizier and have their own unique uses as alchemists. Go to Comment
Lady Shayla
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Other)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 08:29 PM
Same editorial problem still plaguing this sub as others before me noted. Otherwise, a great legend Go to Comment
Anura
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Swamp)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-23 11:28 PM
A good amphibian race with a few distinguishing traits. Overall a solid piece of work. Go to Comment
Princess Reisha
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Political)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 11:35 PM
I read this sub w/o reading any of the other ones in the set and it's still comprehensible to me. At this pt, I would say this is a solid sub that serves its purpose of describing a legendary personage well. However, I will vote upon revisit after reading the other subs.
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So you wish to be a Bard....
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Players)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-06-18 07:23 PM
Not music oriented myself but the lyrics are quite lovely Go to Comment
The Spinning wheel and the Courtier’s gown
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-22 12:06 AM


Like everyone said, a great tale


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Blissmort Toxin
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-03 09:11 PM
Short and sweet.
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Mastabah Island
Locations  (Ruins)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 08:46 PM
A good link-up with the other subs. Go to Comment
Cometia Island
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 06:34 PM
Good write-up of a grim tale. Go to Comment
Goeric's Bountiful Creel
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 11:29 PM
I quite like this and I think the very first comment captures the essence of what I want to say abt this sub.
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Uuthli Solen, The Island of Sapphires
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-17 09:16 PM
As always, beautiful execution of an idea. Will HoH this tmr. I think I'm developing into a fan of Scras' writing. Go to Comment
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