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93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-26 06:48 PM
77. New way to throw off pursuits- join a travelling circus/entertainment caravan as a trainer of crocs

78. Along the same line as 77, this is an effective way to join a travelling circus/entertainment caravan which you might need to get close for some purpose (eg. murder investigation, need to get close to a particular member to retrieve sth or get info etc.)

79. Hire your croc out as a mount for a river-side cruise when you need money Go to Comment
93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-06-26 06:54 PM
Nearly 80 now Go to Comment
93 Benefits to owning a pet Crocodile
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-04 06:59 PM
92. A new way to sneak up on enemy vessels in the middle of the night- ride your croc to it and climb aboard!

93. Pioneer a new fashion in camouflage wear- croc-skin suits (to be used when swimming along your pet croc on vessels spying missions). Of course, said suits are made of normal clothing materials instead of real croc-skin (you don't want to upset your little pet croc on its sensitive spot) Go to Comment
Things Are Not Always As They Seem
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-01-13 11:33 PM


Short and sweet and funny


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The Majestic Silver Oak
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (City/ Ruin)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-12-22 07:08 PM


Overall, a solid piece. Like Dossta,  I like the tragic yet positive ending to the bard's story that gives rise to the tree.

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The Lost Flute of Jasloff
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-12-20 10:52 PM


A solid first submission. I quite like the descriptions in the second paragraph. Personally, I would insert some bold headings to separate out different sections but as it is, it's still quite easy to read and I didn't take any points off.


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The Final Tests of All Tests Ever
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-14 04:42 PM


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The Singing Wood
Locations  (Area)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-14 05:25 PM


Like the underlying idea and the execution of this sub.


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Memory Moths
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-09 04:43 PM


A good quality sub overall, with a coherent backstory. I also quite like the interweaving b/w the narrative story and the scientific/medical excerpts.


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Moon Razor of ManBeasts
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-07 05:20 PM


Certainly a very atmospheric piece. A good spin on a werewolf legend.


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The Friends
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (World Wide)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-07 05:38 PM


An interesting idea with solid write-up. But, I still need to ponder more before voting.


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30 Tieflings and the Gifts they bestow
NPCs  (Extras)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-10-25 02:19 AM


A very coherent set of 30s (as in a set that flows well together)


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Odinsteed
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-07 07:26 PM


A neat idea with solid write-up. Would be nice if it could be expanded in ways already mentioned above.


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Grandfather Pestilence
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-11-07 07:10 PM


Like Muro, I also remember seeing this piece when it was in-work and was waiting to read it as a full sub. Not much personal comment to add to the above. Well and "intelligently" written as OIontur so elegantly sums this up.


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Chalice of the Silver Queen
Items  (Potion)   (Heroic)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-02 12:15 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Lockzennites
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Regional)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-10-21 11:13 PM


I quite like the underlying concept. Execution is also solid. The itallic bits in particular do heighten the atmosphere well. However, this piece somehow left me logically impressed while its emotional content didn't seem to have come across much in the overall sense. In aggregate, I still think this is a decent piece, hence the median score.


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The Mirr of the Mirror-Folk
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-10 08:23 PM


An intriguing concept. Overall, I think the sub brings out the evolution of the Mirror-folk very well. Also, I especially like the first paragraph of Closing Thoughts.


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Uriankhai Horsehead Fiddle
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2010-12-22 02:58 PM


A highly atmospheric piece. HoHing it so that more eyes can see this well-written piece.


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The Grand Order of the Reef
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Area)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-05-31 04:03 AM
Only suggestion is to fix up the typos, I found a few:
Under History, 3rd paragraph- deemed "too" expensive;
Under Grand Order, I was under the impression that the proposition after the word "preside" should be "over" rather than "of";
Cuttlefish Order- "breathing" is spelled w/o the h
Coral Buckle- in the 1st half of the 1st sentence, you mean to say "Considered to be", right? the current phrasing is weird
Ray- should be "likened" rather than "liked"
Beyond Boshic- "fiery" spelled as firey

Other than that, I would say it's very structured and the details are very good. Go to Comment
The Fares Family of Deities
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Religious)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-05-17 01:25 AM
I quite like the write-up of this family of Gods and the setting when you explained the inspiration for them. But I think some of the background needs to be expanded eg. who tempered with the contract b/w Retir & Dharina and why.
btw, I think the bracer thing that you mentioned are called armguards
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