Yea I knew this idea wasn't as solid as some others which is why I wanted to practice presentation on it. I've been noticing with my other submissions that a good presentation is what was lacking so I wanted to get some practice in with this one before I moved on to another idea. Go to Comment

You should be a writer... or maybe you are I dunno. I love the presentation of the story. Go to Comment

Highly amusing. I can just imagine seeing a boat walking up on the shore all by itself. Go to Comment

Very well thought out plant. Has a lot of uses and ideas associated with it without being an overpowering item. Go to Comment

Updated: Added a bit more to favored plot Go to Comment

This isn't really meant to be the source of all cursed items. Just a powerful entity who has taken an extreme interest in them. Go to Comment

Backfire might not have been the proper word there. Basically the demon failed his craft check and the item didn't turn out as planned. Think of it as a car manufacturer. Sometimes things just don't always work right. In this case it worked really wrong. Also the item is part of a much bigger thing I'm working on right now called Hell's Caravan. So the item might be a little less corny after you see the rest of the story which I hope to have up in the next couple days. Go to Comment

Very nice story. I think the monsters get unfair treatment at times. Nice to see that they are not always evil just because they have green skin. Go to Comment

Very nice, well rounded item. Go to Comment

The magic/not magic thing: The encasement itself isn't magic. Its basically like a cement mixture she spreads over the victims. Magic is sustaining them, however, since you obviously wouldn't live long encased in cement without food or water... or air for that matter. She can use magic, and will to capture them and hold them for a pose but the encasement is entirely natural. It becomes very hard when dry so flexing a couple muscles won't be able to break out of it. Thanks for the comments so far. Go to Comment

I love it. I'm a big fan of horrific scenes and I'm definetly putting something like this into my world after reading it. Very well done. Go to Comment

Touch overpowered but you do know your horses. And I'm definetly a fan of horses. Go to Comment

Freaking awesome post. I love unusual monsters that don't do the same old stuff and that take special means to kill. Inspiration comes from the strangest places at times. Wonderful idea. Go to Comment

Very well put together society with quite a few uses. Go to Comment

Really like this idea. Going to have to use it in one of my kingdoms somewhere. I like how no one really knows when the ruler changes or who the ruler is for that matter. Go to Comment

Heh I wouldn't mind being a 'guest' in this prison. Sounds rather comfortable even if it is inconvenient to not be able to go where you please. Go to Comment

I can imagine a chain of these opening and doing fairly well if they didn't specialize in the exotic so much. Reminds me of a fantasy 7-11. Go to Comment

I like it. The idea of a sound elemental is great. Go to Comment

I imagine a few of these would be great in a world succumbing to darkness. Something where even the last bastions of goodness are being twisted by evil. Go to Comment

Great items. Too bad the pillars didn't help the maker prevent his mistake (pride). Go to Comment