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The Streets of Baisaltir
Locations  (Neighborhoods)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-02 06:59 AM
As Cheka said, there has been a lot of work and effort put into this, well done.

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The Hellephant
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-08-02 07:04 AM
Scras couldn't have put it any better!

This may find a way into my game, if ever I get around to having one set in modern day, post rescource war America.

4.0/5 and my favourite quest submission so far :) Go to Comment
Chimera Prototype Mk-XXIII
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 10:18 AM
A thouroughly enjoyable read. Well written and presented, well done to you both.

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The Shadowbeasts
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 10:19 AM
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The House of the King
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 10:09 AM
Well described and presented, although the bar inbetween the two larger paragraphs, I do find slightly disturbing.

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Personalised Armour
Articles  (Character)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 07:07 AM
This is a good idea, well presented too. Well done.

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Evoking Places in a Game
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 07:08 AM
Some solid advice for GMs to remember. I admit, I would not think to add so much detail, but I see how it would make the place feel more alive.

A great submission, your best yet I would say. Well done.

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7 Things about War and Magic
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 05:57 AM
A clear and concise article Scras.

I like the way this ties in with Caeser193's sub.

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7 Things about War and Magic
Articles  (Rules and Advice)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2014-07-14 10:24 AM
This came up in the requires Golden vote. Have one, Scras! Go to Comment
Magic: How it destroys conventional (medieval) seige
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 05:50 AM
I had a feeling of Deja Vu reading this, I'm not sure why, but I did.

It could do with being put through a spellchecker and some of your grammar is a little off, but that shouldn't detract from the sub. After all, we have members from almost all over the world here.

That aside, a good sub.

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Death Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-27 05:44 AM
Mors, reminds me of Morr in the WFRP genre.

A neat little idea.

I would like to see it broken down and devided into sections to make it easier to read.

Another thing I wouldn't mind knowing; is there a history to the room, who created it and why? A bit of backstory is always nice, to give the place more flavour.

Other than that it's a good first sub, welcome to Strolen's Citadel!

3.0/5 Go to Comment
Death Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-28 07:27 AM
By breaking it down you've made it easier to read.

While the backstory is passable (I am no good at writing decent histories/backstories myself I might add), it starts with a glaring cliche, this isn't necessarily a bad thing, it just has that; "heard it before feel".

The part about the sculptor and its creation is fine.

The last part still raises some questions for me: How did Ytinutroppo know about its creation?, what is this loophole that he forgot to cover?

Also, this line doesn't make any sense to me: "(he's so powerful he doesn't need to show off with a ...the bloody)."

As it stands it is ok, but could still do with some more work being done. Take your time when creating something, there is no rush.

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Death Room
Dungeons  (Underground)   (Traps)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-30 10:22 AM
Take your time with what you write, no one is in a rush here. Go to Comment
10 Combat Obstacles
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-24 07:29 PM
While I agree that this could be expanded upon and possibly even made into a 30, I do like the easy to use, grab and go nature of this piece.

3.5/5 Go to Comment
10 Chance Meetings
Plots  (Coincidence)   (Encounter)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-24 07:30 PM
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Setam, the Goddess of Nerves
Systems  (Divine/ Spirit)   (Specific)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-24 07:35 PM
Moi aussi!

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The Darkest of Winters: Session #18
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-20 09:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Darkest of Winters: Session #17
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-20 09:29 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Darkest of Winters: Session #16
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - In General)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-20 09:28 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Darkest of Winters: Session #15
Articles  (Campaign)   (Gaming - Genre)
Kassy's comment on 2012-07-20 09:20 AM
Happy to see more of these!

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