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Ellen Lancaster
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-16 02:47 PM
Update: A few corrections, clarifications, refinements, and other nitpicking. Go to Comment
Ellen Lancaster
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-17 12:28 PM
"One of us... one of us...." :P

But thank you.

I think I like the interview format. I think the series will continue in that vein. Go to Comment
Flirting dress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-17 02:56 PM
I was stuck for how this might be used in a game, until I was reading Overly Attached Chainmail. I've suggested a link, but here's my thought.

You know that age old argument about chainmail bikinis? Maybe all those chainmail bikinis are really Flirting Chainmail??? All the protection of chainmail, all the fan service of a bikini! Go to Comment
Flirting dress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-17 02:59 PM
I could see a use for this in a cyberpunk or other futureish setting to. Advanced fabric with hidden controls and fiberoptics let the wearer make any part of the dress (and why limit it to just dresses or women's attire?) transparent. Heck, it could be the hot new thing for men and women who want to show off without freezing off their good bits! Go to Comment
7 More Reasons Why Not Everyone is a Magic User
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - Genre)
Longspeak's comment on 2013-11-27 01:52 PM
Magic, like any in-born talent, is not always the calling of the one so blessed. Perhaps I'm blessed with the talent, but want to be a wandering minstrel instead.

There's a brilliant short story by Robert Sheckley. In a world of black magic and darkest sorcery, one man's son... wants to be an accountant. Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-10 05:52 PM
Thank you. The Sarah part of your with is hereby granted: http://strolen.com/viewing/Sarah_Voltaire Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 12:51 PM
Update: The eternal battle with formatting issues. Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 12:52 PM
Update: The eternal battle with formatting issues. Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 12:54 PM
Update: The eternal battle with formatting issues. Go to Comment
The Song That Doesn't End, Part One
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 12:56 PM
Update: The eternal battle with formatting issues. Go to Comment
Sarah Voltaire
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 11:16 AM
Thank you. I struggled with some of the important "secret" moments, before finally deciding to leave some out so other GMs can make their OWN secrets, and explaining one important one, about why she's no longer Delta. Ellen's in the works! Go to Comment
Sarah Voltaire
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 11:17 AM
Thank you. Much appreciated. Go to Comment
Rage!
Articles  (At Table)   (Game Mastering)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-10 01:56 PM
A bit crunchy for my personal taste, but that in no way detracts for the quality of the sub. Well done, well presented. Excellent sub. Go to Comment
Solitude and The Long Road Evelyn's Path pt 2
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-06 03:57 AM
Part of the issue is Evie doesn't know much more at this stage than what she's mentioned, snippets seen on television years before. Sarah Voltaire will (eventually, sooner or later, maybe), have her own submission. Go to Comment
Solitude and The Long Road Evelyn's path pt 1
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-02 05:31 PM
Is she pregnant? Yes.
Is she going to lay an egg? Yes.
Is she going to be a human when that happens? Yes.
Is her girlfriend going to be shocked? Very much so.
What's going to come out of the egg? Probably an aardvark. Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-03-12 12:13 PM
"I'm almost taking the "Self-named Characters" issue as a challenge..."

That's exactly what ran through my head. I've never considered a self-named character before, and now I wanna try making one. :P Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-03-12 12:26 PM
A suggestion to put before all others, in my admittedly not very humble opinion:

Just Do It!!!!
For some people, making that first submission can be daunting. Having people looking over and judging your work can cause anxiety, which might keep you from posting it.

Just Do It! Ignore the voice that says no, and share your ideas. Don't be afraid of honest criticism. Follow all the other advice to make it the best you can, but remember the old saying "Perfect is the enemy of Good." Do your best and then GET THAT SUB OUT THERE! Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-03-12 12:26 PM
Good thoughts. I've added one of my own. Go to Comment
Valadaars First Submission Advice
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Citadel Help)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-04-11 11:57 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
7 Things About Criticism
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Citadel Help)
Longspeak's comment on 2014-02-23 08:46 PM
Excellent. Gets right into the heart of what can go wrong in critiquing the work of others, and provides important suggestions for expressing constructive critiques. Go to Comment
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