Simple, but full of flavor. While specifically mentioning a persona that created them, these could be adaptable to any setting with technology befitting the necessity. I can picture a wave of these just sweeping over a tract of land, leaving nothing alive in it's wake.

I do hope to read more about Sanctum and the Desecrator. Go to Comment

Well done, I like this a lot and its different. Go to Comment

Just voting. My comments have already been stated by others. Go to Comment

The backstory is enough for me to enjoy this item, but the overall flavor sits well with me also. Very nice sub, I hope you expand on it in other posts. Go to Comment

I agree that a demon whip is not a fresh idea, however, I searched the site for another whip and did not see one. So I think its a good idea to post something like this. I don't agree with artifacts being overpowered, this seems pretty nice. Go to Comment

I guess I missed that one, I do think of a whip as more of a ranged weapon though. The distance required between target and user seems to be further than most melee weapons. Just a matter of oppinion I guess. Go to Comment

I can vote now, so here it is. Go to Comment

I like it as a base idea, leaves room for people to expand upon it. Go to Comment

I agree with scrasamax Go to Comment

Nice. Go to Comment

Like I mentioned on Bloodmail, I think that these rings have an interesting backstory that could definately be adapted with some minor changes. Additionally, I have not seen a lot of items dealing with turning people into various undead, especially a Banshee. I like this one a lot.
As for people who say that removing a finger is a small price to pay, I agree. That does not detract from the item in my opinion though. Go to Comment

I like it. Its different. Go to Comment

Found this when I was looking for stuff to use in a game I am about to run, could be an interesting side plot and I think I could easily adapt the backstory with some slight changes. Can't wait for the rest. Go to Comment