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Devouring Beds
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Incarnadine's comment on 2007-05-11 06:00 PM
Okay, this is just rad. Not only is it something completely subtle, believable, and imaginative, it also leads to a whole host of extra plot lines. Best idea of seen in a while. Go to Comment
Skeleton Key
Items  (Other)   (Magical)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-23 10:48 PM
Oblivion/Morrowind influence much? Go to Comment
Short and Sweet
Articles  (Campaign)   (Game Mastering)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-21 05:54 PM
Haha, nice one Wulf. Go to Comment
Tracer Poison
Items  (Potion)   (Cursed)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-19 10:38 PM
I think you guys are being a bit unfair. I'm sure this would have a 4.25 rating if one of the older hands had put it forth.

As for myself, I think that it still needs some work in terms of additional plot hooks. We could all probably come up with a few good uses for this toxin (Wulfhere's already started!), so why not put a few forth. Flesh it out a bit. What exactly is a Howler Demon? Why should we be afraid of it? Do Demons reproduce sexually, and even have pheremones?

Not bad for a first submission. Go to Comment
30 Disasters!
Plots  (Event)   (Encounter)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-14 12:25 PM
I'm glad the 30 --- trend did not devolve into a series of dull and unimaginative brews... this is extremely useful.

Not to mention entertaining. Especially 16. Go to Comment
The Kel'Regar: A Sci-Fi look at Elves
Lifeforms  (Intelligent Species)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-14 02:05 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Consort of Uncle Jehan
NPCs  (Extras)   (Artistic/Performance)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-07 10:06 PM
Okay, I really do love this. Go to Comment
Plunger’s Poorly Placed Potatoes
Plots  (Travel)   (Side-Quest)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-04 03:17 PM
Updated, hopefully to remove some of the more macabre aspects and make it a bit more completely light-hearted. Go to Comment
Oraki - A New Look at Robots
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-03 02:20 AM
Pretty cool, actually. Good to see some original, solid ideas. Go to Comment
The Bloodflower Shroud
Items  (Armor)   (Villanous)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-03 03:23 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
ACME Exploding Barrel and Crate Company
Society/ Organizations  (Mercantile)   (World Wide)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-03-28 05:39 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
OchreMaws
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Desert)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-03-28 05:48 PM
There are a few spelling problems (Ocre, suprise), but other than that pretty solid. Go to Comment
Terramax Cruiser
Items  (SpaceShips)   (Combat)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-03-26 08:42 PM
Only voted Go to Comment
The Death Throes Bullet
Items  (Ranged Weapons)   (Combat)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-03-25 03:48 PM
I thought it was cool. Go to Comment
Voracious Slug
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-03-25 12:15 AM
Only voted Go to Comment
Swarmsnake
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Forest/ Jungle)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-03-20 09:29 PM
While not particularily unique or innovative, decently solid.

Good source of Snakes on a Plain jokes though... Go to Comment
The Centaurim
Lifeforms  (Constructed)   (Any)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-03-20 09:36 PM
I could see a large problem with the respiratory and circulatory systems- the lungs and hearts of both animals would need to be enlarged to cope with a sudden increase in mass. Would the human head get too hot, as it's less efficient at shunting excess heat than its equine counterpart?

Otherwise, a very nice way of making a legendary creature more palatable and realistic. Good work. Go to Comment
The Tower of Ash
Dungeons  (Other)   (Style)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-08 11:14 PM
This one is really cool.

Mind if I have a go in drawing one of the undead? They sound like they'd be fun. Go to Comment
The One-Eyed, Red-Eyed Crow
Lifeforms  (Unique)   (Swamp)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-04-06 01:17 AM
Wow.

I love this. Go to Comment
Twin Paper
Items  (Materials)   (Magical)
Incarnadine's comment on 2007-03-28 09:51 PM
If you slipped this into somebody's backpack you could have a pretty sweet plot as they think they've found a holy artifact- just write something along the lines of:

"Hello, I'm your god."

As long as they're not familiar with Twin Paper, that'd make a pretty entertaining plotline. Go to Comment
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