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Powder Keg
Plots  (Duty)   (Multi-Storyline)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-11-05 05:46 PM
Six votes, five hundred and fifty five views, and no comments. Oy! Go to Comment
Ally Shield
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-09-20 12:31 AM
These are the kinds of items that those in power would want MUs to make, they are solid, basic, and useful.... nothing flashy and unique. You could build a powerful army with these shields... if you had enough mages.

Perhaps the shields should be from a bygone era, when The Legions protected the world for the intrusions of the Goblin races. Using these magics shields and slightly enhanced weapons, these brave men protected Civilization!

Such a connection would add a sense of history to such utilitarian enchantments. Go to Comment
The Storm Globe
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2003-03-31 07:10 AM
Well so far the real diety has not smitten down the globe. maybe he likes what the Globe is doing, making the Druids a stronger faith. Maybe he is admused that his followers are so gullable that a magik item can fool them. Maybe he is so pissed that he has effectively abandoned them to their own devices.

In my mind, the world has Gods that are far removed from the tiny world or are nothing my semi-mystical constructs of belief... being nothing more than a foci for magik). so there is no God to be upset about it.

Your world might be different Go to Comment
The Five Glow Lights of the Great Library
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2003-03-29 05:14 AM
I like the can only read what is seen by their own light. That is a nice touch.

Mostly, the reason I had them become "useless" outside the library, is because if I was an immortal magik item who could not ambulate, I would not want to become "lost" and be at the mercy of my relatives to get new information or "horrors" have some human find a stupid way to break them. Besides, they would simply influence the person not to take them. THough notice, it is only influence, not control. If they really wanted to, a person could take one.

Also, by being harmless magik items, people ignore them. You are right. There are a lot of smart people out there.

As for the other libraries, perhaps they will influence the individual to donate their books when they die. The Orbs have all the time in the world. Eventually a copy of something or a comentary will come to them. If they are in a hurry, they could inspire someone to read the book in that other library, and either copy it or write a commentary.

Also remember that they are getting information from their relatives. Perhaps a few of them occasionally send things their way, as a favor for information imparted.

If the King ever vists the library, I am sure that the Library will become an "important treasure" to the country. I am sure the nobility will always invite visiting dignitaries to the library.. who might feel it important to send copies of their books here. This is just a thought.

Also, they might not see the value of other libraries or other lands. Just because they are intelligent and educated, it does not mean they are not snobs or capable of bias.

They are immortal. These books are transitory to them. The knowledge of man is also transitory. Only the knowledge that they have gained through time and debate is "true" and will stand the test of time.

There are dozens of ways to view the light balls and their view on things. It depends if you want to make them background items, plot devices, or patrons of the adventurers. Go to Comment
The Five Glow Lights of the Great Library
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-10-28 02:10 AM
The University of Linnarson is a good example of the kind of Home these spheres will have. Adapt the University to your world or install your own. Go to Comment
The Dragon Carved Egg
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2003-09-04 02:50 AM
It has been a few months now. I am slowly begining to like this Orb. Go to Comment
The Dragon Carved Egg
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2004-04-13 01:42 AM
Nope. It is an annoying dragon related artifact Kassil.

I have always seen this as mind control of the "You think this is your idea" variety. It controls you so you think it was your idea to come here and do that.

Dragons do not willingly serve it, but they don't know they are.

It might be an interesting thing, if the Dragons did worship it. They strive to please it and it thinks they are beneith its notice. Makes for an interesting higher power dynamic. Go to Comment
The Dragon Carved Egg
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-01-22 11:56 AM
Actually no.
It can control dragons just about anywhere in the world, so it can be anywhere it wants. It actually finds dragons vain, egotistical, self centered, and predictable. They are annoying. It keeps them out of civilized lands and in the hinterlands. Civilization actually has been able to thrive because of the lack of dragons, all because of the orb.

It can simply scry upon them anywhere that it thinks about, and control from where it is. Yes, it is that powerful. But it is following its own council, it does not do anything the person wielding it would ask. However, since it grants its "wielder" immunity from Dragon magics and breath, it is still a sought after item. Go to Comment
The Dragon Carved Egg
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2006-02-08 02:25 PM
Updated: fixing freetext Go to Comment
The Crystal Sphere of the Throne
Items  (Other)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2003-03-26 07:28 AM
This particular piece is a great one to set into a campaign. It's presence explains so many things for certain fantasy kingdoms. While I have written up only one, I wonder how many would be out there and if they are working together or against each other.

