Gaming can indeed be quite an expensive hobby. I don't have any manuals or rule books myself. If I needed one I would go to my local library and ask if they have it, if they didn't they were usually able to order it in, free of charge :)

Dice are expensive as well. Which reminds me, I need to get in contact with Strolen about that pair >.<

A good article, I'm sure that this will prove useful to people.

4/5 from also. Go to Comment

Only voted Go to Comment

As Mourn said, definitely different.

A new take, certainly not one I've seen before.

3.5/5 Go to Comment

I too was amused after reading this.

After all, who can resist kittens? Go to Comment

A good article. Useful to some.

However I must agree with my fellow Strolenites; it is a bit too generic, and can be applied to many situations.

3/5 Good effort. Go to Comment

Mourn is right, using this site on an iPad is indeed tricky. I speak from personal experience. Go to Comment

Forgot to vote.

Now this piece I like! Well written indeed. An enjoyable read.

Would recommend :)

4.5/5 from me as well. Go to Comment

Welcome to the Citadel. It's always nice to meet new members and see their work.

Whilst I did like the story, I have to agree with Strolen. The "thou's" are out of place. There is also a bunch of code attached to the end of your sub, did you copy and paste from word?

Final vote = 3.5/5 (-0.5 for the thou's)

All in all, a good start. Hope to see more from you. Go to Comment

#1 - Yellow Cab

An old beaten up Yellow Cab. Still functional and with half a tank of fuel. However the battery is missing. Perhaps there is another amongst this junk?

#2 - A pack of hyenas

Prowling throughout the Junkyard, a group of Hyenas. Judging by their snarling, they're hungry after not having eaten for a while.

#3 - The Guillotine

An original guillotine, made in 1872. Blood stained and with a blunted blade. In need of sharpening.

#4 - Bracelet of Everdark

A small unassuming bracelet made of silver and appearing slightly tarnished. When worn it allows the wearer to become invisible. However, this only works when the individual is in the shadows/darkness. Any light will render the magic useless.

#5 - War and Peace

A battered original 1869 copy of this famous book by Leo Tolstoy. Go to Comment

Changing this to "Request Advice". It's been sitting there for ages and I'm not quite sure what I should be doing with it. Go to Comment

Whatever you want.

I've lost sight of were this was meant to be going. If you have any ideas, anything you fancy doing, then please PM me and maybe we can necro this. Go to Comment

Your second reading was right. Eventually he'll have given up the pre-agreed upon story, when he feels that he can no longer hold on. This pre-agreed upon story being more plausible, but still not the truth.

Perhaps him coming home, having served for 9, possibly 10, years. His struggle with life on civvy street, diagnosis with PTSD.

I can't remember where I was going with this one. Perhaps with a few more ideas he can be rescued and made into a proper sub. Go to Comment

Erm, wow?

It's brilliant, and also believable.

+what those above me have said. Go to Comment

Thank you Muro!

It would be great if people would add how they found their way into roleplaying. Go to Comment

Didn't realise this had gotten further replies. Will have to update my E-mail address. Go to Comment

Haha, yeah I did :) Go to Comment

Can't think of anything to add to what Moonlake said. I share his view. Go to Comment

This gets my 5/5

A magnificent sub. I could see this being a nice inbetween adventure. Go to Comment

To five it or not to five it? That, is the question.

After a little thought, I've decided to give you a 4.5/5.

I must say, I really enjoyed reading this one. It's unique. Brilliant, and I love the image in my head of a traveling doctor with one attached to the top of his walking staff. Go to Comment

Damnit Sil, are we on the same wavelength tonight? You've pretty much said exactly what I thought.

Great, creative sub.

4/5 Go to Comment