That is really, really innovative and different. It's short and I'm not super clear on quite what it is, as it strikes me almost as more of a god or ancestral spirit, but really intriguing and out of the ordinary. Terrific submission!
Nice narrative contribution, overview of a look back at "monsters" from a historical perspective, taking some real-world techniques and folklore and mixing with typical gaming archetypes, interesting hybridization. Go to Comment
Excellent effort and forward-thinking resourcefulness and sharing with others on a very, very rarely addressed issue with a broad application - THIS is the kind of thing that needs to be produced for gamers. Terrific work! Go to Comment
A world where there is a finite amount of magic present in the world, and it's almost used up. With the winds of magic being weak and unstable, how will nations built on the heavy use of magic survive?