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Personalised Armour
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 07:07 AM
This is a good idea, well presented too. Well done.

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Evoking Places in a Game
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 07:08 AM
Some solid advice for GMs to remember. I admit, I would not think to add so much detail, but I see how it would make the place feel more alive.

A great submission, your best yet I would say. Well done.

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7 Things about War and Magic
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 05:57 AM
A clear and concise article Scras.

I like the way this ties in with Caeser193's sub.

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7 Things about War and Magic
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2014-07-14 10:24 AM
This came up in the requires Golden vote. Have one, Scras! Go to Comment
Magic: How it destroys conventional (medieval) seige
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 05:50 AM
I had a feeling of Deja Vu reading this, I'm not sure why, but I did.

It could do with being put through a spellchecker and some of your grammar is a little off, but that shouldn't detract from the sub. After all, we have members from almost all over the world here.

That aside, a good sub.

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Death Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 05:44 AM
Mors, reminds me of Morr in the WFRP genre.

A neat little idea.

I would like to see it broken down and devided into sections to make it easier to read.

Another thing I wouldn't mind knowing; is there a history to the room, who created it and why? A bit of backstory is always nice, to give the place more flavour.

Other than that it's a good first sub, welcome to Strolen's Citadel!

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Death Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 07:27 AM
By breaking it down you've made it easier to read.

While the backstory is passable (I am no good at writing decent histories/backstories myself I might add), it starts with a glaring cliche, this isn't necessarily a bad thing, it just has that; "heard it before feel".

The part about the sculptor and its creation is fine.

The last part still raises some questions for me: How did Ytinutroppo know about its creation?, what is this loophole that he forgot to cover?

Also, this line doesn't make any sense to me: "(he's so powerful he doesn't need to show off with a ...the bloody)."

As it stands it is ok, but could still do with some more work being done. Take your time when creating something, there is no rush.

I might consider re-voting if this changes. Go to Comment
Death Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 10:22 AM
Take your time with what you write, no one is in a rush here. Go to Comment
10 Combat Obstacles
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-24 07:29 PM
While I agree that this could be expanded upon and possibly even made into a 30, I do like the easy to use, grab and go nature of this piece.

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10 Chance Meetings
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Encounter)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-24 07:30 PM
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Setam, the Goddess of Nerves
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-24 07:35 PM
Moi aussi!

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The Darkest of Winters: Session #18
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-20 09:29 AM
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The Darkest of Winters: Session #17
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-20 09:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Darkest of Winters: Session #16
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-20 09:28 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Darkest of Winters: Session #15
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-20 09:20 AM
Happy to see more of these!

How many are there in total? Go to Comment
The Darkest of Winters: Session #15
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-26 08:13 AM
32, with 4 per week, that's another 8 weeks of subs :)

I can't wait! Go to Comment
Dead or Alive, Preferably Dead!
Plots  (Duty)   (Encounter)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-24 07:32 PM
I must confess, I do really like the idea, although the sub left me wanting more. Perhaps this can be expanded upon?

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The Cockatrice
Locations  (Establishment)   (Plains)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-24 07:30 PM
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The Cockatrice
Locations  (Establishment)   (Plains)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 07:05 AM
Bruno Emanuel

A short man with a rather large gut, and very little hair left; Bruno is one of the city's oldest Lawyers. Although he no longer practices law, he now works in the archives. Digging out that which may be useful in the days cases and copying some of the older legal proceedings and statements so that they do not fade or fall victim to rot.

He has been a regular of The Cockatrice for many decades now, and has eaten and drank nearly everything there is, both on and off of the menu. In fact he has been spending much of his time in the kitchen, taking great pleasure in aiding Elena in matters culinary and gossip.

Many people wouldn't think that he'd be any good at 'Ringing the Cockatrice', they would be wrong. He may be small and getting on, but his aim is quite good. Something the other patrons have come to respect him greatly for, that, and his help in creating new dishes with Elena.

He is a very busy old man, quite the opposite of most would expect. As such he doesn't have that much time on his hands to socialise as one normally would, but if someone should wish to talk to him about his culinary experiments he will eagerly accept. Providing they can do multiple things at once. Go to Comment
The Cockatrice
Locations  (Establishment)   (Plains)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 07:06 AM
I've added a 'regular' for you Emilio. I hope you don't mind, I felt it had to be done. Go to Comment
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