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Shugrath's Lust
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-18 02:41 AM
Points taken. I have made some modifications as suggested by Moon Hunter and Manfred. Thanks for the feedback,guys. Go to Comment
Shugrath's Lust
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-15 11:29 AM
I'd just like to mention that a great deal of the inspiration behind this sub goes to Pieh, since this idea initially emerged during a chat I had with him. Go to Comment
Tabs' Candy Carnival
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-16 07:14 AM
I'm getting a Willy Wonka vibe here and I like that. This piece is valuable simply for the charming touch it lends to your city of Drake Haven. Good job. Go to Comment
The Blackbirds
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-11 05:20 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Mummers Prance
Systems  (Artistic/Performance)   (General)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-18 01:50 AM
So it's a fantasy take on Halloween then? What are the other non Prodin elements that have come to influence it? Go to Comment
Meyurk the Egoyo
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-15 11:53 PM
Meyurk is rather well-written but I it did leave me with some questions. What are the set of circumstances that led him to killing the duke's son? This is just my opinion, but I think it would have been a unique situation that would have led to a high ranking noble encountering the mountain dwelling Egoyo. And does he have any long term ambitions like reestablishing a new Egoyo colony or seeking vengeance against the Duke?

What are his log term-goals? Does he have any intnetion Go to Comment
Yana the Dancer
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-10 08:03 AM
This is certainly a charming little character and it would indeed be hilarious if admirers of her beauty were to discover her true nature. However, I have a question. Has the isolation from her own kindred negatively affected her in any way? Go to Comment
Lord Pavisfacio
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-10 11:07 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Deathapple Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-10 08:51 AM
A little too short for my taste, but this purely a personal preference. Apart from that minor gripe, I have to agree with sentiments that have already been expressed. The idea, though simple, is certainly well-thought out and constructed. Not all deadly ''monsters'' have to be motivated by a maloveant intelligence and loathing for humanity. This is nothing more than a humble life-form simply wanting to propagate itself, but that basic genetic drive is precisely what makes it such a menace. Good job. Go to Comment
Korara, the Maker of Brides
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-10 08:08 AM
She is certainly an intriguing woman, an ogress that ironically enough, uses her skills in the are of enhancing beauty as a tool to subvert human leaders. Certainly a far cry from the slavering, hulking brutes that most of us think about when the word ''Ogre'' is mentioned. I do have a query though. Why do her clients have such disproportionate levels of influence on their spouses? In most warrior, male-dominated societies, women fill a strictly sexual and domestic role. Why are the women whose needs she meets, able to bend strong-willed leaders into doing fulfilling these favors? Go to Comment
Rage protector of the streets
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-04 05:18 AM
You said that she is an assassin. Does this mean that she accepts contracts from the wealthy to kill their foes? If not, I think vigilante might be a more accurate term to describe her. Just my two cents. Go to Comment
The Bag of Maggots
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
Maggot's comment on 2009-04-02 05:16 AM
I promise you that you will see one by July. Expect references to rum filled boots and heavy metal. :) Go to Comment
The Bag of Maggots
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-18 01:06 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Wizen Clinger
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Maggot's comment on 2008-04-17 05:19 AM
I don't have much to add except to say that I like this! Yes, it is on the silly side, but that just adds to its appeal. I guess I just enjoy the way this irreverent sub doesn't seem to take itself seriously. Go to Comment
Hazenbrazen and Gribaldy
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Maggot's comment on 2008-03-29 03:40 AM
This is an interestig twist on an old stereotype. A departure from the arc-typical brooding, sinister necromancer is always good. These two jolly adventurers are probably going to surprise heroes that have come to think of all those who summon the dead as being dour, depraved madmen out to destroy the world. I do have a couple of questions however. Assuming the world they inhabit is one where necromancy is forbidden, why did they choose to delve into it something that would have been considered abhorrent? And more importantly, why aren't witch hunters and other champions of ''good'' pursuing them? Go to Comment
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (General)
Maggot's comment on 2008-01-13 09:02 PM
One of the religous games played by the Eshal,it is one of the most heart-stopping sports anyone will ever see,aquatic or otherwise.It basically involves a fast swim from one end of a steeply walled pen to the other,something like an Eshal equivalant of a sprint but with a brutal twist.The long,roughly rectangular pen used,is actually divided into two sections,with the shorter one taking up one third of the total space.The stone barrier that divides the pen into the two portions is lifted with the aid of a crude system of pulleys.A trapdoor placed over a very large hole dug into the soft soil can be seen.When a priest gives the signal,two warriors enter the smaller part of the pen through a small side entrance and lift the trapdoor up,before hurriedly darting out.Within moments,massive tiger sharks shoot out of the hole and soon the smaller part of the pen is seething with a school of ravenous,hungry sharks.When that happens,the particpants enter the longer part of pen through a small side entrance and wait for the barrier to be lifted.When the sharks shoot into their part of the pen,they're off!Their goal is to reach the opposite end of the pen before the sharks get them.There a small hole is carved into the wall,through which an Eshal but not a tiger shark can swim.There is no one winner,for all of those who make it out alive,are declared winners. Go to Comment
The Cabal of Omnomnom
Society/ Organizations  (Religious)   (Area)
Maggot's comment on 2008-01-06 12:17 AM
Is this a sinister take on Cookie Monster from Sesame Street? Go to Comment
Shadows of Mercy
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-01-06 12:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Unclean Ones
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (City/ Ruin)
Maggot's comment on 2008-01-05 04:25 AM
The Citadel is THE place when it comes to pioneering ever more innovative forms of the undead. This is indeed a beautiful piece. Would an Unclean One be able to accuse the one that denied it rest in a court of law? I can envisage the existence of some kind of religious order that dedicates itself to reaching out to these beings and finding out the identity of the the ones that conducted their improper burials. Go to Comment
The Dark Man
NPCs  (Major)   (Criminal/Espionage)
Maggot's comment on 2008-01-07 09:34 AM
I have to say that I like this. The very vagueness that surround this traumatized being, makes him the ideal master-mind, the true author behind the rise of the monstrous evil that the PC's must fight. Of course, the irony is that the Dark Man himself is but a hapless pawn, to be used or rather abused in any manner that his mysterious master sees fit. Nicely done indeed. Go to Comment
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