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Totemos
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-25 08:49 AM
I like this a lot. It allows animism to survive in otherwise advanced agricultural socities. I too feel the beginings of an idea coming on. Good job. Go to Comment
Gragami
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-30 03:26 AM
Comments and feedback would be welcome. Go to Comment
The Dark Crusaders
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-03 09:43 AM
I actually like this sub quite a bit. It's bizzare and haunting on so many levels. Go to Comment
The Melaran Drakelings
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-21 05:48 AM
Well written and interesting. I like the way how you've made them an integral part of the native culture. Go to Comment
Land Battleship
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-18 11:39 PM
How is it provisioned? Does a convoy of trucks carrying food, water and other supplies follow these mammoths wherever they go, or are the crews expected to take whatever they can get from the surrounding countryside? Go to Comment
The Osaki
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-18 11:42 PM
Guilty as charged. It's a good show though. Go to Comment
The Osaki
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-21 06:00 AM
You're right. This smacks of the stuff that uber powered munchkin fantasies are made of. How could I have gone so wrong? Go to Comment
Drachinacht
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-14 10:38 AM
This is a rather well written and nicely detailed description of a city with unusual origins. Adding a section on the three most powerful individuals within the city was also a nice touch that gave it some flavour. I can see this as a useful place for anyone setting out to learn more about dark elves in general or seeking a way into their lands from a relatively secure location. Would I be correct in assuming that the dragon ruling the city is a vassal of the dark elves? Go to Comment
Agony
Items  (Jewelry)   (Cursed)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-13 11:59 AM
I read it and enjoyed it. It's nice to see an echanted ring that affects its wearer in subtle rather than overt ways. And the little part that describes how the art of necromancy is carried out in Sanctum further aadds to its appeal. Can we expect a write up on Fate and Bloomail as well? Go to Comment
The Maelstrom
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-14 10:30 AM
Lightning's a useful weapon against undersea monsters like krakens since it would pretty much fry them. Overall, this is a pretty solid and well constructed sub. Within the limits of thaumtech, it seems pretty belivable. Nicely done indeed. Go to Comment
Ian "Ironwing" Farthing
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Technical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-15 05:03 AM
I've got a question. Wouldn't it have made more sense for him to keep his father alive so that the old man could have been tortured into divulge the locations of the other reactors? Killing the inventor of the machines strikes me as a rather wasteful way of disposing of such a potentially useful resource. Go to Comment
The Hermit of Wither Tor
NPCs  (Mythic/ Historical)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-05 02:06 AM
When the hermit's elemental rage finally does overcome him, can we expect to see a rampaging brute that will destroy everything in its part until he is finally put down? Go to Comment
Lifestyles of the Rich and Famous
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-22 02:07 AM
A good collection of possible ways through which nobles can dispose of their wealth. Nicely done. Go to Comment
Sagron
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-21 09:40 AM
And it's finally complete! The kraken with a taste for lobster. Go to Comment
Sagron
NPCs  (Major)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-21 10:14 PM
Not exactly. It was a random, unintended effect of casting a spell that was somewhat beyond the capability of the amethyst stones that he had. In order to get all the energy it needed, the spell leached away some of his own life energy. Hence the grey hide and rotting odour. The story has been updated to reflect this fact. Go to Comment
The Kth'k'k'kt - A New Look at Hivers
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-21 09:58 AM
I have to agree with Echo with reagrd to his comments touching on their relations with non hivers and their technology use. Their amusing inability to recognize individuals and their awesome ability to process complex information with the aid of complex machinery, give them an interesting touch. As for interstellar travel, I suppose they could alter a the soldier caste and ''program'' them with the instincts that they'd need to pilot the spacecraft and complete mission. Their ability to exist as an individual independently of the hive if possible, would undermine the ability of the gestalt mind to function effectively. Go to Comment
Augmented Undead
Systems  (Mystical)   (General)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-17 08:19 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
East Point
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-15 07:28 PM
Hogwarts for grown ups. This institution certainly takes the fun out of learning magic. What is the criteria for selection into the academy? Is it purely based on merit alone? Or is it possible for the well connected and powerful to ensure that their kids get a place regardless of their magical ability? One thing I'd love to see for sure is this academy take in a students like Daymen Scarb. The results of such a decision would be hillarious. Go to Comment
Noamuth
Locations  (Country/ State)   (Mountains)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-13 07:00 AM
I imagine it would make a nice vacation spot for wealthy nobles or merchants that want to take a well deserved break from big city life. Public duels and rumours of shadowy assassins would probably add to the appeal of the place for potential tourists. Go to Comment
Tovenaar's Tome
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Maggot's comment on 2008-10-13 06:50 AM
It is a rather charming idea. Adorable even, if you choose to disregard the fact that it could incinerate you with a well placed strike. I can imagine the PCs being contracted by some exasperated academy of magic to get rid of this absurd menace. Go to Comment
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