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Effects of Touching Powerful Evil Artifacts
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-07 11:38 PM
A quite neat 30. Go to Comment
The Treasure of Alaxsxaq
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-18 02:47 AM
Bonus marks for making a detailed and reasonable sub out of many of these low-scored subs.
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Post Mortem, Darkly
Plots  (Mystical)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-11 10:53 PM
A nice coherent plot that seamlessly integrates the 5 subs and incorporates moral elements.
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My Travels in the Lands of the Pyromancers
Locations  (Ruins)   (Desert)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-23 11:58 PM
While I often ask for more details and clarifications, I agree with many others before me that the charm of this particular sub lies in its provision of tantalising details that spark readers' imaginations and 'tease' them. Not quite a 5 for me but definitely a sub where I wouldn't want to change a thing. Go to Comment
Pegoran Spirit Room
Dungeons  (Any)   (Rooms/ Halls)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 12:18 AM
A good addition for dungeons plus a nice idea on itself.
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Beyond the Sea of Serpents
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 10:28 PM
It is quite long but very good write-up. The itallic sections are simply amazing.
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She, the Sorrow of Despair
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-12 12:19 AM
Too bad with the confusing cross-links. Like the others, I think the core idea is haunting and a great addition to the Sorrows. However, the cross-links can really make one's head spin.
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Staves of Servants
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-12 09:57 PM
A nice item for adding colour to a world.
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Cinque-Parte Polygnostic
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-17 11:49 PM
I actually read this as a serious sub and I think it still does okay. As for this being a 5 in 1, I personally think that the 5 haven't been as tightly interwoven into this sub as the other Quest subs but then this could be due to the particular 5 used. Overall, I do like it but probably not as much as the others who commented before me.
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Chards Folly
Plots  (Mystical)   (Side-Quest)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-19 12:26 AM
Great formatting that makes it very easy to read and seamless integration of the 5 subs. A good piece of work.
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The Widerdonum
Plots  (Duty)   (Single-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-18 11:21 PM
Everything that I want to say has been said before.
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Items  (Clothes)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-02 06:18 AM
To me, a standard 3.0 piece although I agree the name is very fitting and has an enhancing effect on the piece.
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The Court of a Thousand and Nine Sorrows
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-09 06:02 PM
As everyone said above, will HoH this tomorrow. Go to Comment
Children of the Lord of Black Pleasures
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Local)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-12 10:03 PM
A good tie-in with Oni and Engel.
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The God of Small Things
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-02 08:17 PM
Like the idea of this seemingly harmless god that could turn the balance of things. Esp like the poem thrown in the summary
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Median Forked Dagger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-22 08:47 PM
As a complete novice in weapons, I think this sub does great in that it's not just abt the weapon but also contains elements that adds colours to a typical fantasy setting. Go to Comment
A Tall Ship...
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-18 02:22 AM
A good utility sub.
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Water Dragon
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-21 12:47 AM
I can see the issues in logic that others before me have raised but somehow I like this idea so much that I've decided to vote 3 rather than 2.5 although this is in the lower end of a 3. Go to Comment
Button's, magic buttons
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-08 01:50 AM
Love utility items. Go to Comment
Town People
NPCs  (Extras)   (Mercantile)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-05-29 01:22 AM
Matron Maranisha Hopsham of St. Margaret’s chapel

Matron Maranisha is a woman in her middle ages who has aged gracefully. Of small slim build, she exudes an air of refinement, intelligence and quiet confidence. She is a figure that can easily melt into the background if she so desires.

Family and Life:
Matron Maranisha was the second of 3 daughters born to Frederick Hopsham and Heather Mayfair, who are both deceased now. Her sisters are Satrina who is married to the local baker Terry and Triasha who runs the apothecary along with her husband Philander. Maranisha also has an elder brother, Winelo Hopsham, who is father to the shrewd Finnea, Ferdinand Lenders’s wife.

From modest beginnings, St. Margaret’s chapel has grown somewhat under the direction of Matron Maranisha and is relatively well-off nowadays. It currently houses 8-9 nuns, several kitchen hands and a resident healer. While Matron Maranisha heads the service every morning, most of her time is spent outside helping the poor and outcasts. In addition, she has the confidence of many townspeople and often mediate in disputes. Most of the administration work at the chapel is now in the hands of the capable Sister Veronica. The two have become steadfast friends over the years.

Roleplaying Notes:
Since Matron Maranisha spends most of her time with the poor and outcasts, she might have gained the trust of people such as Stepanich, who might pass her information that could potentially be useful to adventurers. In addition, given that Matron Maranisha herself can be easily overlooked when she chooses and the confidence that many townspeople have in her, she is very familiar with any intrigues going on in the town. Go to Comment
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