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The Hightower Skirmishers
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Maggot's comment on 2007-12-20 10:15 PM
This is a very well written sub, and I can imagine the jarring psychological effect that the Skirmishers will have on traditional armies that have never ever encountered women warriors or non-human soldiers on the battle field. However like manfred, I do have a couple of questions. Firstly, does not the oath of allegiance to Thagdad that the company swears, arouse the ire of the kingdom which should probably fear that an inspire captain in the company's ranks may someday declare descent from the founder and decide to wage a bloody war to resurrect the barony? Secondly, in a company where everything is based on merit, how would women soldiers hold their own against male counter-parts that obviously have greater physical strength? Go to Comment
Brega
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Maggot's comment on 2007-12-18 05:05 AM
So Brega is something between a vampire and a human? Besides his immunity from old age, what other vampiric traits does he possess? Go to Comment
The Shadow Scribe
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2007-12-16 11:39 PM
Though it shames me to say this, I accidentally deleted the gruesome appearance when I transfered this from my Microsoft Word. But have no fear, for I have moved swiftly to restore the Scribe's foul visage. Go to Comment
30 Assassins
NPCs  (Extras-Horde)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Maggot's comment on 2007-12-18 05:26 AM
If I ever do get to GM a game, I'm definitely going to find a way to use some of these bad boys (or gals as the case may be). Nicely done,Val! Go to Comment
Nyoria
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Country/ State)
Maggot's comment on 2007-12-17 01:35 AM
Just to add to what everyone else had said, I'd really like to see this sub expanded. What you've already written makes for interesting, enjoyable reading. I don't find them bland, not at all. Their distant origins in our own planet makes the Nyorians a unique submission to the Citadel indeed. Go to Comment
The Acibus Foundry
Society/ Organizations  (Technical)   (Local)
Maggot's comment on 2007-12-17 02:24 AM
An industrial revolution gone wrong! This mechanical horror does a terrific job when it comes to revealing the heavy price that rapid industrialization carries. Great work! Go to Comment
The Masque of Hunger
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2007-11-29 11:45 AM
Awesome work! Of all the Sorrows that stalk the world, she is the most potent for she uses as her weapon the ability to deny mankind his most basic needs. Go to Comment
Harmless potions
Items  (Potion)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2007-11-11 02:56 AM
It'd be nice to sell these potions to naive and unsuspecting adventurers. I second manfred's opinion. This has the potential to be a good scroll. Go to Comment
Disgusting Treasures
Items  (Other)   (Non-Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2007-11-09 02:26 AM
Great work with this truly disgusting sub! Some of the revolting items you've mentioned will definitely find good use in an upcoming sub of mine. It is truly worthy of a five. Go to Comment
The Bloated Moon
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2007-11-02 06:57 AM
I enjoyed reading this a lot! She's the only thing that keeps the spirtis of the dream world from wrecking havoc on a city that has sprung around the mysterious gate-way into the world of dreams. What is there not to like? Kudos on that dark, gothic spirit that you have infused both this NPC with as wel as the mysterious, gloomy world she inhabits. Go to Comment
30 ZOMBIE FREAKS!
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Maggot's comment on 2007-11-01 03:26 AM
I have little else to say except to add to the chorus of approval. Great Halloween sub! Go to Comment
Zeke and the Sky Willow
NPCs  (Minor)   (Travelers)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-23 03:53 AM
I like the tale that you've spun. It is tragic and yet charming in its way. I approve. Go to Comment
The Minotaurs
Society/ Organizations  (Knowledge/Lore)   (World Wide)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-23 11:51 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Staff of Stasis and Launching
Items  (Wand/Staff/ Arcane)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-24 12:03 AM
This idea is just crazy! It's the kind of thing that you'd use only if you really wanted the PC's to start questioning either their eyesight or sanity. But it still makes sense in terms of how it functions. I like this for the sheer hilarity it would bring into any game. Go to Comment
Wlatsoom Peak
Locations  (Area)   (Mountains)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-18 10:17 AM
A farting mountain! Am I right to say that this exactly what Wlatsoom Peak is? Go to Comment
Slumgullion Bog
Locations  (Area)   (Swamp)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-18 10:23 AM
I must say that I feel sorry for the wretched goblins dwelling in this place. Nice write-up! Go to Comment
The Smellbinders
Society/ Organizations  (Mystical)   (Country/ State)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-15 11:17 PM
I really like the idea behind this! You could use these guys to introduce a powerful comic element in any plot-line that is threatening to become too dramatic. But some details on the way the society operates and the heirachy that rules it, should one exist, would have added substantially to this sub. Go to Comment
The Barbed Arms
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (Plains)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-12 12:37 AM
This is good stuff! Just the sort of thing that might want to make your typical ''hack and slash'' adventurer reconsider the old wisdom that a good blade is always useful wherever he may go. Go to Comment
Void Golem
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-09 10:54 PM
This is certainly the most unique golem that i have ever seen. It's ability to alter the very nature of space/time elevate it above the rest of the mediaeval's fantasy automaton crowd.But what did Uhrzeit intend to use this creation for? Go to Comment
Shark Island
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2007-10-09 11:41 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
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