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The Maelstrom
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-14 09:30 AM
Lightning's a useful weapon against undersea monsters like krakens since it would pretty much fry them. Overall, this is a pretty solid and well constructed sub. Within the limits of thaumtech, it seems pretty belivable. Nicely done indeed. Go to Comment
Ian "Ironwing" Farthing
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-15 04:03 AM
I've got a question. Wouldn't it have made more sense for him to keep his father alive so that the old man could have been tortured into divulge the locations of the other reactors? Killing the inventor of the machines strikes me as a rather wasteful way of disposing of such a potentially useful resource. Go to Comment
The Hermit of Wither Tor
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-05 01:06 AM
When the hermit's elemental rage finally does overcome him, can we expect to see a rampaging brute that will destroy everything in its part until he is finally put down? Go to Comment
Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-22 01:07 AM
A good collection of possible ways through which nobles can dispose of their wealth. Nicely done. Go to Comment
Sagron
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-21 08:40 AM
And it's finally complete! The kraken with a taste for lobster. Go to Comment
Sagron
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-21 09:14 PM
Not exactly. It was a random, unintended effect of casting a spell that was somewhat beyond the capability of the amethyst stones that he had. In order to get all the energy it needed, the spell leached away some of his own life energy. Hence the grey hide and rotting odour. The story has been updated to reflect this fact. Go to Comment
The Kth'k'k'kt - A New Look at Hivers
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-21 08:58 AM
I have to agree with Echo with reagrd to his comments touching on their relations with non hivers and their technology use. Their amusing inability to recognize individuals and their awesome ability to process complex information with the aid of complex machinery, give them an interesting touch. As for interstellar travel, I suppose they could alter a the soldier caste and ''program'' them with the instincts that they'd need to pilot the spacecraft and complete mission. Their ability to exist as an individual independently of the hive if possible, would undermine the ability of the gestalt mind to function effectively. Go to Comment
Augmented Undead
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-17 07:19 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
East Point
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-15 06:28 PM
Hogwarts for grown ups. This institution certainly takes the fun out of learning magic. What is the criteria for selection into the academy? Is it purely based on merit alone? Or is it possible for the well connected and powerful to ensure that their kids get a place regardless of their magical ability? One thing I'd love to see for sure is this academy take in a students like Daymen Scarb. The results of such a decision would be hillarious. Go to Comment
Noamuth
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-13 06:00 AM
I imagine it would make a nice vacation spot for wealthy nobles or merchants that want to take a well deserved break from big city life. Public duels and rumours of shadowy assassins would probably add to the appeal of the place for potential tourists. Go to Comment
Tovenaar's Tome
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-13 05:50 AM
It is a rather charming idea. Adorable even, if you choose to disregard the fact that it could incinerate you with a well placed strike. I can imagine the PCs being contracted by some exasperated academy of magic to get rid of this absurd menace. Go to Comment
Jurokang
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-08 08:11 PM
That's a good idea. I think my next NPC will be an Acquan Kraken that has developed a taste for Jurokang flesh. Go to Comment
Daymen Scarb
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-07 07:52 PM
It's funny that sverigesson mentioned Rincewind, because that was exactly the famous fantasy wizard that came to my mind when I started reading this sub. As the others have said, this a great comic NPC. I bet though that in a fight where nothing but the strength of your pure magical ability mattered, Daymen would easily be able to overpower and vanquish most highly skilled mages.

P.S:Is Daymen a master of controlling organic elements? Many of his abilities seem to involve summoning various body fluids or different types of food. Go to Comment
Alamras' Laboratory
Locations  (Fortification)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-07 08:24 PM
It's certainly well-written and very useful indeed. I would certainly be thrilled to lead a party of adventurers in storming this lab.The rewards in term of obtaining texts of great intellectual value would be incentive enough. And as for facing a vast, re-animated dragon within the narrow confines of a moving arena, that would be a challenge that I'd love to see PC's new to the adventuring bussiness face up to. Well done!

P.S:Is there any way that the lab could sense the presence of oncoming adventurers and then react by fleeing? And will it obey anyone other than its creator? Go to Comment
30 Entertainers
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-05 09:11 AM
Like all your Thirties, this is entertaining and detailed. There are a few errors though, in terms of sentance construction. These somewhat muddy the meaning of a few of your sentences. Moroever, I feel that the Riddler could have done with a little more detail. Apart from that however, these are all believable and useful minor NPCs. Go to Comment
The Demon King Lacrimosa
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-05 07:31 AM
Not much else to add, except to say great first post! Go to Comment
Stalagmen
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Underground)
Maggot's comment on 2008-09-30 02:44 AM
Do they really look the way that the comic depicts them? In your imagination, that is. All in all, nice work. Why exactly do they miners though? Is there a concrete reason for this? Go to Comment
Zhalinth Deshar
Items  (Other)   (Cursed)
Maggot's comment on 2008-09-29 01:16 AM
A skillfully crafted item which can feature prominently in a variety of plot-hooks. The addition of defective and potentially dangerous tablets is a lovely touch. Go to Comment
The Banhammer
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-09-29 01:35 AM
Whoops, accidental double post. Go to Comment
The Banhammer
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-09-29 01:37 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
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