Strolen\s Citadel content. 
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Maggot's comment on 2008-08-01 07:54 AM
The peices fit nicely together now and I will give this completed sub the HOH it deserves. Well done! Go to Comment
The Gauran Dau
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (Country/ State)
Maggot's comment on 2008-07-03 08:16 AM
I'll echo Moon here and say that this is an awesome post. Just to be absolute;y sure, the physical transformation that they undergoe is determined by the unique social situations surrounding them right? Man, these are the kind of warriors that just have to be pitted against the most fearsome foes that exist in fantasy RPG. Go to Comment
Orcs of Nevermore
Society/ Organizations  (Ethnic/Cultural)   (Regional)
Maggot's comment on 2008-07-02 11:34 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Helen of Grond
NPCs  (Major)   (Political)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-20 07:22 AM
Bravo! As far as Orcish characters go, this deviates the furthest from the traditional brutish stereotype normally found. Nicely done! Go to Comment
Shugrath's Lust
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-16 07:19 AM
If you could help me to identify the areas that need trimming, it'd be much appreciated. I'm afraid my editing skills are as of yet, still somewhat lacking. Go to Comment
Shugrath's Lust
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-18 02:41 AM
Points taken. I have made some modifications as suggested by Moon Hunter and Manfred. Thanks for the feedback,guys. Go to Comment
Shugrath's Lust
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-15 11:29 AM
I'd just like to mention that a great deal of the inspiration behind this sub goes to Pieh, since this idea initially emerged during a chat I had with him. Go to Comment
Tabs' Candy Carnival
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-16 07:14 AM
I'm getting a Willy Wonka vibe here and I like that. This piece is valuable simply for the charming touch it lends to your city of Drake Haven. Good job. Go to Comment
The Blackbirds
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Maggot's comment on 2008-06-11 05:20 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Mummers Prance
Systems  (Artistic/Performance)   (General)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-18 01:50 AM
So it's a fantasy take on Halloween then? What are the other non Prodin elements that have come to influence it? Go to Comment
Meyurk the Egoyo
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-15 11:53 PM
Meyurk is rather well-written but I it did leave me with some questions. What are the set of circumstances that led him to killing the duke's son? This is just my opinion, but I think it would have been a unique situation that would have led to a high ranking noble encountering the mountain dwelling Egoyo. And does he have any long term ambitions like reestablishing a new Egoyo colony or seeking vengeance against the Duke?

What are his log term-goals? Does he have any intnetion Go to Comment
Yana the Dancer
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-10 08:03 AM
This is certainly a charming little character and it would indeed be hilarious if admirers of her beauty were to discover her true nature. However, I have a question. Has the isolation from her own kindred negatively affected her in any way? Go to Comment
Lord Pavisfacio
NPCs  (Major)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-10 11:07 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Deathapple Trees
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-10 08:51 AM
A little too short for my taste, but this purely a personal preference. Apart from that minor gripe, I have to agree with sentiments that have already been expressed. The idea, though simple, is certainly well-thought out and constructed. Not all deadly ''monsters'' have to be motivated by a maloveant intelligence and loathing for humanity. This is nothing more than a humble life-form simply wanting to propagate itself, but that basic genetic drive is precisely what makes it such a menace. Good job. Go to Comment
Korara, the Maker of Brides
NPCs  (Minor)   (Domestic/ Craft)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-10 08:08 AM
She is certainly an intriguing woman, an ogress that ironically enough, uses her skills in the are of enhancing beauty as a tool to subvert human leaders. Certainly a far cry from the slavering, hulking brutes that most of us think about when the word ''Ogre'' is mentioned. I do have a query though. Why do her clients have such disproportionate levels of influence on their spouses? In most warrior, male-dominated societies, women fill a strictly sexual and domestic role. Why are the women whose needs she meets, able to bend strong-willed leaders into doing fulfilling these favors? Go to Comment
Rage protector of the streets
NPCs  (Minor)   (Combative)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-04 05:18 AM
You said that she is an assassin. Does this mean that she accepts contracts from the wealthy to kill their foes? If not, I think vigilante might be a more accurate term to describe her. Just my two cents. Go to Comment
The Bag of Maggots
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
Maggot's comment on 2009-04-02 05:16 AM
I promise you that you will see one by July. Expect references to rum filled boots and heavy metal. :) Go to Comment
The Bag of Maggots
Items  (Other)   (Villanous)
Maggot's comment on 2008-05-18 01:06 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Wizen Clinger
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Maggot's comment on 2008-04-17 05:19 AM
I don't have much to add except to say that I like this! Yes, it is on the silly side, but that just adds to its appeal. I guess I just enjoy the way this irreverent sub doesn't seem to take itself seriously. Go to Comment
Hazenbrazen and Gribaldy
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Maggot's comment on 2008-03-29 03:40 AM
This is an interestig twist on an old stereotype. A departure from the arc-typical brooding, sinister necromancer is always good. These two jolly adventurers are probably going to surprise heroes that have come to think of all those who summon the dead as being dour, depraved madmen out to destroy the world. I do have a couple of questions however. Assuming the world they inhabit is one where necromancy is forbidden, why did they choose to delve into it something that would have been considered abhorrent? And more importantly, why aren't witch hunters and other champions of ''good'' pursuing them? Go to Comment
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Tripping over the Golden Bough

       By: Wulfhere

Nearly every primitive culture has had rituals and celebrations to guarantee the proper passage of the seasons and to ensure the fertility of crops and animals. Oversight of these ceremonies was generally the provenance of local kings or priests.

Suppose that the adventurers dispatch one of these fellows. The local peasants may become hysterical, fearing famine and death will stalk the land. Alternatively, they may want one of the new heroes to become king. For a while, this can be a good thing, but the first time that the crops fail, the superstitious locals will want to sacrifice their new leader.

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