Somewhat humorous but not very useful in a serious game. Well written, hooked me in. But you lost me after a few paragraphs, was a bit too long and clunky for my taste. Go to Comment

Well there was just sooo much text y'know. And while you did break it up, I kinda just lost the incentive to keep reading. The confusing part is whether this is supposed to be taken seriously or as parody, because the subject seems humorous but it's written in a serious way. If that makes any sense. Go to Comment

Okay, I thought voting as opposed to not voting was a good thing, but I guess I'm dragging down your average then? Sorry, duly noted. Go to Comment

Usually when I see a sub rated so high, there's always that dread that I will have to be the one to lower the score, or that I simply shouldn't vote at all. But in this case, those fears are alleviated. One more 5 from me, and a HoH.

I have a question, how did Queen Runia manage to climb from rags to riches like that? Go to Comment

There are A LOT of averages in this text, average, average, average. I suppose if you're looking for just that, then this is the thing. Frankly someone with such a standard name as Wilhelm and the word average in a long text... Well, just not for me I suppose. Go to Comment

"But no this is no more. Now Wilhelm is a nothing."
I would change that to; is a nobody. I'm not sure if that works in old English or not, just my preference, other than that, decent. Go to Comment

I can see the difficulty in voting on something like this, but as educational material for new GMs, I'd say this could be very useful. I for one like to read about other people's campaigns, the behind the scenes, as it were. Go to Comment

I always enjoy reading about other people's sessions, but I wish there was more info. I'm sad to see how few votes these have gotten... For entertainment as well as educational purposes at least, there should be more of these. Go to Comment

I am 95% sure that I've heard the name Discarthia before, in some JPRG no doubt. But now I can't seem to find it... Go to Comment

Memory is a fickle thing. I've named quite a few countries and what not, only to have opened a book I haven't read in ages and learn that I had unknowingly swiped the name. But like I said, I'm not sure on this. Go to Comment

This is just amazing. I love it! Highly creative, no apparent spelling or grammatical errors.

I did find one error though;

"Dwarves are just as fastidious about their appearance as members of other races. True, their tastes are different, but they use their "

That sentence just cuts off. Still, this is a full score from me. Go to Comment

Voted for HoH. Go to Comment

She probably meant that I, as in referring to oneself, is always written with a capital i. Go to Comment

This is a wonderful submission, now I want a bearded cat! Though your dwarfs seem fuzzier by far than mine, mine would eat both rats and insects.

No obvious spelling or grammatical errors, highly creative with lots of goodies. A full score from me. Go to Comment

My first ever HoH vote. Go to Comment

Agreed. This is the internet, be nice to cats! If you were going for a cat-bus vibe, then petting would be a much better idea than opening the poor things. And while you're at it, that whole shove a book into a cat part provokes some disturbing images as well. >.< Go to Comment

Silveressa was the one behind these??? I used to read these all the time over at roleplayingtips, but then they stopped. :( Go to Comment

Only voted. Go to Comment

Good idea, but it could probably have been done in the forums. Anyways, I started rather late. It started with me playing Baldur's Gate 2, from there, I started making my own World. Never did find any players for that World, but what I did end up with was burn-out. I simply tried to flesh out the world too much.

From there though, something was sparked. I've Always enjoyed boardgames, and I ended up buying Talisman. The game itself wasn't very interesting though, but I used the game's encounter decks to create my own customized encounters. I started giving abbilities to the monsters and so on. From there, my first attempt with an RPG with a player started. Using my little brother as a guinea pig, I created a simple World through ad-libbing and strung together encounters. But of course, that wasn't enough, so I started making maps and battle maps. But he soon hit the "level roof" of my little homebrew, and so I noticed the new D&D Boardgame, Wrath of Ashardalon, bought that, and from there started buying 4E books. And that's where I am today. I still regret having started with an ad-lib World, now I'm stuck tying up loose ends in my Campaign and some really dumb names.

The first time as a player though, was in the fullchat of this very site. In a game of paranoia, too bad it ended up only being one single session since MM disappeared. Go to Comment

It's very hard to create new forms of undead, they're such generic creatures. Undead who make cures for poisons, in the settings I know of, undead are normally immune to poison anyways, so why would they need cures?

The subject wasn't all that original, reminds me of Harry Potter in some ways. It did however earn an extra .5 because it was well-written. Go to Comment