Just to add to what everyone else had said, I'd really like to see this sub expanded. What you've already written makes for interesting, enjoyable reading. I don't find them bland, not at all. Their distant origins in our own planet makes the Nyorians a unique submission to the Citadel indeed. Go to Comment
An industrial revolution gone wrong! This mechanical horror does a terrific job when it comes to revealing the heavy price that rapid industrialization carries. Great work! Go to Comment
Awesome work! Of all the Sorrows that stalk the world, she is the most potent for she uses as her weapon the ability to deny mankind his most basic needs. Go to Comment
It'd be nice to sell these potions to naive and unsuspecting adventurers. I second manfred's opinion. This has the potential to be a good scroll. Go to Comment
Great work with this truly disgusting sub! Some of the revolting items you've mentioned will definitely find good use in an upcoming sub of mine. It is truly worthy of a five. Go to Comment
I enjoyed reading this a lot! She's the only thing that keeps the spirtis of the dream world from wrecking havoc on a city that has sprung around the mysterious gate-way into the world of dreams. What is there not to like? Kudos on that dark, gothic spirit that you have infused both this NPC with as wel as the mysterious, gloomy world she inhabits. Go to Comment
This idea is just crazy! It's the kind of thing that you'd use only if you really wanted the PC's to start questioning either their eyesight or sanity. But it still makes sense in terms of how it functions. I like this for the sheer hilarity it would bring into any game. Go to Comment
I really like the idea behind this! You could use these guys to introduce a powerful comic element in any plot-line that is threatening to become too dramatic. But some details on the way the society operates and the heirachy that rules it, should one exist, would have added substantially to this sub. Go to Comment
This is good stuff! Just the sort of thing that might want to make your typical ''hack and slash'' adventurer reconsider the old wisdom that a good blade is always useful wherever he may go. Go to Comment
This is certainly the most unique golem that i have ever seen. It's ability to alter the very nature of space/time elevate it above the rest of the mediaeval's fantasy automaton crowd.But what did Uhrzeit intend to use this creation for? Go to Comment
You could have so much of fun with this. Imagine throwing this in a desert scenario where scorpions are abundant, and then letting some wandering PC use this when his caravan is attacked by bandits. Chaos would ensure!
Cheka,I'm assuming that if the wielder wants to call on more than once species of bug, he has to picture each individually as a swarm of its own? And what happens if the bugs he summons like spiders, tend to be highly cannibalistic in nature? Go to Comment
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