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Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-08 08:12 PM
A Codex of sound advices Go to Comment
Order of Priori Historicus
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-16 12:47 AM
solid write-up of an interesting idea Go to Comment
Folk Magic
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-17 06:31 PM


Overall a nice concept and good post. On the Corn-Dolly, it reminds me of the straw figure that is used to put a curse on someone (according to Chinese superstition).  . Alternatively, I think there're also dolls which ppl made in ancient China that were supposed to summon a spirit who could then do household chores for the family. However,  I think I like the innocent 'vulnerable' Corn-Dolly much much better than either of the two real-life folk traditions I mentioned.


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Bizzare Life-Forms Challenge
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-03-03 11:41 PM


I remembered running into this Codex the first time 2 years ago and thinking "Wow". Strangely, despite this and numerous subsequent run-ins with this through individual submissions, somehow I never voted on the Codex itself. Correcting this now.


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Of Spirits
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-26 10:41 PM
Although written for a specific setting, can be easily applied to any other settings. Also, a system based soundly on logic, very solid submission overall. Go to Comment
Ka'tshar
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-03-06 07:04 PM


The ant egg is a nice touch. Overall, a solid sub.


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A day in the life of a cleric...
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-14 12:28 AM
good solid utility sub Go to Comment
Coldfire Urn
Items  (Other)   (Campaign Defining)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-02-20 12:57 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Mask of the White Witch
Items  (Clothes)   (Cursed)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-20 11:58 PM


A well written piece. I especially like the coherence of this item's magical effects to the backstory.


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Spark
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Moonlake's comment on 2009-03-16 06:14 PM
I would have liked a bit more touch up on the presentation eg. maybe the first big chunk of text under Background could go into a blockquote or flufftext format (borrowing from Scras' terminology) aka italics.

But this certainly doesn't detract from the quality of the idea. Very usable in gameplay as well as just from a literary point of view. Go to Comment
The See-through Assassin
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-21 01:48 AM


A truly devious construct


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The Swords of Kanalith
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Combat)
Moonlake's comment on 2012-05-17 07:33 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Sadist Dagger
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Villanous)
Moonlake's comment on 2011-02-21 01:35 AM


A short, simple but complete sub with logical, coherent links between the item's origin and its properties.


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