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Lycanthropy - The Plot
Plots  (Crisis)   (Encounter)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-28 10:44 AM
Yea I knew this idea wasn't as solid as some others which is why I wanted to practice presentation on it. I've been noticing with my other submissions that a good presentation is what was lacking so I wanted to get some practice in with this one before I moved on to another idea. Go to Comment
Beggar's War or Year of the Blood Flag
Systems  (Knowledge/Lore)   (Historical)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-25 09:44 PM
You should be a writer... or maybe you are I dunno. I love the presentation of the story. Go to Comment
Marching Barnacles
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Water)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-26 10:29 AM
Highly amusing. I can just imagine seeing a boat walking up on the shore all by itself. Go to Comment
Arcanis
Lifeforms  (Flora)   (Any)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-25 09:52 PM
Very well thought out plant. Has a lot of uses and ideas associated with it without being an overpowering item. Go to Comment
The Demon Archivist
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-23 09:31 PM
Updated: Added a bit more to favored plot Go to Comment
The Demon Archivist
Plots  (Travel)   (Encounter)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-25 05:00 PM
This isn't really meant to be the source of all cursed items. Just a powerful entity who has taken an extreme interest in them. Go to Comment
The True Demonslayer
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-25 10:18 AM
Backfire might not have been the proper word there. Basically the demon failed his craft check and the item didn't turn out as planned. Think of it as a car manufacturer. Sometimes things just don't always work right. In this case it worked really wrong. Also the item is part of a much bigger thing I'm working on right now called Hell's Caravan. So the item might be a little less corny after you see the rest of the story which I hope to have up in the next couple days. Go to Comment
Emma Verney
NPCs  (Scenario Based)   (Knowledge/Lore)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-24 11:13 PM
Very nice story. I think the monsters get unfair treatment at times. Nice to see that they are not always evil just because they have green skin. Go to Comment
The Jovian Blade
Items  (Melee Weapons)   (Magical)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-20 10:33 AM
Very nice, well rounded item. Go to Comment
The Sculptress
NPCs  (Major)   (Artistic/Performance)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-17 10:39 PM
The magic/not magic thing: The encasement itself isn't magic. Its basically like a cement mixture she spreads over the victims. Magic is sustaining them, however, since you obviously wouldn't live long encased in cement without food or water... or air for that matter. She can use magic, and will to capture them and hold them for a pose but the encasement is entirely natural. It becomes very hard when dry so flexing a couple muscles won't be able to break out of it. Thanks for the comments so far. Go to Comment
The Menagerie
Society/ Organizations  (Criminal/Espionage)   (Regional)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-17 10:52 PM
I love it. I'm a big fan of horrific scenes and I'm definetly putting something like this into my world after reading it. Very well done. Go to Comment
Falani Tersk
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Plains)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-25 09:43 PM
Touch overpowered but you do know your horses. And I'm definetly a fan of horses. Go to Comment
The Ink Drinkers
Lifeforms  (Ethereal)   (City/ Ruin)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-06-07 05:04 PM
Freaking awesome post. I love unusual monsters that don't do the same old stuff and that take special means to kill. Inspiration comes from the strangest places at times. Wonderful idea. Go to Comment
The Duelists of Aoh Chiane
Society/ Organizations  (Combative)   (Country/ State)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-06-18 04:16 PM
Very well put together society with quite a few uses. Go to Comment
Mask of The Monarch
Items  (Clothes)   (Non-Magical)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-05-20 10:50 AM
Really like this idea. Going to have to use it in one of my kingdoms somewhere. I like how no one really knows when the ruler changes or who the ruler is for that matter. Go to Comment
Baldamont Castle
Locations  (Fortification)   (Plains)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-06-22 10:46 AM
Heh I wouldn't mind being a 'guest' in this prison. Sounds rather comfortable even if it is inconvenient to not be able to go where you please. Go to Comment
Salt and Herb Shoppe
Locations  (Establishment)   (Any)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-06-05 10:09 PM
I can imagine a chain of these opening and doing fairly well if they didn't specialize in the exotic so much. Reminds me of a fantasy 7-11. Go to Comment
Unknown Death
Lifeforms  (Third Kingdom)   (Other)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-06-10 05:33 PM
I like it. The idea of a sound elemental is great. Go to Comment
Dark Unicorn
Lifeforms  (Fauna)   (Other)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-06-05 10:04 PM
I imagine a few of these would be great in a world succumbing to darkness. Something where even the last bastions of goodness are being twisted by evil. Go to Comment
The Pillars of the Alchemist
Items  (Home/ Personal)   (Magical)
Feraltetsuo's comment on 2006-06-05 09:35 PM
Great items. Too bad the pillars didn't help the maker prevent his mistake (pride). Go to Comment
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