The lights that were in the cliche wizard's tower, what were they? I can understand them being side effects of the creation process. Or, a great battle between Tetrek and the wolfkin, but it's not clear.
I also had a problem like this when I joined, I wanted to make demonic werewolves that only had the hybrid form. Luckily, I didn't finish it, I just logged out with out saving it.
Although I've read it before I forget what it was like. From what the comments said it did have a lot of flaws but most of them are now gone.
All in all, I think that it's an okay submission that could be used but not often, though one of them as a character would be cool. Go to Comment
I am preparing a horror dungeon with my brother this Halloween and was looking for some tips on making one when I found this. It's well written, helpful, and has many ideas that I am sure I shall use in ten weeks. Go to Comment
This is a really... strange submission. When I read it I wasn't thinking Lovecraft, and now I still don't think Lovecraft would be the way to describe this guy. I think more of when we think of evil and demons and undead we make all of the terrible things they are more abstract; like we don't realize just how depraved they are, we just stamp the 'evil' on them and call it good. But when you read this it gets you to think about specific things that are wrong, you see more of how really evil they are, not simply that they are evil.
Very nice! Rather inventive and original idea that makes it more-than-less attractive.
Another idea is that the players find one of these that's empty and needs to be filled. So it grabs the first person to pick it up or touch it. When they do it transports them into the torch until something like a remove curse is cast on them. To the rest of the party it looks like Bob just reached down to pick up a torch and then disappeared. That would make a paranoid party very cautious around torches that they find in the next few dungeons. Go to Comment
A large river that is continuously covered in a thick layer of fog. There will be either a rope ferry to get across or possibly a boat that is rowed across by worshippers of the water elementals. It is very thick fog to the point where it even muffles voices even at close range and visibility even beyond a foot is almost impossible.