Strolen's Citadel: Browsing Kassy's Comments

Moltov Cocktail
Items (Ranged Weapons) (Combat)

Kassy's comment on 2010-06-07 04:03 AM

Grey Reaver
Lifeforms (Constructed) (Any)

Kassy's comment on 2012-08-16 04:49 AM

Veloran´s XXXX
Items (Potion) (Combat)

Kassy's comment on 2010-03-15 02:04 PM

Thank ye Dozus, as I mentioned in my "The Glades" sub, i would be submitting the full sub for Veloran´s XXXX when it is done, this stub was just is to show that it is underway. Go to Comment

The Glades
Locations (Establishment) (Forest/ Jungle)

Kassy's comment on 2010-03-14 11:38 AM

(An extra note on the spirit wine: I will be uploading a full submission for it as soon as i am finished)

I have decided to leave this subission a little open-ended shall we say, so as to allow for more adaptability and flexibility.

This is also my first post after a long time, so it will take a while for me to get back into the swing of things.

Constructive criticism is as always highly valued.

Your thoughts ladies and gentlemen! Go to Comment

The Glades
Locations (Establishment) (Forest/ Jungle)

Kassy's comment on 2010-03-14 01:09 PM

Thank you for the generous 4 Cheka. You have caught me at unawares, i was expecting something along the lines of a 2.5 or so.

Again, many thanks. Go to Comment

The Glades
Locations (Establishment) (Forest/ Jungle)

Kassy's comment on 2012-04-13 04:22 AM

Thank you for your feedback axel.

You say that I don't really take you there.

Perhaps you would like a more in depth description of the Inn? It's features? Regulars?

I know this is an old submission of mine but if it can be improved then I gladly will.

Speaking of regulars, I believe I've just given myself the idea for a new NPC :) Go to Comment

"Knock First" Door Trap
Dungeons (Any) (Doors)

Kassy's comment on 2010-03-15 02:09 PM

4/5 from me.

An amusing sub, and welcome to the Citadel. Go to Comment

Metal Mask of Maeschnarr
Items (Other) (Non-Magical)

Kassy's comment on 2010-02-20 06:23 AM

hmm..it could do with a little more detail.

3/5 Go to Comment

Baked Adventurer Anyone?
Dungeons (Any) (Traps)

Kassy's comment on 2012-05-11 12:33 PM

I second Dreamer. Simple, useable, neat.

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Organi
Lifeforms (Fauna) (Water)

Kassy's comment on 2012-07-03 07:34 AM

A good read, very detailed. Go to Comment

Cinderpaws
NPCs (Mythic/ Historical) (Mystical)

Kassy's comment on 2012-06-04 12:40 PM

Only voted Go to Comment

30 Servants
NPCs (Extras) (Domestic/ Craft)

Kassy's comment on 2008-07-19 08:14 AM

Aaaaaaaaarrrgh, i love it, more write more, NOW!

I demand you to. Go to Comment

Amber, Queen of the Whores-Reworked
NPCs (Minor) (Political)

Kassy's comment on 2009-03-20 01:22 PM

Oh, naughty lesbian thoughts go through my mind, oops! Go to Comment

The Double Purse
Items (Wand/Staff/ Arcane) (Magical)

Kassy's comment on 2013-05-21 10:00 AM

3.0/5

Hmm, a little short. But given its age. I don't think that matters anymore.

Well done Cheka. Go to Comment

Upuaut, God of flames and war
Society/ Organizations (Religious) (World Wide)

Kassy's comment on 2012-06-17 06:19 AM

Only voted Go to Comment

Ratri, Goddess of the Night
Society/ Organizations (Religious) (World Wide)

Kassy's comment on 2012-06-17 06:18 AM

Only voted Go to Comment

The 30 of Selador
Society/ Organizations (Political) (Regional)

Kassy's comment on 2011-07-26 08:38 AM

Punctuation!

Less run on sentances and no walls of text please.

Other than that, you have some good ideas.

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Kaide Valefos
NPCs (Minor) (Criminal/Espionage)

Kassy's comment on 2008-11-19 08:22 AM

Take it out of the In Work section, it doesn't belong here.

It's a great sub, adn crying out to be voted on! Go to Comment

The Orcs of Kyle Drannor - The Tribal Nation
Society/ Organizations (Ethnic/Cultural) (Country/ State)

Kassy's comment on 2013-06-03 05:06 AM

2.5/5

Why does this have isuchi/ a low vote? Go to Comment

30 Farmers
NPCs (Minor) (Agricultural)

Kassy's comment on 2009-03-20 12:12 PM

A brilliant submission, i like it, it´s one that reminds people that RPG´s are not all combative.

Great work. Go to Comment