Thats caust I posted it on one of the forums way back so I could make better. But I'm not a good story teller and tried evey every thing I could think of to make it better and it didn't work (AD&D the only game I know). So sents you so good at this, why don't you make it non-D&D and give it a better back story then!!!!! Go to Comment
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