Tagging this to fav to read eventually though I'm assuming this is the one I had read in draft form. Uplifting to see a fresh Weaver sub though step-in leader aka moi hasn't done anything for a while now. You going for level 2?
I see, the only Level 2 Weaver is scared away by Cataclysm and I'm trapped with the Strolenati v2 quest so looks like that corner of the Weavers' living quarters would continue collecting dust. Go to Comment
Update: I was originally going to fill up a complete 30 as an example but I have other more pressing projects to do and this is a wiki anyway so I figure that I will just let this loose. If no one takes up the call, I will come back to this one slowly. Go to Comment
The legendary aspect is partly tied up to my stub titled Sisters of Magul but I did explicitly say in the sub that as a team of three, she changed the way the Crunalan people lived ever afterwards by turning them to nomads. Even without the actual tale of how she manages to achieve this, I would say readers can take away from a purely logical perspective that she's a legendary figure.
I understand that the sub is a bit on the terse side, it did come from this short story that I was submitting to epub issue 1 but just couldn't take to the finishing line so this tale of how she's the most influential etc. is basically this stalled short story and the rest of it is vaguely in my head somewhere but I'm just not up to telling it. I don't mean to be defensive but just stating things as they are.
Writing might be a little lacking in clarity, I agree, shall bring this back to public draft for now until I give it another clarity check. Go to Comment
I haven't seen the movie and am not particularly interested when I saw the movie poster for it at the tram stop outside my office so I can't really give a vote to this. But as an article, this works. It's got a strong narrative voice and the 7 things form a single coherent opinion about the movie. Go to Comment
This I find a better illustration of the 4 sentence NPC concept compared to the last sub. The slightly contradictory of what this character is seduced and frightened by at the same time gives it a nice flavour. Go to Comment
I know this is supposedly to for the 4 sentence challenge and I don't mind its length. What I do mind is the one-dimensionality of the NPC. The seduced by and frightened by parts seem to me as if they are the same thing rephrased in a different way. Sorry, Scras, didn't mean to be harsh, but I just felt like some of the potential of this NPC had been wasted this way. I'm gonna go with 2.5 on this. Go to Comment