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Death of a King
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-28 05:13 AM
Welcome to the Citadel. It's always nice to meet new members and see their work.

Whilst I did like the story, I have to agree with Strolen. The "thou's" are out of place. There is also a bunch of code attached to the end of your sub, did you copy and paste from word?

Final vote = 3.5/5 (-0.5 for the thou's)

All in all, a good start. Hope to see more from you. Go to Comment
Junkyard 101
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-26 03:02 PM
#1 - Yellow Cab

An old beaten up Yellow Cab. Still functional and with half a tank of fuel. However the battery is missing. Perhaps there is another amongst this junk?

#2 - A pack of hyenas

Prowling throughout the Junkyard, a group of Hyenas. Judging by their snarling, they're hungry after not having eaten for a while.

#3 - The Guillotine

An original guillotine, made in 1872. Blood stained and with a blunted blade. In need of sharpening.

#4 - Bracelet of Everdark

A small unassuming bracelet made of silver and appearing slightly tarnished. When worn it allows the wearer to become invisible. However, this only works when the individual is in the shadows/darkness. Any light will render the magic useless.

#5 - War and Peace

A battered original 1869 copy of this famous book by Leo Tolstoy. Go to Comment
Balthazar Langdon
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Kassy's comment on 2013-02-28 06:47 AM
Changing this to "Request Advice". It's been sitting there for ages and I'm not quite sure what I should be doing with it. Go to Comment
Balthazar Langdon
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Kassy's comment on 2013-04-15 08:01 AM
Whatever you want.

I've lost sight of were this was meant to be going. If you have any ideas, anything you fancy doing, then please PM me and maybe we can necro this. Go to Comment
Balthazar Langdon
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-11 07:39 AM
Your second reading was right. Eventually he'll have given up the pre-agreed upon story, when he feels that he can no longer hold on. This pre-agreed upon story being more plausible, but still not the truth.

Perhaps him coming home, having served for 9, possibly 10, years. His struggle with life on civvy street, diagnosis with PTSD.

I can't remember where I was going with this one. Perhaps with a few more ideas he can be rescued and made into a proper sub. Go to Comment
Red Sun
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (World Wide)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-30 03:23 AM
Erm, wow?

It's brilliant, and also believable.

+what those above me have said. Go to Comment
How did you start?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-24 02:22 PM
Thank you Muro!

It would be great if people would add how they found their way into roleplaying. Go to Comment
How did you start?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2013-03-04 08:03 AM
Didn't realise this had gotten further replies. Will have to update my E-mail address. Go to Comment
How did you start?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2013-06-04 07:02 AM
Haha, yeah I did :) Go to Comment
Deathwalkers
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-30 03:17 AM
Can't think of anything to add to what Moonlake said. I share his view. Go to Comment
Unummodo
Locations  (City)   (Desert)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-22 09:27 PM
This gets my 5/5

A magnificent sub. I could see this being a nice inbetween adventure. Go to Comment
Surgeon Birds
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Swamp)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-22 06:24 PM
To five it or not to five it? That, is the question.

After a little thought, I've decided to give you a 4.5/5.

I must say, I really enjoyed reading this one. It's unique. Brilliant, and I love the image in my head of a traveling doctor with one attached to the top of his walking staff. Go to Comment
Dendrognaths
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-22 06:11 PM
Damnit Sil, are we on the same wavelength tonight? You've pretty much said exactly what I thought.

Great, creative sub.

4/5 Go to Comment
Lady Evica
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Religious)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-22 05:58 PM
Pl0x nO QQ. Go to Comment
Lady Evica
NPCs  (Campaign)   (Religious)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-22 05:58 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
30 Simple Rhyming Riddles
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-22 05:51 PM
Thanks for sending me a copy via PM Omega.

A nice set of riddles to fit well into a campaign. As Silveressa has already mentioned; these would be fun to throw at your party's Wizard ;-)

3/5 Go to Comment
30 Simple Rhyming Riddles
Articles  (Resource)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-21 01:30 PM
Hovering doesn't work on my iPad, regrettably. Go to Comment
30 Tavern Wenches
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-20 07:43 AM
Great submission! Really liked the take on "The Vampire" not being evil/criminal. Only taking what she'd need to survive and being an otherwise honest person.

Happy to see my two made the list as well :)

I vaguely remember there being a 30 Assassins sub that could be linked to this.
*Goes off to search for said sub*

Also a 5/5 from me :) Go to Comment
30 Tavern Wenches
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-20 07:45 AM
Hmm, for some reason my vote didn't register *puzzled look* Go to Comment
30 Tavern Wenches
NPCs  (Minor)   (Mercantile)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-22 05:55 PM
A shame about the vote thing. *hopes it will be fixed* Go to Comment
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