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Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-01-02 07:32 PM
This is supposed to be a Wiki to the extent I thought this will be a fun submission that everyone can contribute items towards if they want to so putting it as a Wiki is just a way of throwing the sub 'open' so to speak. Since you are able to put in that two lines into the sub, it seems that the 'anyone can edit and have it appear as 1 seamless sub' part does work.

As to why this is currently in 'scroll' format, maybe it's because Muro and I used the 'add an idea' button to add our items (actually I couldn't remember what I did exactly but seeing the "user submitted ideas(2)" header I speculated what's what we did)?

Personally I actually thought the 'scroll' format suits this submission more since it's gonna be a list of items (with short descriptions) and if the format is just one big sub without line breaks it's going to be very hard on the eyes.

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Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-05 04:04 AM

The Comb of Banafrit


Description:
A finely crafted comb made of a single palm-sized seashell, overlaid with specks of coloured stones. Small cracks along the teeth provide signs of frequent usage.


The Origin:


This item was commissioned by King Amenemhat and presented to his beloved Queen, Banafrit, as a birthday gift. According to folklore, Queen Banafrit has a particularly lustrous mane of hair that King Amenemhat lovingly brushes for her every morning, with this particular comb.

Current whereabouts:
Buried with Queen Banafrit in the royal tomb

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Legendary Utility Items
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-05 04:08 AM

The Goblet of Victory


Description:
One of the cursed items recorded in the Annuals of History and Lost Artefacts, described as being surrounded by a dark forbidding aura. In appearance, this is a goblet shaped much like a Viking helmet, with two horns protruding out from the sides. Each of these horns carries a sheath made of silver.


The Origin:


Originally the heirloom of the royal line of Hampstead, this goblet was taken as one of the spoils of war by King Knut I of Stormhenge. This is also the infamous goblet that King Knut IX choked to death on while drinking a toast of celebration over victory at the Campaign of Roxwell.

Current whereabouts:
Unknown- One tale has it that the goblet vanished mysteriously after King Knut IX’s death. Another source is certain that the goblet is now in safe-keeping in the Temple of Zorn, the All Wise and Merciful. There are also periodic rumours of it being seen in all places around the world.

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30 Gods of Tirexia
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-21 03:52 AM
I agree with previous comments on this sub being sort of inconsistent in terms of originality and length of the different god entities. However, I did get a sense of this sub being useful for portraying the different cultures even before I read the dialogue b/w Echo and the author. So my vote is on the higher end. Go to Comment
The Spinneret Stylus
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:09 AM
This reminds me of Forgotten Realms again and I like it. Short and sweet this is. Go to Comment
30 Strongholds of Evil
Locations  (Area)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2014-12-13 10:10 PM
A high quality 30 as they go. Go to Comment
Olla-Taur The White Fang
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:14 AM
I agree with Axle on the main. Still, I like the twist to this item (which originally I thought was missing cos not explicitly singled out under a separate header) but really on second thought I like the twist a lot. Go to Comment
The Sword of Angradhat
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 12:21 AM
Okay sword all-around and how this sword is to be used to invoke the Bane ability creates nice imageries. Go to Comment
Fantasy!
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-31 07:39 PM
I can certainly relate to what this article says about the attraction of fantasy to me. Go to Comment
Alucardian Psionovariates
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-13 10:03 PM
A fairly original concept, to interpret vampires in terms of psionics. Write up is also solid. One nitpick with it, however, is that halfway thru the "What is a Psionovariate?" section (having forgotten the title) I really wondered abt why the exclusive focus on the Alucardian Psionovariates as I was expeceting a brief description of each Psionovariate type. Maybe change the section heading or regroup content in the opening paragraph and the What is a Psionovariate section (I mean, currently it just seems a bit confusing to me because the starting paragraphs talk abt Alucardian Psionovariates specifically. Then the "What is a...?" section starts from a general overview on the Psionvariates and then w/o warning it goes back to focusing specifically on the Alucardians.) Go to Comment
Rings of Mutual Exclusion
Items  (Jewelry)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-26 03:27 AM
A simple but sweet idea. Liked the illustrative uses for these rings. Go to Comment
The Ten-Second Story
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 03:30 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Leech Cloth, or The Cloth of Souls
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-07-18 02:06 AM
A very engaging piece, good work. Go to Comment
The Mask that Grins and Lies
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-23 10:46 PM
Great cursed item, the prose of this sub is certainly first class. While it could do with more details like others said before, I'm personally satisfied with the current state of this sub. Go to Comment
Continuous Plot
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-30 01:22 AM
Revisiting my favourite folder brings me here and then I see that Strolen had continued after me after 4 years' obscurity. So HOH to bring this back to the light again. Go to Comment
Continuous Plot
Plots  (Mystical)   (Multi-Storyline)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-10-28 10:19 PM


Through consultation with Clergyman 2, the PCs had narrowed down the list of suspects to 3 possible parties:



1. The Order of Wisdom from the Earth which have a long rivalry with the Church over followers and conflicting theologies. It was speculated that the theft of the artifact might be an attempt to discredit the faith of the Heavenly Sight. The rumors currently flowing around town on the church angering their own deity and the artifact having been taken back as punishment seem to support this theory.



2. The "Unfaithful One" who was banished and just before his banishment was caught trying to taint the artifact with his unholy stain. While more protection had been put in around the artifact after the attempt, the "Unfaithful One" has his own unholy powers and his familiarity with the church would give him a reasonable chance of success in stealing away the artifact.



3. An overzealous patron of the Church who had expressed his desire to house the artifact in his own mansion in 'proper splendour'. It was clear that he had both the resources and the possible motivation for arranging for the artifact to be stolen.


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Dust of Sages
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Underground)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-14 12:41 AM
Original idea, solid write-up and overall a submission with untapped potential. Go to Comment
Tome of the Ancient Kingdom
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Campaign Defining)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-14 01:09 AM
An intriguing story. Go to Comment
A Cupid for Cornelius
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-27 05:34 PM


A well-written submission based on an amusing concept of novelty.


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Timmy the Tequila Worm Brand Tequila
Items  (Potion)   (Sentient)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-24 07:03 PM


The underlying idea is solid and logical. The overall submission is also quite likeable as a whole. A good first post.


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