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Emperor Whale
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2010-05-13 09:41 AM
A beautiful oceanic sub. These guys are the fantasy version of Godzilla. I'm definitely going to find some way of using them. By the way, are there any marine cultures that worship these behmoths of the deep? Go to Comment
The City of Teleleli
Locations  (City)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2010-05-07 08:57 PM
I have to agree with RGTryanor. This is a ricly detailed sub and its constant references to ties with our world bring up my childhood memories of the Narnia series. If you wrote novels based on this setting, I would definitely read them. Go to Comment
Baron Trotha
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Maggot's comment on 2010-03-25 07:34 PM
Nothing to add except to say that this is a perfect way of making would-be-heroic PCs end up looking like total villians when they slaughter the Baron. The story is also quite well-written and this is certainly an NPC who would make an interesting adversary. Nicely done indeed. Go to Comment
Grey Reaver
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2010-03-25 07:36 PM
What can I add, except to say that this is by far the most fearsome type of undead that I've seen lurking within the Citadel? Awesome job. Go to Comment
The Dumuzid
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Underground)
Maggot's comment on 2010-03-08 05:34 AM
Nicely done. I really like the way you've added some Sumerian mythology to create a dramatic backdrop for this sub. I also enjoy the touch about the Dumazid infiltrating the dreams of a tomb robber. Out of curiosity, does it slay him in in his dreams? Go to Comment
Jade Alksnis
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Maggot's comment on 2010-01-16 02:29 AM
This is quite a well-written sub. I especially like the way that Jade attained her ambition of becoming a ruler in her own right, albeit in a very sinister manner. Does she regret the destruction of her people's entire culture or did she always revile it as backward and sexist? Also, does she realize that she is just a puppet ruler who must answer to the male Captains of the Company? Go to Comment
Zombie Day
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Specific)
Maggot's comment on 2010-01-13 12:16 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Tawsooooshar
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2009-12-11 09:56 PM
That's a good idea for a plot hook as AG said. I've decided to add that as a potential side plot so as to make this setting more gaming friendly. Go to Comment
Tawsooooshar
Locations  (City)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2009-12-13 12:40 AM
That's a great suggestion, Muro, but do you know how exactly I'm supposed to go about doing it? I apologise if I'm asking a rather silly question, but formatting has never been my strong suit. Thanks Go to Comment
Mirror Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Other)
Maggot's comment on 2009-12-04 02:00 AM
This is a pretty neat beastie. I would love to use a being like this, if only for visual impact alone. Would it be possible to reduce this glass golem to smithereens by hurling large boulders at it? If so,what happens to the spirit animating it? Go to Comment
Organi
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2009-07-01 09:40 PM
Update: This is a new sub. Go to Comment
Organi
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2009-12-01 08:38 PM
Do you have any suggestions as to how I could smooth it? I've resolved the spelling errors but I take it that are other mistakes that I've overlooked? Are there any punctuation or grammatical errors that currently mar the sub? Sorry if I'm asking a stupid question here, but I'd just like to know the type of problems that need to be resolved. Thanks for commenting by the way. Go to Comment
Organi
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2009-12-02 07:18 AM
Point noted, AG. You're right, this sub was a bit lacking when it comes to suitably dramatic elements. I'll have to rectify that for my future subs. I'm afraid that it might have something to do with the fact that it's been barely a month since I stopped churning out academic essays. :) Go to Comment
Claws of the Emperor
Plots  (Event)   (Multi-Storyline)
Maggot's comment on 2009-11-25 10:54 PM
I don't have much to add except to say that the rich layers of detail given to the principal characters would certainly make this an interesting and enjoyable plot to employ. Well done. Go to Comment
The Brave People
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Maggot's comment on 2006-11-28 07:06 AM
One of my first ideas to be birthed on this site, I guess that for the Eshal, some major refurbishment would be in order. Points understood and noted, my fellow Strolenites. Go to Comment
The Brave People
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Maggot's comment on 2009-11-20 12:25 AM
Update: The Brave People revamped for 2009. Go to Comment
The Brave People
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Maggot's comment on 2009-11-21 07:59 AM
Good question. A glitch maybe? Go to Comment
The Brave People
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Maggot's comment on 2009-11-23 12:58 AM
I should probably look into that. Does anyone know who I can see concerning a matter like this? Thanks Go to Comment
Despatching A Were-Swan
Plots  (Hired)   (Side-Quest)
Maggot's comment on 2009-11-13 10:03 PM
I like it. A quirky little plot suitable greenhorn PCs expecting expecting the usual hack-and-slash routine. Nicely done, Go to Comment
Cinderpaws
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2009-11-27 12:36 AM
AG is right. Your tales set in the Kingdom of Mus would be entertaining to most adults and it goes without saying that children would overwhelmingly find them enjoyable to read. Cinderpaws is a nice example of creating a well-told story based on an extremely simple theme. Go to Comment
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