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City Image - Barrowtown
Locations  (City)   (Any)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:48 PM
Very cool. It is a creepy evil setting that makes sense. Go to Comment
City Image - Bridgedale AKA The River Wall
Locations  (City)   (Water)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-27 07:31 PM
I have completed the set. WooHoo!

It is a very nice post too. There are a lot of alluded to details. Go to Comment
City Image - Punampu
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:50 PM
I get the feeling of being in Mexico where there was a once proud peoples completely eclipsed by the newcomers.

The mighty people fall because someone else is better. Go to Comment
City Image - Carnous
Locations  (City)   (Other)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:53 PM
Very Cool. A city that is constantly being built up. It is like a boat, except its water is toxic land.

Spelling and Grammer erros annoyed me enought to downgrade from a 5.

And about the post above, actually I hope they never find anything resistant, otherwise this would become "just another city", rather than a place of business that is ever changing. Go to Comment
City Image - Kaldarien
Locations  (City)   (Water)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 02:55 PM
Lots of little details help to make it more real. Good job. Go to Comment
City Image - Canvas City
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 03:10 PM
It was a pretty boring city until the last paragraph, with the dragon. That made it cool.

Linking the locatinos works fairly well for me as well. Go to Comment
City Image - The Imperial city of Malcaresh
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 03:25 PM
Nice sense of history and drama through architecture. Go to Comment
City Image - Walkabout Creek
Locations  (City)   (Water)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 03:27 PM
That much quartz would require magic. Much too close to the volcano without mucho magic. Kind of neat, but way to many questions. Go to Comment
City Image - Bronzalia
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 03:31 PM
I like the appearance of this city. It gives a little feel for the quirks of these people and a touch of the history. Everything is distinctive enough that it implies actual reasons. Go to Comment
City Image - Pier Point
Locations  (City)   (Any)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-15 12:50 AM
Good for the story Go to Comment
City Image - Bayaallatalstonescha
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 03:34 PM
The description is really hard to follow, but I can understand why. The last bit of the description explains it all.

It is a magical place full of awe. A city based around a view of the ocean - an aquarium. Very cool. Go to Comment
City Image - Silver Gate
Locations  (City)   (Water)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 03:35 PM
A good town with an explanation and fun details. +.5 for the slang for the cable cars. Go to Comment
City Image - BroadMound
Locations  (City)   (Swamp)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-09 03:36 PM
More cool dragon cities. Go to Comment
City Image - Payan - City of the Priest Kings
Locations  (City)   (Forest/ Jungle)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-15 12:49 AM
This was kind of strange and I was having trouble properly visualizing it, until I saw the image. THe picture helped to make this for me. Go to Comment
The Rebec
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-05 12:54 AM
Okay, another good history lesson done in posts instead of articles. Are you making them posts because nobody reads the articles? Go to Comment
The Organetto
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-05 12:53 AM
I would not of believed this one if I had not seen the picture. You really need to see the picture. Go to Comment
The Lizard
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-05 12:52 AM
Cool. Again totally mundane, but things you didn't know about. Go to Comment
Arune Spheres
Items  (Art and Music)   (Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-05 12:51 AM
These are really cool. It takes a tool used in one trade and transfers it to another... adaptive technologies.

This is a musical item you just would not of thought of. It has no approximate historical analog. Thus worthy. Go to Comment
Novel Musical Instruments
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-05 12:49 AM
Very cool. Things to fill out the background and set the mood. Go to Comment
Novel Musical Instruments
Items  (Art and Music)   (Non-Magical)
KendraHeart's comment on 2005-12-05 12:53 AM
These are a real world item aren't they? Go to Comment
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       By: Ria Hawk

The ruling family depends on some magical artifact or place to secure their right to rule. A monarch isn't considered legitimate until he or she has been "accepted" by the artifact or place, whatever that might entail. It is also possible that some one else, not of the ruling family, could be accepted as the legitimate heir... A fact which the monarchs would like to keep secret.

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