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Subdermal Monitor
Items  (Tools)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-20 07:21 PM
I'm also leaning towards what Val said. I'm seeing this as more fitting stub material. Go to Comment
The Tome of the Mad Lich
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-28 01:14 AM


11. The Soft Paradise aka Forbidden Pleasure



A potion that helps a man fulfill his wildest and most lusted after dreams and more…



Materials:



  • 6 strands of virginal hair from the female victim

  • 6 drops of blood from the male beneficiary

  • parts of a plant that has aphrodisiac properties

  • soil with Zomorrod powder mixed in



Instructions

Grow any plant known for its aphrodisiac properties (the stronger its aphrodisiac properties, the stronger the effect of the potion will be) with the Zomorrod-infused soil. Extract the relevant part of the plant at midnight of a solar eclipse day and grind it to dust (or make it into liquid form if it’s a flower or fruit). Mix in the six drops of blood from the male. Remove six strands of virginal hair from the woman by root and put them into the mix.

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The Tome of the Mad Lich
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Non-Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-28 01:16 AM


12. The Potion of False Pregnancy



A potion for ruining fame, a potion for exacting revenge, a potion for obtaining freedom… a must-have potion for women that suits any contingent situation



Materials: (note: incomplete)



  • remains of a stillborn baby, preferably fresh or at the very least, not older than 3 months

  • menstrual blood from a woman straight after her pregnancy

  • web strand made by

  • a hematite stone

  • potion of



Instructions

coming soon

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10 Magic Tattoos
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-18 11:16 PM
A good 10, up to your usual high standards. Might want to give the sub once over though to check links eg. Orthacarium was in suggested submission but no link to it in main text; Likewise, no link for Darkwater. Go to Comment
CatBee
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-07 11:02 PM
Pretty good re-work on the "young children vs old witch" cliche Go to Comment
Shrinkstools
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-08 10:53 PM
Short and sweet. I also like the monster attraction part, adds a kind of realism for me. Go to Comment
The Weeping Angel
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 01:32 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
School Of Banewrights
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-01-01 07:25 PM
Like everyone else had said, a good background piece to explain the number of 'cursed or dysfunctional items' going around.

Something I don't quite get is the following line: "They do not produce weapons except as a trap for their user, for there is a shred of honesty in the bare blade or flying arrow." It's probably prose but I don't get how conventional weapons are inherently more 'honest' by nature or am I misinterpreting this whole line? Go to Comment
Sparrow Oak
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 03:36 PM
Short and sweet Go to Comment
Ratwood Tree
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 03:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Dragon's Wake
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-11-09 01:24 AM
What others said already, a great legend. Go to Comment
The Forgotten Cemetery
Locations  (Area)   (Plains)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-16 12:14 AM
Like Gossamer, I quite like the sword tombstones as well. Overall, a solid piece. Go to Comment
The Whitebone Tomes
Items  (Books and Scrolls)   (Sentient)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-12 07:56 PM
I'm normally not a fan of infernal themed subs, but this one is a nice surprise. I like how the boons and curses linked to each of the books is relatively 'minor' in a sense.

btw, you can and probably should link back to your own scroll on Ngama Ngama in 30 Devils by using the syntax {sub_id#comment_id|Ngama Ngama} where you replace { with [. The sub_id#comment_id can be found when you go back to the 30 Devils sub and then click on the eye icon on your scroll on Ngama Ngama. Not sure whether you know abt the syntax or not so might as well write it down here. Go to Comment
Quedoths Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 07:44 PM
Still a solid piece however this one has some typos. For example, in the first section, 3rd paragraph, 'through' has become 'though'. In the last plot, 'they' is typed as "then". Also, in the title, the apostrophe has been eaten up? Go to Comment
Quedoths Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 09:03 PM
I see, I thought the apostrophe might have been eaten rather than being intentional. I remember in migration to version 3, all apostrophes in my subs had been eaten and I had to manually add them back in.
And yeah, with items, it's sometimes just so natural to name them The..... Go to Comment
The Gale Shield
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-03 01:19 AM
A neat item, whether viewed seriously or as a silly item (only banging the face part was bordering on silly). Go to Comment
30 Plumes in the Distance
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-01 08:05 PM
A neat 30 coming off a seemingly small detail. Go to Comment
Bad Omen Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-16 01:41 AM
Update: Now complete! Go to Comment
Bad Omen Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2013-07-16 10:01 PM
Thanks for the typo alert. I might add more from further research after I finish the Wiki page (there's some 130+ entries in total). I was just trying to clear one of these scrolls in my Chinese Mythical Lifeform Codex so I don't have that many released incomplete subs in addition to my pile of in-work subs. Go to Comment
Good Omen Chinese Mythical Lifeforms
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Moonlake's comment on 2015-02-16 06:39 PM
Actually, Dossta mentioned the same thing for my Nine Offspring sub and I understand the rationale but unfortunately there is this ancient/modern divide in wording that for a lot of the names of the creatures in this scroll, I cannot really decipher their meanings and so I could only put in the Mandarin pinyin. I couldn't put down the English pronunciation either because I never learnt it properly even though I can write fluent English. I sort of speak fluent English but actually an accent shows up here and there b/c of this pronunciation aspect that I had just failed to master. Go to Comment
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