When the new settings area comes out, I may just list a place that becomes this Kingdom. Go to Comment
Eastern Rabbit's Staff of Doom
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
MoonHunter's comment on 2003-03-26 07:29 AM
Why at all? Great for a fantasy Toons game, but that is about it. Go to Comment
The Grand Sword of the Warlord
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2003-07-09 07:15 AM
I was never sure I liked this one, but now that I read it a while later, I think I do. Go to Comment
The Grand Sword of the Warlord
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-01-19 10:01 AM
Actually I'm a little confused by your point as well Dragoon God (You do know you can log in and have your name show up on your posts without actually typing).

This is not really a PC sort of weapon, unless your PCs are the masters of a given army or country. Why would it fall to a foot soldier, when it can arrange itself to be in the hands of a lesser officer, who will rise in rank to be a greater officer, and then eventually a leader of the whole army? Or just save itself the trouble and arrange for someone to give itself as a gift to the commander of the forces. So why would it arrange itself to be picked up by a rootless waunderer? Unless the PC is going to be bound to the Army/ Military/ Court for a good long time, it will arrange things so that it will fall into the right hands. (PCs might be a cartage beasts for him, losing him in a card game to the right person or just forgetting the sword at a bar.)

Orbs have the ability to manipulate people. Just short of mind control, it can arrange for people to have "ideas that they think are their own" or for people to forget certain things.

I will provide excellent tactics. As the GM, you should be aware of the weaknesses of any of your antagonists. The Swords with its INHUMAN amount of experience and INHUMAN ability to sense things can size up the situation and give the players/ warriors an edge in the entry. Thus you provide the players with what would of been OOC knowledge about the battle/ situation/ scenario. The warriors can then act on that.

If game systems with actual Stragegy and Tactic systems, appropriate bonuses can be rendered by having the sword upon your side.

And remember, perhaps the Sword actually wants the Lord to lose, so he leads the group to an early success, which emboldens the silly Lord, who then attacks and loses a good chunk of his precious military (especially if they follow the Swords flawed advice). The Sword, who is then picked up by the main rebel leader - who the Sword wants to be installed as the local lord - that then leads his forces to victory over the Lord.

Or perhaps the Swords simply wants to make sure that a young heir of the lord is dead, so he will not be able to marry a young princess bringing stability and peace to the land.

Such an item requires one to see two, three, even five steps ahead. That is the essence of strategy. Go to Comment
The Grand Sword of the Warlord
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2009-03-25 11:35 AM
As was stated before, this is not an item for PCs, unless the PCs are in charge of a country's military (or massive rebel force). This is an item, like most of the items in the Corvus series, exists in the world around the PCs. It is a mover and shaker of history, not just a silly item that grants some pluses. In some ways, it is "the villian" or at least "The Antagonist" in the campaign. It is the mysterious force that causes the wars that the PCs might want to stop OR end up involved in.

It has its own agenda, the great clash of military might. It will arrange things so it is in charge of a military so it can lead it to victory (okay, its wielder technically does the leading, but really he is nothing more than the unknowing puppet of the sword). That is the purpose of the sword.

And it is not for PCs to rootlessly bash random monsters.

Oh and the sword does not talk to its wielder. No where does it say that. It implants ideas in the head of its owner (and sometimes those around it). Go to Comment
The Grand Sword of the Warlord
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2009-03-25 05:55 PM
Not bad, but it really had to be fleshed out in the discussion didn't it.
That is because most people did not follow the links to the other items, nor really read the item. They tend to gloss over the Corvus items powers or that it is an immortal thing and it has goals. They seem to ignore the fact it says in the text, The items are immortal. Mortals are their playthings, their chess pieces, their hands.

What if it falls into the hands of some rootless monster bashing character it can't manipulate? Will it call for help.

It does not have to. This is simple logic. If you had read the powers, you would of seen the ability to manipulate the minds around it. You will forget it. You will lose it to a solider in a card game. If it can't manipulate you for some reason, people will steal it. If it can't, it will arrange for you to be arrested. If it can't it will arrange for you to be drafted/ conscripted into the army. If it can't, it will arrange for your neighbors in the inn to be noisey all night so you can't sleep, so you will be sloppy in your next fight. And remember, it controls those gifts. So if it doesn't need you, you don't get any of those magical benefits. (Or it will given them to you, then take them away when it needs you to die).

Most of the time, really, it is in the hands of the people it needs to be in. Unless your PC is to be a cart dragon for it, a way to get it from location A to person/location b, it won't fall into player hands. If it does, the player will be amazed that they will lose the thing.

Also the sword is a good strategist, but a perfect strategist. Can it adapt to new types of war-fare? Does it understand logistics, position and morale?

That would be open to your world (you might want it non adaptive to give a "tell" or a give people a chance). I would see as great strategist. It does understand all aspects of war, as it will have seen any number of battles lost to lack of supplies, position, and morale. So, it has the entire package. And it is implanting "ideas" so its leader will do "the right things" so they will win. It has been doing this for roughtly 700 years, and does not grow old, nor get decrepit, and still has a good memory. If you have read the Amber series, you can understand the degree that near immortal people can learn to do things.

