Voted. Here are some more typos;
the barbaric races that trying to kill him.
(Besides the forgotten word, I would change, the barbaric races to just; barbarians).
result in the victim sitting down, lieing down
coating the tips of an archer's corps arrows.
(Not sure about this one, but I suppose you meant like a division of Archers? Meaning it should be, archer corp's).
Well, I think it does look kind of messy as it stands. You're off to a good start though by dividing them into categories like Shop signs, but maybe make the Headers for the categories bigger.
I would reset the count though, for each category. And you might want to skip the quote box, it breaks up the flow of the text a bit too much.
All of those linked submissions create a disorganized pattern as well, maybe wait until the end of the text, or the beginning and add the links there, so it looks more uniform?
Edit: Meant to say, until the end of the sentence.Go to Comment
3) Qouar'lanthian Flegxmorrin
Physical Description: A multidimensional distortion with a blue hue.
Recommended only for creatures from and above the fourth, or below the third negative dimension. It requires no sustenance other than ultra violet lighting and leaves no droppings. It moves through both time and space, and because of this any normal return warranties are voided at the moment of purchase. While harmless it is recommended that you keep all extremities away from its event horizon, as the distortion(though only a temporary thing) can be frightening to behold in such an up close and personal way.