Okay, this is just rad. Not only is it something completely subtle, believable, and imaginative, it also leads to a whole host of extra plot lines. Best idea of seen in a while. Go to Comment
I think you guys are being a bit unfair. I'm sure this would have a 4.25 rating if one of the older hands had put it forth.
As for myself, I think that it still needs some work in terms of additional plot hooks. We could all probably come up with a few good uses for this toxin (Wulfhere's already started!), so why not put a few forth. Flesh it out a bit. What exactly is a Howler Demon? Why should we be afraid of it? Do Demons reproduce sexually, and even have pheremones?
I could see a large problem with the respiratory and circulatory systems- the lungs and hearts of both animals would need to be enlarged to cope with a sudden increase in mass. Would the human head get too hot, as it's less efficient at shunting excess heat than its equine counterpart?
Otherwise, a very nice way of making a legendary creature more palatable and realistic. Good work. Go to Comment
If you slipped this into somebody's backpack you could have a pretty sweet plot as they think they've found a holy artifact- just write something along the lines of:
"Hello, I'm your god."
As long as they're not familiar with Twin Paper, that'd make a pretty entertaining plotline. Go to Comment
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