Who are some famous generals who have used it? What was there story? If I ever use a version of this sword in campaign I will try to answer those two questions at least.

And you will need to adapt it to your campaign. I could give you a few names, but they wouldn't match your world and your world's history (or possibly your world's naming convention). Like all items of history, you need to embed it into your world. (See The Singing Blades. I did it here, but then people complained that they didn't have these people in their world. However it does show that magic items should have histories and legends and such )

Though, to be honest, this item is not the kind where people scream at the top of their lungs "I have the Sword of the Warlord". There are no bardic tales of the weapon. They know it is a sword of antiquity and might know some famed warrior/ general owned it. (OH, this is the sword of Alexander the Great? I must have it.) After all, if the weapon was famous, it would get in the way of The Sword's goals. Go to Comment
The Grand Sword of the Warlord
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2009-03-26 01:45 AM
To be honest, it is a bit defensive. I keep defending elements that are in text that people gloss over/ ignore, OR are part of the linked set. People keep trying to tie items like this, which state, for example, they are for people in charge of armies. Not PCs. Not the hoard of a monster. The item has the ability to manipulate humans and a support structure of other orbs (if there are humans out of range for it, there will be others in the range of its "cousins"). The item, and the others like it all have the line "Mortals are their playthings, their chess pieces, their hands", often in bold.

So yes, the response is a bit defensive. And you are right, it verges into the excess. I am just frustrated by questions which seem out of scope for the defined item (but are perfectly in line for other items). Some of it rolled over from the previous comment. However, you asked them nicely and I should of followed up appropriately. Go to Comment
The Grand Sword of the Warlord
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2009-03-26 02:04 AM
axlerowes, those are great questions. I wish I had great answers, as this part was a bit vauge in my mind when I wrote this. Manfred has the best tact on this, NPC. It is an NPC in so many ways.

is that it has a code of honor. It will keep promises, and make sacrifices, but how much honor does it have? Does it have a loyality to the last army it commanded, does it lust for fair battles or just to see its enemies driven before it?

The answer for these might seem a dodge, "as much as needed for your story". The swords needs to be embedded into the campaign, so these values will need to be tweaked to make it work. (Is it "The bad guy", "the good guy", "the amoral monster", "the tragic hero", or ???)

For me, I see The Sword having an internal dialog. This Honor is in conflict with its desire to "test itself (its command tactics). This tension makes it interesting.

I see it respecting those with honor, so instead of just "winning", it might have the leader deploy his forces to give those with "more honor" a better chance if they seize the day.

It might resist "sacrificing" forces that show honor and loyalty beyond what it expects. Now it has to balance the military need with its honor. Or perhaps he will sacrifice them because "he must" to meet his perceived duty to the army.

The sword does not "talk" to anyone, so it never makes an actual promise. However, it might make its own vow and feel compelled to keep it. So lets say, It swore to itself, that the Country of Good People will not fall. Now despite its best efforts, the army was insufficient to the task. The Sword would probably arrange things over the next few years, if not decades and centuries, to save The Country of Good People from their Enemy by manipulating other battles and militaries to deal with "The Enemy", take back the lands, and "liberate the Country of the Good People".

It might arrange future battles to punish the dishonerable conduct of a leader of one country.

Honor is a tricky thing. Yet, this is how I would play it out. Your campaign might have different needs. Go to Comment
The Orb of Corvin
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-07-13 02:39 PM
Thank you. I think.

The Orb's location is dependent upon your campaign, so place it where you will. It is probably in the hands of some uber mage known for "doing the world good", kind of like Gandalf. Of course, this item is not "famous", nor publically known. So the Wizard gets all the credit, even though the Orb is doing a great deal of the work.

If you are looking for the other crystals/ orbs, then click on the Wizard Corus link above to see them all. Go to Comment
The Orb of Corvin
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2005-07-14 09:50 AM
The intended magics for the Orb were the same as it manifests now. It allows a wizard to scry anywhere in the world where there is trouble and cast spells (which are enhanced in power by the item) as if you are there. This allows you to deal with "trouble" without having to leave home. Corvus was a home body after all.

The other part of the write up which you are commenting is the generic addition to all Orb Posts. It also lists the implied powers, in this case, the nudging of minds to perform certain tasks and the more universal orbs being able to interfere with each other's magics. Go to Comment
The Dark Eye
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Sentient)
MoonHunter's comment on 2003-03-24 07:21 AM
I know there is a similar posting, but this is part of a set of postings. Heck, these items have inspired a whole new fantasy world for me.

More to come.... Go to Comment
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