Great work with the Dwarf tree gods, Captain. I certainly enjoyed reading about them! They'd make an awesome submission to any primitive jungle culture. Go to Comment
A unique tomb-guardian whose existence springs from the deep love and adoration that its creators possessed for the deceased. While I have never taken hair as a threat seriously, I have to say that you've done a very good job with this.
By the way, is it considered a great honor for a loyal dwarf to contribute his beard for the construction of this being? Go to Comment
The Green Ladies Lifeforms (Intelligent Species)
(Forest/ Jungle)
Now this is an awesome idea! I can imagine remote villages on the fringes of enchanted forests being continuously under siege by these murderous creations of nature. A perfect explanation for why some ancients forests might be considered ''cursed'' or ''forbidden'' by local priests or sages. Go to Comment
These are some noble beasts with a rather remarkable history. I love the way you've closely connected the fate of this species with the history of the elven race. Go to Comment
The Zhardun Society/ Organizations (Ethnic/Cultural)
(World Wide)
The specters that frequent the most destitute parts of a city, preying on the poor and defenseless,eh? I love them for the unique flavor they would add to any city slum, interesting parts of the local setting that the heroes don't have to slaughter. (Unless they actually care for the homeless, which is unlikely). I could even see them fitting well into the land-scape of a modern metropolis. Which city doesn't have it's ignored population of the homeless?
On the subject of spawning, do their victims who succumb to the infected wounds inflicted by the Shambler, stand an increased chance of becoming one themselves? Go to Comment
Would I be right to say that the fear of poverty is his biggest motivation, one that sometimes succeeds in stifling his morals? Is this the cause of his misery? Go to Comment
Creepy and disturbing.. I like the way this complements the rest of your Repahtian setting. The constant allusion to the obvious human origin of these abominations serves as a stark reminder of the depths to which humnaity is capable of sinking.
I've got a question. Do Repathians use prisoners-of-wars captured in wars against other cultures to replenish the breeding stock required to spawn more variants of their twisted live-stock? Go to Comment
I apologise for the lack of bold headings. It seems that whenever I try to highlight a few words in bold or italics, the entire text turns out that way as well. And as Muro observed, I do not own a reliable spell-checker either, meaning that my editing resources at this point are somewhat limited and rudimentary.
As for the odd name, it was meant to highlight the planet's seeming irrelevance. yes,xx is most commonly employed as a place-holder. This is an entity so unworthy of humanity's attention, that it has not even been given a real name.
I should probably have taken more time over this submission, but my schedule is so tight that I had less than a day to get the whole thing together. Again, my apologies for making this such a trying read. Go to Comment
NPCs (Mythic/ Historical) (Mystical)