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Amerikka Command
Society/ Organizations  (Political)   (World Wide)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-07 07:28 AM
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Peripheral Beasts
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Plains)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-07 07:29 AM
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The Darkest of Winters: Session #20
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-07 07:29 AM
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The Darkest of Winters: Session #19
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-07 07:30 AM
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Kingdom Property
Systems  (Mercantile)   (Defining)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-28 09:43 AM
4.5/5

An interesting submission. I can see this being used when PC's have become 'too' powerful, or for another reason wish to retire their characters.

Even, during a campaign this has some brilliant applications. Go to Comment
Wall of buttons
Dungeons  (Any)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-07 07:30 AM
It seems a little short and 'basic'

2.5/5 Go to Comment
First Encounters with an Unknown Tribe
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-07 07:32 AM
I also agree with those above me, combat should not be a part of most first encounters.

2.5/5 Go to Comment
Pub Crawling
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-28 09:45 AM
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The Streets of Baisaltir
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-02 07:59 AM
As Cheka said, there has been a lot of work and effort put into this, well done.

5/5 Go to Comment
The Hellephant
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-02 08:04 AM
Scras couldn't have put it any better!

This may find a way into my game, if ever I get around to having one set in modern day, post rescource war America.

4.0/5 and my favourite quest submission so far :) Go to Comment
Chimera Prototype Mk-XXIII
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 11:18 AM
A thouroughly enjoyable read. Well written and presented, well done to you both.

4.0/5 Go to Comment
The Shadowbeasts
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 11:19 AM
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The House of the King
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 11:09 AM
Well described and presented, although the bar inbetween the two larger paragraphs, I do find slightly disturbing.

4.0/5 Go to Comment
Personalised Armour
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 08:07 AM
This is a good idea, well presented too. Well done.

4.0/5 Go to Comment
Evoking Places in a Game
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 08:08 AM
Some solid advice for GMs to remember. I admit, I would not think to add so much detail, but I see how it would make the place feel more alive.

A great submission, your best yet I would say. Well done.

5/5 Go to Comment
7 Things about War and Magic
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 06:57 AM
A clear and concise article Scras.

I like the way this ties in with Caeser193's sub.

4.0/5 Go to Comment
7 Things about War and Magic
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2014-07-14 11:24 AM
This came up in the requires Golden vote. Have one, Scras! Go to Comment
Magic: How it destroys conventional (medieval) seige
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 06:50 AM
I had a feeling of Deja Vu reading this, I'm not sure why, but I did.

It could do with being put through a spellchecker and some of your grammar is a little off, but that shouldn't detract from the sub. After all, we have members from almost all over the world here.

That aside, a good sub.

3.0/5 Go to Comment
Death Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 06:44 AM
Mors, reminds me of Morr in the WFRP genre.

A neat little idea.

I would like to see it broken down and devided into sections to make it easier to read.

Another thing I wouldn't mind knowing; is there a history to the room, who created it and why? A bit of backstory is always nice, to give the place more flavour.

Other than that it's a good first sub, welcome to Strolen's Citadel!

3.0/5 Go to Comment
Death Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 08:27 AM
By breaking it down you've made it easier to read.

While the backstory is passable (I am no good at writing decent histories/backstories myself I might add), it starts with a glaring cliche, this isn't necessarily a bad thing, it just has that; "heard it before feel".

The part about the sculptor and its creation is fine.

The last part still raises some questions for me: How did Ytinutroppo know about its creation?, what is this loophole that he forgot to cover?

Also, this line doesn't make any sense to me: "(he's so powerful he doesn't need to show off with a ...the bloody)."

As it stands it is ok, but could still do with some more work being done. Take your time when creating something, there is no rush.

I might consider re-voting if this changes. Go to Comment
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