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Rot Beetle
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-27 10:25 PM
Well, just to clear two things, by the time the beetle exits its host, it's the size of a small mouse as is stated in the sub. Anything that size which crawls out someone's bum is gdefinitely oing to leave some damage in its wake. Plus, at this point, the beetle is nearing the end of its life-span and so dosen't really care if it ends up killing its host as it makes its way out.

With that that said, thanks for telling me about parasites latching onto the intestinal rather than the stomach walls. And I guess the secretion wasn't probably that neccessary. I might make a couple more modifications. Go to Comment
30 Beers
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-15 01:31 AM
It certainly adds some flavour where tavern crawling is concerned. These fantasy brews out to make stopovers in pubs a more interesting experience for PCs. Well done. Go to Comment
30 Divine Concepts
Systems  (Societal/ Cultural)   (Defining)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-17 09:35 AM
This a true gem. When it comes to devising a system of belief for any world or country, your sub offers a myraid range of options that could make for an interesting environment to RP in. I especially like the ''Secret Names'' idea. Superbly done indeed! Go to Comment
Sunflower
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-13 09:42 PM
I'm just wondering if drinking the brew distilled from its petals is dangerous in the long run? Since sun light contains harmful UV radiation, wouldn't drinking the sunlight stored in the plant's petals have adverse effects on one's health evantually? Go to Comment
Blood Doll
NPCs  (Extras)   (Agricultural)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-10 12:34 AM
Nicely done. They could be inserted into almost any fantasy genre, ranging from high to modern. This sub, with its details about blood-borne diseases and evantual death, also has nice sinister undertones. Go to Comment
The Denari Iron Legion
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-04 01:40 AM
Nice. Fantasy terminators desgined to hunt down mages and wizards with no mercy. I'm sure many of Danari's nieghbours are simply dying to get their hands on a few of these war machines. Go to Comment
Col. Locker Chapman
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Combative)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-30 02:21 AM
Whimsical and quaint, but nevertheless a courageous and battle hardened commander. He makes for gripping, entertaining stuff. Go to Comment
Pirtuk Man
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Tundra/ Arctic)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-29 12:59 AM
Amusing and dangerous at the same time. I wouldn't know whether to be tickled or terrified if I ever met one of these things. Why are there such stark tempremental differences between individual Pirtuk Men though, ranging from the gentle Frosty to the homicidal Tla Goh Ti? Go to Comment
The Circle of Life Armoury
Locations  (Other)   (Any)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-29 12:27 AM
What the others said. This provides an excellent background for any potential game and by influencing the personal quirks of the weapon, a GM can shape the path that a PC takes. Also, as Scras commented, it is extremely well written. I foresee this becoming one of the most popular subs in the Citadel. Go to Comment
Kugamu
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mystical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-29 01:04 AM
Kugamu was actually inspired by your very own The Ghillie-Goat Man. The idea of defeated gods becoming minor spirits that live on as symbols is one of the most compelling concepts spawned by your inspired Totemos sub, at least as far as I'm concerned. Go to Comment
Printer's Devils
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (City/ Ruin)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-30 02:19 AM
Wicked little things. Malovelance is Mephistori right? Go to Comment
Mnogos, the historian of spirits
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-29 12:05 AM
If I understood correctly, Mgonos learns about the various totemos he encounters by tapping into the ancestral memories of the native people of the region? Thanks. I got to say that the existence of such a character opens up some really fascinating possibilities. Well done. Go to Comment
The Suit of Purity
Items  (Armor)   (Villanous)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-26 03:50 AM
I'm guessing this is the evil twin of Sracs' set of black armor?Although the description could do with a little more detail, the magical effect of the item has been nicely thought out. With its knack of turning good into evil, it's certainly a dangerous item to own. Why exactly did the king have this commisioned though? Was he terrified of the prospect of assasination? Go to Comment
Skelroth's Panoply of Atrocity
Items  (Armor)   (Cursed)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-26 03:36 AM
A snare for evil overlords. Nicely done indeed. Go to Comment
Spirit mail
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-25 07:51 AM
Am I right in assuming that the suit of armor derives its power from the lingering essence of the lich that was destroyed while wearing it? Go to Comment
Totemos
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (General)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-25 07:49 AM
I like this a lot. It allows animism to survive in otherwise advanced agricultural socities. I too feel the beginings of an idea coming on. Good job. Go to Comment
Gragami
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-30 02:26 AM
Comments and feedback would be welcome. Go to Comment
The Dark Crusaders
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Trans World)
Maggot's comment on 2008-12-03 08:43 AM
I actually like this sub quite a bit. It's bizzare and haunting on so many levels. Go to Comment
The Melaran Drakelings
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-21 04:48 AM
Well written and interesting. I like the way how you've made them an integral part of the native culture. Go to Comment
Land Battleship
Items  (Transports)   (Combat)
Maggot's comment on 2008-11-18 10:39 PM
How is it provisioned? Does a convoy of trucks carrying food, water and other supplies follow these mammoths wherever they go, or are the crews expected to take whatever they can get from the surrounding countryside? Go to Comment
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