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The Gentle Beasts
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
Kassy's comment on 2012-06-04 12:21 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Slys, Die of the Damned
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Defining)
Kassy's comment on 2012-06-04 12:18 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
Puppeteer Beetle
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-06-02 10:58 AM
Magic Mushrooms!!!

Erm.. I mean, good sub, well written :)

3.5/5 Go to Comment
The Seating of the Stuffy Dinner Party Guests
Dungeons  (Any)   (Puzzles)
Kassy's comment on 2012-06-02 10:44 AM
Pretty much what Muro said.

Job well done.

4.5/5 Go to Comment
Mondaloa
Locations  (City)   (Plains)
Kassy's comment on 2012-06-02 08:54 AM
Hmmph! I'm at a loss, what do I say...

I like the idea of the undead being treated differently, with respect. That made a nice change.

No criticism as such, except for that part where you used "Deeper in," as a sentence starter twice in a row. That irked me for some reason. The second sentence could perhaps have been differently worded. Maybe; "Delving even further into the catacombs..." or something like it?

Just my 2ยข.

All in all I really liked it.

4.5/5 Go to Comment
Gaming on a Budget
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-30 11:39 AM
Gaming can indeed be quite an expensive hobby. I don't have any manuals or rule books myself. If I needed one I would go to my local library and ask if they have it, if they didn't they were usually able to order it in, free of charge :)

Dice are expensive as well. Which reminds me, I need to get in contact with Strolen about that pair >.<

A good article, I'm sure that this will prove useful to people.

4/5 from also. Go to Comment
Transcend
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-30 02:33 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Truth about Dragons
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-30 02:26 AM
As Mourn said, definitely different.

A new take, certainly not one I've seen before.

3.5/5 Go to Comment
"Kittens, Sir?"
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-30 02:28 AM
I too was amused after reading this.

After all, who can resist kittens? Go to Comment
Online Roleplaying
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-28 01:31 PM
A good article. Useful to some.

However I must agree with my fellow Strolenites; it is a bit too generic, and can be applied to many situations.

3/5 Good effort. Go to Comment
Justice Served
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-28 12:58 PM
Mourn is right, using this site on an iPad is indeed tricky. I speak from personal experience. Go to Comment
Justice Served
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-28 01:34 PM
Forgot to vote.

Now this piece I like! Well written indeed. An enjoyable read.

Would recommend :)

4.5/5 from me as well. Go to Comment
Death of a King
Articles  (Fiction)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-28 04:13 AM
Welcome to the Citadel. It's always nice to meet new members and see their work.

Whilst I did like the story, I have to agree with Strolen. The "thou's" are out of place. There is also a bunch of code attached to the end of your sub, did you copy and paste from word?

Final vote = 3.5/5 (-0.5 for the thou's)

All in all, a good start. Hope to see more from you. Go to Comment
Junkyard 101
Articles  (Resource)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-26 02:02 PM
#1 - Yellow Cab

An old beaten up Yellow Cab. Still functional and with half a tank of fuel. However the battery is missing. Perhaps there is another amongst this junk?

#2 - A pack of hyenas

Prowling throughout the Junkyard, a group of Hyenas. Judging by their snarling, they're hungry after not having eaten for a while.

#3 - The Guillotine

An original guillotine, made in 1872. Blood stained and with a blunted blade. In need of sharpening.

#4 - Bracelet of Everdark

A small unassuming bracelet made of silver and appearing slightly tarnished. When worn it allows the wearer to become invisible. However, this only works when the individual is in the shadows/darkness. Any light will render the magic useless.

#5 - War and Peace

A battered original 1869 copy of this famous book by Leo Tolstoy. Go to Comment
Balthazar Langdon
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Kassy's comment on 2013-02-28 05:47 AM
Changing this to "Request Advice". It's been sitting there for ages and I'm not quite sure what I should be doing with it. Go to Comment
Balthazar Langdon
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Kassy's comment on 2013-04-15 07:01 AM
Whatever you want.

I've lost sight of were this was meant to be going. If you have any ideas, anything you fancy doing, then please PM me and maybe we can necro this. Go to Comment
Balthazar Langdon
NPCs  (Major)   (Combative)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-11 06:39 AM
Your second reading was right. Eventually he'll have given up the pre-agreed upon story, when he feels that he can no longer hold on. This pre-agreed upon story being more plausible, but still not the truth.

Perhaps him coming home, having served for 9, possibly 10, years. His struggle with life on civvy street, diagnosis with PTSD.

I can't remember where I was going with this one. Perhaps with a few more ideas he can be rescued and made into a proper sub. Go to Comment
Red Sun
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (World Wide)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-30 02:23 AM
Erm, wow?

It's brilliant, and also believable.

+what those above me have said. Go to Comment
How did you start?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-05-24 01:22 PM
Thank you Muro!

It would be great if people would add how they found their way into roleplaying. Go to Comment
How did you start?
Articles  (Humor/ Editorial)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2013-03-04 07:03 AM
Didn't realise this had gotten further replies. Will have to update my E-mail address. Go to Comment
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