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Dreams-of-beauty Minotaur Bard
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-06-01 04:52 AM
3.5/5

Nicely written sub, I like the story and will perhaps have to look more into the Weavers Guild.

There is one thing about it though that really bugs me, her name; "Dreams-of-Beauty". I find it to be rather a mouthful, and as a name it is just.. bizarre!

Her name aside, well done. A good sub :) Go to Comment
Flickerwik
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Swamp)
Kassy's comment on 2013-06-01 04:47 AM
4.0/5

This is good! Something nasty that you can't just hack at to get rid of! Go to Comment
Valus Longflower
NPCs  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-30 05:19 AM
Thank you Dossta :)

I suppose the people (the common people that is), don't see much of him at all, and therefore can't really view him. They know that someone is helping them and are deeply grateful but that's about it.

I think that if he came out, there would be a lot of support for him. However with the system in place, it would be impossible for him to be placed in a position of significant power. On the other hand, if one of the nobility were to champion his cause and actually try to help their people instead of leaving them to their own devices, it's possible that he may have some influence with that Lord/Lady.

As for his name, it is a regional thing. He was born and raised in the Lower Valley (a region in the world I'm creating), those born there traditionally have family/house names related to flora.

I'm happy to see you like it :) Go to Comment
Valus Longflower
NPCs  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-30 05:22 AM
I hadn't thought of him as a Robin Hood figure when I wrote him, I can see why you would think him to be such though.

Your idea is a good one. I hoped that there would be enough information within the submission to inspire a couple of interesting adventures. Go to Comment
Valus Longflower
NPCs  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-31 05:42 AM
More to come soon. This sub has a couple of things I'd like to expand upon.

Also, can I create a freetext for my world? Go to Comment
Valus Longflower
NPCs  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-31 05:43 AM
Thank you Muro :) Go to Comment
Valus Longflower
NPCs  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2014-03-29 08:21 AM
Update: Sub re-upload. Was lost to the void. Go to Comment
A Noble Rest
Locations  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-30 05:12 AM
It's ok. I had been using the 100 Word Challenge to get me back into writing. But now I have 2 full subs up and the juice is flowing again... Go to Comment
A Noble Rest
Locations  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2014-03-29 07:38 AM


Update: Submission was lost to the void. Re-uploaded 29/03/14 EDIT: Cannot change Hook and Type for some bizarre reason. Would appreciate Moderator help.

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The Square Of Heroes
Locations  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-28 06:52 AM
Thanks Moonlake. The 100 Word Challenges that I'm doing at the moment are to get back into writing, a little each day, these 3 that I've submitted today have been done over the weekend and this is the first chance I've had to submit them.

I am primarily using these to supplement my world building. I'll add it to my list. Go to Comment
The Square Of Heroes
Locations  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2014-03-29 08:09 AM
Update: Sub re-upload. Lost to the Void. Go to Comment
Onyx Guardians
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-31 05:53 AM
It was pitch black and I was eaten by a Grue.

Would that be enough to expand it into a full sub? Go to Comment
Onyx Guardians
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Kassy's comment on 2014-03-29 08:03 AM
Update: Sub re-upload. Was lost to the void. Go to Comment
Onyx Guardians
Plots  (Discovery)   (Encounter)
Kassy's comment on 2014-04-02 10:18 AM
Agreed. At the time however these were just to get me back into writing. If you want to add ideas to it, feel free.

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Venettos Soup Spider
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-06-01 05:19 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Helmet Of BEES!
Items  (Armor)   (Magical)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-28 06:26 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Wishmaster
Items  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-28 05:36 AM
I noticed the "game-destroying" aspect of this sub whilst I was writing it. To clarify; it was never meant to be an item for the PC's to use. Its purpose is mainly historical, however; if it should feature in the campaign then only in the hands of an NPC/as part of the backstory.

As always the GM has the final say, and can/should stop any game breaking before it occurs.

Judging by the comments I gather you might like an extended version of this sub? Go to Comment
Wishmaster
Items  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2014-03-29 08:17 AM
Update: Sub re-upload. Was lost to the Void. Go to Comment
Ife And Eath Governors Of Existence
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-23 07:42 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Everlife Dungeon
Plots  (Crisis)   (Single-Storyline)
Kassy's comment on 2013-05-23 07:41 AM
4.5/5

Welcome to the Citadel Elbin!

Quite a grand 1st piece, I still can't believe mine eyes *winks*

Really enjoyed reading this. Go to Comment
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