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City Image - Barrowtown
Locations  (City)   (Any)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 01:48 PM
Very cool. It is a creepy evil setting that makes sense. Go to Comment
City Image - Bridgedale AKA The River Wall
Locations  (City)   (Water)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-27 06:31 PM
I have completed the set. WooHoo!

It is a very nice post too. There are a lot of alluded to details. Go to Comment
City Image - Punampu
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 01:50 PM
I get the feeling of being in Mexico where there was a once proud peoples completely eclipsed by the newcomers.

The mighty people fall because someone else is better. Go to Comment
City Image - Carnous
Locations  (City)   (Other)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 01:53 PM
Very Cool. A city that is constantly being built up. It is like a boat, except its water is toxic land.

Spelling and Grammer erros annoyed me enought to downgrade from a 5.

And about the post above, actually I hope they never find anything resistant, otherwise this would become "just another city", rather than a place of business that is ever changing. Go to Comment
City Image - Kaldarien
Locations  (City)   (Water)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 01:55 PM
Lots of little details help to make it more real. Good job. Go to Comment
City Image - Canvas City
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:10 PM
It was a pretty boring city until the last paragraph, with the dragon. That made it cool.

Linking the locatinos works fairly well for me as well. Go to Comment
City Image - The Imperial city of Malcaresh
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:25 PM
Nice sense of history and drama through architecture. Go to Comment
City Image - Walkabout Creek
Locations  (City)   (Water)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:27 PM
That much quartz would require magic. Much too close to the volcano without mucho magic. Kind of neat, but way to many questions. Go to Comment
City Image - Bronzalia
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:31 PM
I like the appearance of this city. It gives a little feel for the quirks of these people and a touch of the history. Everything is distinctive enough that it implies actual reasons. Go to Comment
City Image - Pier Point
Locations  (City)   (Any)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-14 11:50 PM
Good for the story Go to Comment
City Image - Bayaallatalstonescha
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:34 PM
The description is really hard to follow, but I can understand why. The last bit of the description explains it all.

It is a magical place full of awe. A city based around a view of the ocean - an aquarium. Very cool. Go to Comment
City Image - Silver Gate
Locations  (City)   (Water)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:35 PM
A good town with an explanation and fun details. +.5 for the slang for the cable cars. Go to Comment
City Image - BroadMound
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:36 PM
More cool dragon cities. Go to Comment
City Image - Payan - City of the Priest Kings
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-14 11:49 PM
This was kind of strange and I was having trouble properly visualizing it, until I saw the image. THe picture helped to make this for me. Go to Comment
The Rebec
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-04 11:54 PM
Okay, another good history lesson done in posts instead of articles. Are you making them posts because nobody reads the articles? Go to Comment
The Organetto
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-04 11:53 PM
I would not of believed this one if I had not seen the picture. You really need to see the picture. Go to Comment
The Lizard
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-04 11:52 PM
Cool. Again totally mundane, but things you didn't know about. Go to Comment
Arune Spheres
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-04 11:51 PM
These are really cool. It takes a tool used in one trade and transfers it to another... adaptive technologies.

This is a musical item you just would not of thought of. It has no approximate historical analog. Thus worthy. Go to Comment
Novel Musical Instruments
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-04 11:49 PM
Very cool. Things to fill out the background and set the mood. Go to Comment
Novel Musical Instruments
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-04 11:53 PM
These are a real world item aren't they? Go to Comment
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