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Burly Bill's Beautiful Beverages
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-05-02 06:57 PM
I like it. It's a bit on the short side, but it builds a nice picture in my head. I'd like to know more about Humanity First. Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-05-02 01:03 PM
I also can't wait to see Evie figure out Jennifer's abilities. :P Go to Comment
New Personal Best
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-05-02 11:36 AM
To be honest, I have no idea what happened. I've idly considered what form Peyton's expression might have taken, but... it's not the story so I never gave it a lot of thought. :) Go to Comment
New Personal Best
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-05-06 03:18 PM
I like that perspective a lot. It wasn't what I was going for, but I think that could make an interesting, non-Delta Factor twist. Deus Ex: ESPN Edition.

:P Go to Comment
New Personal Best
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-05-22 11:24 AM
I was actually sorta shooting for the other way around. :P Sharing ideas through the tales. But as long as both came through... :D Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-28 12:07 PM
Still depressing. Well done. But depressing.

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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-24 11:49 AM
This one is all Sil, all heavy background. Depressing as hell. Go to Comment
Yarnuks
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-21 11:35 AM
Interesting. I'd have liked to hear more about these cities in the deep, and the society they've created, but I can easily see this appearing in a seagoing Everway adventure. Go to Comment
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-21 11:45 AM
I haven't voted on others in the series which have stemmed from our RP, but this one contained a lot more of just your ideas. I like some of the detail you created for Evie which we never played out, but exists as background to inform the RP. Nicely done. Go to Comment
Ellen Lancaster
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-16 02:47 PM
Update: A few corrections, clarifications, refinements, and other nitpicking. Go to Comment
Ellen Lancaster
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-17 12:28 PM
"One of us... one of us...." :P

But thank you.

I think I like the interview format. I think the series will continue in that vein. Go to Comment
Ellen Lancaster
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-18 11:41 AM
I think, next up, the man, the myth, the legend himself, Congressman Jacob "If you don't stop calling me Polaris I'll squeeze until your eyeballs pop" Richter.

Jenny.... maybe someday. But if you've read her entry on the website, you might notice its riddled with lies? Not much chance I post the truth here. :) Go to Comment
Ellen Lancaster
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-22 03:00 PM
Thank you. I was worried about presenting characters in this style coming across as more story and less character. I'm glad people are seeing both. Go to Comment
Flirting dress
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-17 02:56 PM
I was stuck for how this might be used in a game, until I was reading Overly Attached Chainmail. I've suggested a link, but here's my thought.

You know that age old argument about chainmail bikinis? Maybe all those chainmail bikinis are really Flirting Chainmail??? All the protection of chainmail, all the fan service of a bikini! Go to Comment
Flirting dress
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-17 02:59 PM
I could see a use for this in a cyberpunk or other futureish setting to. Advanced fabric with hidden controls and fiberoptics let the wearer make any part of the dress (and why limit it to just dresses or women's attire?) transparent. Heck, it could be the hot new thing for men and women who want to show off without freezing off their good bits! Go to Comment
7 More Reasons Why Not Everyone is a Magic User
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Longspeak's comment on 2013-11-27 01:52 PM
Magic, like any in-born talent, is not always the calling of the one so blessed. Perhaps I'm blessed with the talent, but want to be a wandering minstrel instead.

There's a brilliant short story by Robert Sheckley. In a world of black magic and darkest sorcery, one man's son... wants to be an accountant. Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-10 05:52 PM
Thank you. The Sarah part of your with is hereby granted: http://strolen.com/viewing/Sarah_Voltaire Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 12:51 PM
Update: The eternal battle with formatting issues. Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 12:52 PM
Update: The eternal battle with formatting issues. Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
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Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 12:54 PM
Update: The eternal battle with formatting issues. Go to Comment
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