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Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-08 10:53 PM
Short and sweet. I also like the monster attraction part, adds a kind of realism for me. Go to Comment
The Weeping Angel
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 01:32 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
School Of Banewrights
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-01 07:25 PM
Like everyone else had said, a good background piece to explain the number of 'cursed or dysfunctional items' going around.

Something I don't quite get is the following line: "They do not produce weapons except as a trap for their user, for there is a shred of honesty in the bare blade or flying arrow." It's probably prose but I don't get how conventional weapons are inherently more 'honest' by nature or am I misinterpreting this whole line? Go to Comment
Sparrow Oak
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 03:36 PM
Short and sweet Go to Comment
Ratwood Tree
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 03:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Dragon's Wake
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 01:24 AM
What others said already, a great legend. Go to Comment
Ahkti: The Great Ancestor
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Trans World)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-05-24 02:38 AM
I'm with SE on this one, I actually like its light touch on actual practices and dogmas though that was more a constraint of time rather than author intention. And like Val, I love the evolution described here. Go to Comment
The Forgotten Cemetery
Locations  (Area)   (Plains)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-16 12:14 AM
Like Gossamer, I quite like the sword tombstones as well. Overall, a solid piece. Go to Comment
The Whitebone Tomes
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Sentient)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-12 07:56 PM
I'm normally not a fan of infernal themed subs, but this one is a nice surprise. I like how the boons and curses linked to each of the books is relatively 'minor' in a sense.

btw, you can and probably should link back to your own scroll on Ngama Ngama in 30 Devils by using the syntax {sub_id#comment_id|Ngama Ngama} where you replace { with [. The sub_id#comment_id can be found when you go back to the 30 Devils sub and then click on the eye icon on your scroll on Ngama Ngama. Not sure whether you know abt the syntax or not so might as well write it down here. Go to Comment
Quedoths Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 07:44 PM
Still a solid piece however this one has some typos. For example, in the first section, 3rd paragraph, 'through' has become 'though'. In the last plot, 'they' is typed as "then". Also, in the title, the apostrophe has been eaten up? Go to Comment
Quedoths Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 09:03 PM
I see, I thought the apostrophe might have been eaten rather than being intentional. I remember in migration to version 3, all apostrophes in my subs had been eaten and I had to manually add them back in.
And yeah, with items, it's sometimes just so natural to name them The..... Go to Comment
The Gale Shield
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 01:19 AM
A neat item, whether viewed seriously or as a silly item (only banging the face part was bordering on silly). Go to Comment
30 Plumes in the Distance
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-01 08:05 PM
A neat 30 coming off a seemingly small detail. Go to Comment
Bad Omen Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-16 01:41 AM
Update: Now complete! Go to Comment
Bad Omen Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-16 10:01 PM
Thanks for the typo alert. I might add more from further research after I finish the Wiki page (there's some 130+ entries in total). I was just trying to clear one of these scrolls in my Chinese Mythical Lifeform Codex so I don't have that many released incomplete subs in addition to my pile of in-work subs. Go to Comment
Good Omen Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-02-16 06:39 PM
Actually, Dossta mentioned the same thing for my Nine Offspring sub and I understand the rationale but unfortunately there is this ancient/modern divide in wording that for a lot of the names of the creatures in this scroll, I cannot really decipher their meanings and so I could only put in the Mandarin pinyin. I couldn't put down the English pronunciation either because I never learnt it properly even though I can write fluent English. I sort of speak fluent English but actually an accent shows up here and there b/c of this pronunciation aspect that I had just failed to master. Go to Comment
Dangerous Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-28 01:38 AM
Update: Same as the other one, more to come. Go to Comment
Dangerous Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-06-29 10:31 PM
On the fox, I actually already expanded the Lore section a little based on my own knowledge (relative to the Wiki page, that is). As for the extra tails, I think another version has it that each extra tail represents an extra live rather than being a storage device of magical energies. I've never come across references on what exactly triggers the form shift but my interpretation is that this is an ability they develop so that they can more easily approach human men so that they could suck their life forces. Go to Comment
Dangerous Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2014-07-06 10:17 PM
Update: Now complete! Go to Comment
Dangerous Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2014-07-07 09:33 PM
Feel free to do your own adaptations. The original purpose of this compilation was precisely to act as inspiration/resources after all. The same idea did cross my mind on a few but then I was focused on actually finishing the compilation plus as per usual, I've got myself split between a dozen different writing projects. Go to Comment
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