Although I am still new to this place, and haven't seen many plots, I shall still say that this is a pretty good mission/adventure for pc's that get high off of fighting for no good reason. I may use this I give this a 5/5 just because of how funny it could jeopardize the welfare of my pc's. Go to Comment
Thank you very much for the good feedback. I realized that after you said something MoonHunter about when scoring a critical hit, it was actually what I meant to say and then forgot. Thanks I am gonna work on this thing to make it better.
Also as per people say that the weapon was too powerful, the meaning of when it says only the select few people would be able to weild it is also meaning that a person would have to spend a long time improving on himself to be able to use it because if they are not good as per the restrictions and any other set out by the GM, it wont work for them. But it is mainly made to be able to punish the Evil creature for its wrongdoings.