5/5. An item worthy of gracing the history of such a tenacious people. Perhaps it serves as a symbol of office for the king? Go to Comment

Interesting weapon. Non magikal and easily mass produced,allowing it to be easily inserted into any setting or campaign with great ease. Gets my stamp of approval. Go to Comment

Valid points,guy. I made a few modifications to it. I changed the requirements as Dragonlordmax suggested,and have also made it clear that the Smiter does not always neccassarily have to kill anyone that it's used against. As for the unlimited number of shots thing,it's not like the Smiter keeps spewing out quills. If you can stop the quills from returning to the wielder,you have him at your mercy. Go to Comment

Thanks,guys! I hope that with the changes I made,this item will be a lot easier to insert in a game now. Go to Comment

I can't wait to see the interesting new take that the Captain will put on this character. Go to Comment

A little uncharitable,don't you think? Even if the science of it is a little wonky,it still deserves at least 2/5 for the sheer creativity involved. 1/5 is just miserly. Go to Comment

4/5 for the part about the Loop and body snatching. Go to Comment

Hmm,Echo just gave me an idea. I think I'll do a parody on Spike from Buffy soon and post it here. Go to Comment

Some prankster that cleric was.... Go to Comment

Heh. Sounds like the kind of item a deranged gnome would invent. (Anre't they all deranged,though?) 3/5 just for the sheer silliness of it all. Go to Comment

Regarding her dad,I'm getting a Rachat vibe here. The simmilarity is pretty strong,since both are bastard half demon spawn that loath their respective sires. 4/5. Go to Comment

Speaking of linking,how does one do it? I have yet to figure it out. Go to Comment

Oh,and I have to say I like the idea that Kira and Rachat may be siblings. Makes a possible show down all that more exciting. Go to Comment

Thanks for the tip,Echo. Go to Comment

Now I begin to see why Nos was so against her visiting this site. Go to Comment

I'm finally done,guys. You can vote and comment now. Go to Comment

Now that's an interesting plot hook,Scras. I think I'll add it.

By the way,I've got a rather silly question to ask you. How do I link him to Rachat? I'm still not sure how the whole linking thing on this site works. Go to Comment

Damned! The reaction with skin was supposed to be triggered by a reaction with the sweat present. I guessed I left that part out.

Made some changes to ti. I hope you guys like it better now. Go to Comment

Shouldn't his race be ''half-demon'',rather than human? With that said,I have to agree with Echo that this is an awesome charrie. Good owrk,Scras. Go to Comment

Scras,is it all right with you if I link Rachet with this NPC that I am planning to create? I assure you that it won't interfere with Rachet's story line anymore than Alia did with Voonasi's. Go to Comment