A very nice read, it would be interesting to know what created that spark in the first place.
Useful, quite original. No obvious spelling or grammar mistakes, reads easily. Nicely done, full score.
Here a few typos I found;
Apart form total annihilation of its physical form
Or the players are send to tend the garden of a mage
plant in the heart of the dungeon, nothing can stop it from dieing when it's life cycle comes to an end
Voted. Here are some more typos;
the barbaric races that trying to kill him.
(Besides the forgotten word, I would change, the barbaric races to just; barbarians).
result in the victim sitting down, lieing down
coating the tips of an archer's corps arrows.
(Not sure about this one, but I suppose you meant like a division of Archers? Meaning it should be, archer corp's).
Well, I think it does look kind of messy as it stands. You're off to a good start though by dividing them into categories like Shop signs, but maybe make the Headers for the categories bigger.
I would reset the count though, for each category. And you might want to skip the quote box, it breaks up the flow of the text a bit too much.
All of those linked submissions create a disorganized pattern as well, maybe wait until the end of the text, or the beginning and add the links there, so it looks more uniform?
Edit: Meant to say, until the end of the sentence.Go to Comment