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Twin Lotus
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-03 03:24 AM
Updated: expanded on item description Go to Comment
Twin Lotus
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-15 08:19 PM
Thanks for all the comments above. A few responses (hopefully not seen as excuses/overly defensive remarks, mainly want to clarify some points):

Re: essence in the hammer and its power- the way I see it, the two are quite separate. While the lady smith has poured some of her essence into the crafting, she hasnt poured so much into it becomes sort of sentiment or adopted her personality kind of thing. Rather, it only radiates her aura. Such an idea might be a bit flawed and I leave that to the readers judgment.

Re: enchantment doesnt mirror maker- my original thought is that the enchantment is there to augment the advantage of a female warrior, which is speed (probably a stereotypical view of warriors of different genders). I couldnt fit this into the backstory of the Chinese female smith and it was in the back of my mind as I was writing. I actually find it nice to see my own unconscious thoughts echoed in feedback. Comment very much appreciated.

Re: powers of the hammer doesn't match the history- basically a result of this being originally intended for the scroll rather than sub. I didn't have a ready backstory so as I was racking my brain for one, somehow things got fused with another idea of mine- the Soul Craft thing (Its currently hidden and might shed light on this pt if completed but I havent touched it in ages, dont know whether it will ever come to light). So again, I acknowledge this pt myself.

Overall, thanks everyone. Go to Comment
Fumbler's Cuffs
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-26 08:37 PM
short and sweet Go to Comment
Roleplaying books
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-01-26 06:39 PM
As a bookworm in real life, I have to say that I really like this idea Go to Comment
Wood Spiders
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-01-26 06:29 PM
A well thought out idea, very complete. Go to Comment
Book of Eternity
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-09 06:28 PM
Would have given a 4 except for the fact that I don't quite understand the section on the downside of sectioning (do you mean there's no index within particular sections so you just have to flip through a whole section to find a particular page? if so, the description as it currently is is a bit ambiguous) so 3.5. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Swamp)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-07 12:06 AM
Liked this kill-two-birds-with-1-stone sub that belongs to both the Whimsical Flora and Red Herring Codices. Actually, I ran into this years ago and somehow didn't vote on it, mistake corrected now. Go to Comment
Great Spear Festival
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-01 09:25 PM
A nice stub to add colour to any world. Go to Comment
30 Divine Concepts
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Defining)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-15 08:24 PM
Very good 30s. Go to Comment
Printer's Devils
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-23 06:08 PM
What everyone said above Go to Comment
Mnogos, the historian of spirits
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-29 01:27 AM
I believe everything I want to say has been covered by previous comments already. Good work. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-05 09:10 PM
I also agree abt the length of the myth section, otherwise a good piece that is well written. Go to Comment
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-11 11:28 PM

Good descriptions and overall good execution.

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The Knights of The Lady
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-17 07:48 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Book of Remembrances
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 05:29 PM

I quite like the basic idea and the write-up. It was an enjoyable read.

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The Magic of Food
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-05 11:07 PM
Fantastic formatting and very comprehensive article on the topic.
The formatting for the Appendix table, however, is slightly messed up towards the end (from no. 5 onwards after the Magic Allegy section). Also, for scroll 5 and 7, extra line break tags probably needed since there are bolded word that should go onto the next line. Go to Comment
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 02:16 AM
Well written, but like MJS, would have liked more details on mythic origin and legends etc. Go to Comment
Maug, The Bitter God
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Country/ State)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 10:43 PM

A refreshingly different God

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Tools of the Faithful
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-23 01:34 AM
I like the basic idea for this scroll. Also, like Manfred, the Tools of the Skyfather are what I think the best part of this sub. Go to Comment
30 Hammers
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-01-28 11:29 PM
28- Twin Lotus
This set of lightweight hammers are fashioned to be used by female warriors in battle, with a spell of quick movement ensorceled into the weapon. As the name suggests, each of the two hammer heads are fashioned into the shape of a lotus flower. Crafted by a female smith, name unknown Go to Comment
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