An interesting idea with solid write-up. But, I still need to ponder more before voting.
A neat idea with solid write-up. Would be nice if it could be expanded in ways already mentioned above.
Like Muro, I also remember seeing this piece when it was in-work and was waiting to read it as a full sub. Not much personal comment to add to the above. Well and "intelligently" written as OIontur so elegantly sums this up.
I quite like the underlying concept. Execution is also solid. The itallic bits in particular do heighten the atmosphere well. However, this piece somehow left me logically impressed while its emotional content didn't seem to have come across much in the overall sense. In aggregate, I still think this is a decent piece, hence the median score.
An intriguing concept. Overall, I think the sub brings out the evolution of the Mirror-folk very well. Also, I especially like the first paragraph of Closing Thoughts.
A highly atmospheric piece. HoHing it so that more eyes can see this well-written piece.
Lifeforms (Fauna) (Any)
A good quality sub overall, with a coherent backstory. I also quite like the interweaving b/w the narrative story and the scientific/medical excerpts.
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