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Inns to remember
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-22 09:45 AM
Cheka will turn it into a 30. You must beat him to it! :P Go to Comment
Reaver Isle
Locations  (Area)   (Water)
Kassy's comment on 2014-06-25 10:04 AM
Rum! You have rum!?

Good sub Maggot :) Go to Comment
Beastmaster's door
Dungeons  (Any)   (Doors)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-20 06:30 AM
4.0/5

First of all, custos, allow me to welcome you to Strolen's Citadel. You'll fit right in here, haven't met anyone that hasn't.

A great first sub, and I'll echo what Silvy said about the level of engagement.

Hope to see more of your work. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-13 11:12 AM
The best part of Evie's story yet! Could the Nano-machine 'infection' be part of some anti-delta "vaccine"? Go to Comment
Bannington Lapur LRTI AA
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-08 08:36 AM
Update: Updated with Republic freetext. Expansion subs to follow. Go to Comment
Bannington Lapur LRTI AA
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-08 08:47 AM
Thank you for your feedback. Think I'll start with either the Clones or a sub about the Republic itself. It'll probably sound pretty disjointed, but as things progress that should clear up. Go to Comment
Bannington Lapur LRTI AA
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-08 09:40 AM
Thank you Dozus. Maybe I'll expand this using the idea section. Go to Comment
RoboSports
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (City/ Ruin)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-05 02:48 PM
4.0/5

And now I fancy watching Real Steel again. A good movie incidentally, although it is pretty much Rocky with robots. Go to Comment
Burly Bill's Beautiful Beverages
Locations  (Other)   (Other)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-05 02:23 PM
4.0/5

An interesting submission. Well presented. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-02 07:33 AM
5.0/5 + fav'd

I love the way the story is progressing, in a good way if you know what I mean.

Can't wait to see Evie figure out Jennifer's Delta ability, as she seems rather reluctant to reveal it herself. Go to Comment
New Personal Best
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-02 07:44 AM
5.0/5

You had me from the start. The style perfectly hooks the reader. What did he do to that Pommel Horse!? Go to Comment
30 Fairies
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-01 05:14 AM
4.5/5

Cloudchaser and Nightbug Fairies are the two that somehow really spring out at me. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:20 AM
4.5/5 + fav'd (to the now set up list)

Whilst I don't find it depressing like Longspeak, it does have a much darker note to it. It's interesting to see her transformation from Human into animal, and how that affects her, you really bring that across to the reader.

Well done. I really enjoy your writing. Go to Comment
Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:47 AM
4.0/5

Might have been lost and resubmitted? Submission is dated in 2014.

A good sub, and I agree with Muro, it is a good tool for introspection. Go to Comment
Darkness and Shadows, Part 1 of 126
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:27 AM
5.0/5

Dark. Connecting. Powerful stuff Sil, you were right to put the R rating in the summary.

It's very good, hooking the reader in with the way they might identify with the character. I look forward to reading more of her story. Go to Comment
30 Genetic Mods
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Specific)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-01 05:32 AM
5.0/5

Pretty much what Sil has said. Also how I found that Zoe 3000 sub the other day, now that was, messed up. Go to Comment
Kolburn Pierre
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Travelers)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-26 04:23 AM
Thank you dear!

To me it still seems a bit bare-boned and I would have liked to add more depth, which isn't something I'm generally good at, or just haven't tried hard enough. I prefer to make and use characters that can be easily used and adapted for use in almost any setting and that have enough personality and history to make them useful and possibly even entertaining, without having to come up with an entire biography.

It feels good to upload something here again, and thank you for your support :) Go to Comment
Kolburn Pierre
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Travelers)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-05 10:57 AM
Shiny! +1 Internetz for you, sir!

He was meant to be a starting character, one that doesn't have too much baggage and can still be moulded to suit another player, should they take over him.

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Kassy's comment on 2014-04-24 07:22 AM
5.0/5 + fav'd (still need to make that list)

Africa, love it, and that we get to see more of Evie in her animal forms.

I wish I had more to say, but I'm feeling unable to express what it is that I feel and/or want to say.

I love your writing Sil, you're truly amazing! :) Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-24 06:20 AM
4.5/5 + mandatory fav.

Here, again, I like the way the story has progressed. Though I'm sorry for Ellen's breakup with Evie, and even sorrier to see her decline, if that's the right word. Perhaps let go of herself would be a more appropriate description.

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