Cool. Not my cup of tea, but cool. Go to Comment

Adding this to the city, makes it perfect Go to Comment

My first item here. Do I have to write up the Sovereign's Finest to make this count? Go to Comment

Detailed Go to Comment

This should of been in the Interesting Weapons- Non-Magic ( Codex ) so I added it. That is okay right? Go to Comment

It not only gives you an establishment, it gives you a neighborhood.

I like the NPC. The little hat detail is cool. Now he is going to cause a whole trend of wearing hats. Go to Comment

It is a one trick pony. You get to do the joke, then what do you have? Go to Comment

Woah. Go to Comment

This would be a cool thing to add to a Ren or Victorian game. Given that they might be world walkers, the organization could directly have gone to another world. There their advantage in magic and technology would of made the Order very important, if not dominant.

Maybe one of the reasons the organization fell apart at home was the people really holding the group together had gone "elsewhere" and was not here to support the organization. Go to Comment

Very cool. A minor Illuminati. Go to Comment

Too many Martial Arts movies for you. Isn't this the origin story from Wing Chung Style (and a few other Chinese Martial Arts?). Still is is kind of cool. Go to Comment

*cue theme from Jaws* Go to Comment

Scary Jungle critters. Psychotic Elephants. Maybe it is something in the local water. Maybe they become peaceful if they are taken out of the environment? Go to Comment

Light Birds. Go to Comment

Snorts in regards to the preview comment.

Kind of cool otherwise. Go to Comment

Kind of strange.

Why do these things hae gems in their head? How did they get there? Were they made by someone? Go to Comment

Very cool birds. These would make great familiars or bond beasts. Go to Comment

A creepy toyshop or a place of child's delight, all depending on what you need. I see a high end toyshop, where people should look and not touch. A riot of color and woodsmell, brightly lit, with over stocked shelves. The workshop in the back. The mistress of the shop having a "thing" for shadows. (I like that turn of phrase for dolls and such).

There is a lot of dramatic potential here. I don't know what x-jacks are (assuming they will be added, like The Bag and The Garage Sale). Go to Comment

Dinner ala cart now takes on a whole new meaning here.

I like this. It explains a whole element of the city and how its economy works. More of these cart posts would be useful, so we can have a selection of them.

PS: The poor kids handing around collecting bowls, doing recycling to earn coins for their families. People collecting bowls and turning them in, just like states with real deposits do for sodas in the supermarkets. Go to Comment

I like this because it can be used in a variety of settings. You can put it in the Haight in SF, you can put it in Seattle in Shadowrun, The Village in New York, and any number of fantasy places. It is just not an equipment list, it is a place. Go to Comment