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New Personal Best
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-02 07:44 AM
5.0/5

You had me from the start. The style perfectly hooks the reader. What did he do to that Pommel Horse!? Go to Comment
30 Fairies
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-01 05:14 AM
4.5/5

Cloudchaser and Nightbug Fairies are the two that somehow really spring out at me. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:20 AM
4.5/5 + fav'd (to the now set up list)

Whilst I don't find it depressing like Longspeak, it does have a much darker note to it. It's interesting to see her transformation from Human into animal, and how that affects her, you really bring that across to the reader.

Well done. I really enjoy your writing. Go to Comment
Evolutionary Theology
Articles  (Setting Building)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:47 AM
4.0/5

Might have been lost and resubmitted? Submission is dated in 2014.

A good sub, and I agree with Muro, it is a good tool for introspection. Go to Comment
Darkness and Shadows, Part 1 of 126
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-29 06:27 AM
5.0/5

Dark. Connecting. Powerful stuff Sil, you were right to put the R rating in the summary.

It's very good, hooking the reader in with the way they might identify with the character. I look forward to reading more of her story. Go to Comment
30 Genetic Mods
Systems  (Technical/ Mechanical)   (Specific)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-01 05:32 AM
5.0/5

Pretty much what Sil has said. Also how I found that Zoe 3000 sub the other day, now that was, messed up. Go to Comment
Kolburn Pierre
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Travelers)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-26 04:23 AM
Thank you dear!

To me it still seems a bit bare-boned and I would have liked to add more depth, which isn't something I'm generally good at, or just haven't tried hard enough. I prefer to make and use characters that can be easily used and adapted for use in almost any setting and that have enough personality and history to make them useful and possibly even entertaining, without having to come up with an entire biography.

It feels good to upload something here again, and thank you for your support :) Go to Comment
Kolburn Pierre
NPCs  (Character Sheet)   (Travelers)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-05 10:57 AM
Shiny! +1 Internetz for you, sir!

He was meant to be a starting character, one that doesn't have too much baggage and can still be moulded to suit another player, should they take over him.

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Kassy's comment on 2014-04-24 07:22 AM
5.0/5 + fav'd (still need to make that list)

Africa, love it, and that we get to see more of Evie in her animal forms.

I wish I had more to say, but I'm feeling unable to express what it is that I feel and/or want to say.

I love your writing Sil, you're truly amazing! :) Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-24 06:20 AM
4.5/5 + mandatory fav.

Here, again, I like the way the story has progressed. Though I'm sorry for Ellen's breakup with Evie, and even sorrier to see her decline, if that's the right word. Perhaps let go of herself would be a more appropriate description.

On to No. 10 Go to Comment
Yarnuks
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Water)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-06 04:39 AM
4.0/5

Just the right level of detail to be easily adaptable enough to use in a campaign, with a good plot hook and concise campaign notes. Excellent presentation too. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-23 11:41 AM
Ooh, didn't know this started as an RP. Then again, it does explain you both using the same characters for submissions at the same time. Both of which I love :) Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-24 06:05 AM
4.0/5 and fav'd. I think I need to add a folder to my favourites just for these subs.

As with the other's I've enjoyed this one immensely and look forward to reading the rest, and seeing more action *wink* Go to Comment
The Gorgon Rune and the Flirting Dress
Plots  (Hired)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2014-05-06 11:05 AM
4.5/5

A very good plot. One I'd like to try out with a group at some point. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-19 09:36 AM
5.0/5 + Fav'd

Left hanging on for more right at the end there, particularly interested in this other woman that Sarah is with. Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-19 09:36 AM
Forgot to vote, meh :/ Go to Comment
Ellen Lancaster
NPCs  (Minor)   (Artistic/Performance)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-17 12:18 PM
5.0/5 + Fav'd

As with Sarah Voltaire, I really enjoyed reading this submission. The detail makes it seem real. Either that or I spend more time in my head than is healthy :P Go to Comment
Flirting dress
Items  (Clothes)   (Magical)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-26 06:24 AM
3.5/5

Hmm, I can think of several naughty uses for this :D *grins wickedly* Go to Comment
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-16 06:40 AM
4.5/5

I love the banter and camaraderie in this piece. They way the characters are bonding is well set out. Go to Comment
Solitude and The Long Road Evelyn's path pt 5
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-11 09:58 AM
3.5/5

Well written and continued from the previous sub. However, axlerowes is right in that it does seem a bit short. But it's six and two threes really.

Still a good sub and I can't wait for it to continue!

Faved :P Go to Comment
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